Under One Person: I, Wu Liuqi

The settings are pretty good. My personal point of view is that I can't accept the mismatched setting when I started with nothing. Everyone wants the protagonist in the Eight Magic Techniques and joins in without knowing anything. What should I do if the company puts you under house arrest?

May I ask if the protagonist is so weak, why would he take the initiative to provoke the Wang family? Isn't he afraid of death?

I feel that the protagonist's character is not good, and his character is the same as that of Tang San. Forget it if you have no gratitude, your mind is not clear enough.

There are a few places that are a bit strange. The protagonist is being targeted by Quan Xing because he was found to have survived the scene where Zhang Huaiyi fought before his death. As a result, the company couldn't keep him alive and wanted to send him to Baiyunguan. However, for the sake of the protagonist's future and safety, it makes sense to send him to apprentice to learn skills and protect him at the same time, but the author didn't write it that way. Baiyunguan Lu Lingling is actually a day student? Do Taoist and lay disciples attend day classes? Isn't it a little too weird? Then it was Lu Linglong's birthday and she invited the protagonist to a banquet at the Lu family. Then the protagonist practiced swordsmanship for a day... Just practice swordsmanship, and then the protagonist was kidnapped by a Quanxing person in the Lu family? ? ? How come Baiyun Temple can protect the protagonist, but the Lu family can come and go as they please? It's a bit outrageous

Personally, the book as a whole is pretty good so far! However, it is still a bit stiff, such as the advancement of the plot and the creation of conflicts that are too stiff! There is an obvious design, and the deliberate feeling is somewhat strong. The characters are well drawn, with flesh and blood. Have your own emotions. The inner drama is also written just right. But it seems a bit uncoordinated and unmatched to match the plot. The character of the protagonist should be a calm and strong person with a very clear sense of his own position. Since I am a time traveler, I know the plot. We should seek good fortune and avoid misfortune, and avoid many unnecessary conflicts such as Wang Ge's plot. In this way, it can be more consistent with the protagonist's personality and positioning. The article should flow more smoothly. (Only my personal opinion)

The writing is average, with a lot of poisonous points. There are also many shortcomings, but if you can support it, support it. After all, there are very few people who write Wuliuqi. 😂 Try to get the next book to practice your skills. Just write it in whatever way you can.

If you are a eunuch, just tell me directly. If you are going to stop working for a few days during the New Year, please make it clear. Do you have professional ethics?

I'm going to take her away today, let's see who dares to stop me!

Although Quan Xing is a bad person, he is basically a veteran of the Jianghu. Quan Xing looks like a dazed young man, and his mental retardation is a bit serious!

The magic sword has a thousand blades, it only attacks but does not defend, it is unparalleled in the world

It can be regarded as the fairy grass seedling in the fanfic of "Under One Person". The plot is fast-paced and there is not too much elaboration. It is a type of fight that starts when there is a disagreement. The control is also very cool. In addition, the writing is also good. If you are a book lover, you can check it out.

I still don't understand, why does the protagonist confront the company?

The combat power of Wu Liuqi's work can cut mountains and islands. It feels like you can almost walk sideways as long as you don't encounter the old master or any buggy characters.

Is the protagonist destined to be a eunuch? ? ? ? ? ? ? Boy's life? ? ? 😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅

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The pace is okay and worth watching