China Entertainment 07, I Am Really an Idol

The writing is very good, starting from the 07 game, it is eye-catching. Most of the other 07 articles are about the beginning of the confrontation with the Dragon Godmother. The author does not fall into the cliche. With the current plot, it will definitely become popular! ! ! Don't be an eunuch. The 0713 article I finally read a few days ago + the article about Hua'er and the Young Man's business venture failed halfway through, which wasted so much of my emotions. So, you wrote very well, continue.

I'll give you a thumbs up. Just rewarded me, so stop updating it for me.

The characters are interesting, the writing style is witty, and the male protagonist of the entertainment novel is quite good, but I don't know if he is an old man or an old street critic. Let me just say one thing, whether it is describing the protagonist's appearance, singing skills or anything else, the words used should be as realistic as possible. Still be careful to use less emotional words, especially more extreme emotional words. Things like horror and sluggishness are too extreme, and once used too much, it is easy to form a writing habit. This kind of inertial thinking is not easy to change, and you will subconsciously shoot when writing. Whether it is using the current hot words on the Internet, witty sayings, or even occasional professional terms, you must first learn to replace the fixed formulas in your mind, and then use them flexibly to make it your own. In reality, most people's attention will be distracted if one thing is repeated for a long time. How can I describe the protagonist doing it subtly? For example, when the judges listen to the protagonist singing for the first time, you can write about the reaction of the judges with facial expressions when the protagonist walks in, and the reaction of the professional judges who were originally listless when singing. As soon as the handsome judge waited for the protagonist to come in, he unconsciously sat up straight so that he could see the protagonist's face clearly. The professional judges hum along and follow the beat unconsciously to show the immersion and appeal of the protagonist's voice, and write about the specialness of the protagonist's voice and the level of appearance. Let readers objectively feel how handsome the protagonist is, and let them make up their own minds instead of you subjectively writing it out. Of course, it is another matter for the protagonist to make his own jokes. This allows the protagonist to speak out from his subjective perspective, take the readers to play with the jokes, or even create his own jokes. After all, he is writing an entertainment novel. I haven't hit anything for a long time. I just hit these messy things and just treat them like I'm careless.

Don't like this one? Peers, the older you are, the more beautiful you are

There is too much daily nonsense, which makes people look dull. You don't write about the talent show at all, you only write about daily life, and you treat the protagonist as an all-round talent. Aren't you tired? We are tired of looking at it, and once you enter the entertainment industry, you should not act like a showman. There is so much traffic, why don't you act? Isn't the main character in the industry just to be popular and make money? Why don't you act in this and that? It's already 20 chapters, there is no entertainment industry content at all, it's all daily life, it looks a bit like that, that's it!

In your daily life, you talk a lot of nonsense.

It's a bit plain, keep writing, the quality is okay

The author is so small, why don't we give it a try 🙂

Just change your name. Changed to tonight, the difference is five hundred Maybe it will become popular 🔥

Very well written. Writing can also be used. There is no system, it is just strengthened in memory. This is good. The protagonist's own plan is reasonable at present. It depends on who the heroine is in the future. Multiple female protagonists or single female protagonist. If there are multiple female protagonists. Just don't exceed 3. If there are too many, it will be easy to become a stereotype. Zhang Hanyun. Deng Ziqi. Jing Tian. Liu Yifei. Liu Shishi. Chen Duling.

Is this your soul transmigration or fetal transmutation memory awakening? Or a parallel world sibling?

It's so beautiful, I can't get enough of it! !

Not bad, good food and grass 😍