Naruto: Awakening a Zanpakuto, Starting with Senbonzakura

You are like Senbonzakura! You just have to specialize! ! ! If you get to the level of Peak Byakuya, and then get a Hongyoku, or a Star Explosion, it won't be a problem. What's the point of getting so many Zanpakutos? ?

Every Zanpakuto is very powerful, but people who write books like this want to write a little bit about each one, and then it becomes a hit. You might as well create one yourself.

Most of the fanfics in Death God Changing Worlds have the protagonist holding multiple Zanpakutō. This routine is also played by the official Death God. Many book friends like to say that the Zanpakutō is the embodiment of the soul, and one person holding multiple swords is inconsistent with the setting. Therefore, it is better to directly set the protagonist to start with Yanluo Kadenen (nothing) Side effect version), this thing released in the official novel can imitate all Zanpakutō. If you feel that the progress is too fast, add a weapon spirit and a training space to the Yanluo Kageden. Only when the proficiency of that sword is enough can it be imitated with the Yanluo Kageden. The settings are all alive, and it makes sense. Who wants the four nobles to fix the bug in Yanluo Jingdian after the official thousand-year bloody war is over?

When I saw Kakashi and Obito saving Kakashi and Obito, it was quite funny. They were obviously rescuing people, but there was no sense of tension at all. They insisted on filling the cup, saying that they would try their abilities without using the Zanpakutō, and then they beat them up and immediately opened the Zanpakutō to kill others in seconds. They looked like clowns, but they were still king. I felt that this part was not so embarrassing whether it was using Kidō to complete the second, or directly releasing the Zanpakutō. One second I said I want to try it on my own, and the next second I said, "Save me Zanpakuto..." And the previous article also gave me the feeling that the protagonist is a masochist, and he won't understand it until he is beaten a few times and feels uncomfortable.

What more messy Zanpakutō is there, omniscient and omnipotent 🙂

Post and write what you want. If you look at the comment section, there is no operation and maintenance. Serious literature will be scolded all over the Internet, including the palace of literature. Isn't it bullshit?

I don't understand why you worship the Hokage as your teacher, and you can't learn ninjutsu. Are you trying to learn how to be a conspirator? Or do you want to learn from Aizen, and then turn around and stand in the sky?

I feel that it lacks a bit of vividness, and the protagonist has a sense of distance, as if he is reading a functional history book, not a novel. Many events can still be unfolded. It is a bit fast to solve the previous problems and provide more details. Apart from these, it is very interesting to watch. I am looking forward to the subsequent plot development and more detailed plot characterization. Good luck to the author!

The introduction is so stiff, and you also remembered that dance shouldn't be something similar to modal particles 🤔 How come you are really transformed into the King of Dance now? So abstract. This should be similar to what you want to say. Or, fellow Taoist, please stay and start like this.

The description of the protagonist's character is too dry, and the protagonist's strength is also unclear. The plot feels choppy and stiff, and it is very tiring to read more than fifty chapters. The main problem is that the character description ability is too poor, except for the protagonist, who is a simple-minded robot with a single personality.