I Have a Treasure Bag of Heaven for Mortals to Cultivate Immortality

Don't use a harem, just write a better plot, the erotic drama is boring.

Why are there so many novels published by mortals that mostly contain false spiritual roots, useless spiritual roots, or at most three spiritual roots? Mortals themselves have elements of Gou Daoliu. If the biggest logic of Tianlinggen is unreasonable: if you can reach the peak of pill formation safely in the sect without relying on elixirs, why go out and wander around? This makes it impossible to write many books. There is no need to fight in the forbidden area and seize opportunities. Who can guarantee safety in a trial like the Bloody Forbidden Area? Not to mention relying on one or two talismans, Nangong Wan, a golden elixir with a life magic weapon, cannot defeat the Mo Jiao alone. If she is the only one to fight against the Mo Jiao, she will not die but will be seriously injured And the most dangerous thing in the forbidden area is of course people. There is actually very little difference in strength between the monks in the Qi training stage and the foundation building stage, because their magic power is too limited and their killer talisman is too slow to activate. Taking Han Laomo as an example, it would take a long time to kill a senior brother Lu. If it was a closed environment like a cave, facing three or four senior brothers with strength and even talismans, and opponents like Tianleizi, even Han Laomo would have to die Nowadays, many fans make the forbidden area look like a tourist, which is simply ridiculous! There are quite a few people who move in groups in the forbidden area. If your back is blocked, it will be a dead end

The first book is not a harem novel. Some people say that if you write a fanfic and don't include the women who appear in the book, you might as well read the original novel. I only agree with this statement half way. I know there is a book that includes all women, and they make money, but I'm sorry! I really can't accept the behavior of withdrawing from a woman when I see one. Young people like someone and hope to share the joys and sorrows with them. Middle-aged people prefer a partner who can understand each other and can talk freely. Saying that they are not in the same channel and have no common topics is a sign that you don't like others. This novel is my practice work. I will not write about the harem just to please readers. In addition, the heroine is still thinking, why are she still thinking! Since it's not a harem, I'm still thinking about it. Writing fan fiction is to train yourself to see if you have the talent to write novels, so fellow Taoists who want to read the harem can check out other ones. I am very grateful to all the fellow Taoists who invested in me and gave me votes. Thank you very much.

He actually refused to accept someone like Nangong Wan, Ling Yuling, or someone like Nangong Wanling or Ling Yuling. Withdraw

I just said that I always felt like something was wrong. I finally found it after looking at it. The protagonist is resource-hungry, but you always look for wild techniques? If you have resources and good spiritual roots, why don't you find a method that will make your journey smoother if you go directly to your master? Isn't there Hongfu? Is it necessary to find those fancy wild exercises? Most of the techniques on the outside are defective. Maybe the problem inside is not resources but other conditions? Is it inappropriate for the author to use the trick with some plug-ins on the protagonist with resource plug-ins? ? Normally speaking, if I were the protagonist, I would definitely not abandon the sect and go out to pick up leaks. Resource hanging, resource hanging, what is resource hanging? Please think deeply. In addition, the main character's skill in cultivating immortals and choosing weapons really tickled my itch, I'm so excited! ! Come on, come on, come on! !

If the heroine has Dong Xuan'er or Hong Fu, then goodbye. These two are not very helpful to you in the early stage, let alone being a drag in the later stage. Hong Fu is just a golden elixir cultivator. As long as the protagonist runs to the Sea of ​​Chaos Stars, he can easily reach the golden elixir realm within a few decades. Do you still need to see Hong Fu's eyes? Dong Xuan'er's proper vase may still be a vase with red apricots hanging over the wall. Hong Fu is a woman who hates handsome men or has been fucked by a hermaphrodite. If such a thing can be attracted to her, then I have nothing to say except that there are always some people with unique tastes. (What can Hong Fu give to the protagonist? Nothing. The things Hong Fu gave are not what the protagonist needs at all. The protagonist is much richer than Hong Fu relying on the golden finger. Moreover, the protagonist gave Hong Fu a thousand-year elixir. Are the things Hong Fu gave half the value of this elixir?)

The protagonist Goldfinger doesn't know whether he copied Han Li's little green bottle or the towering liquid of creation in the little green bottle, and he doesn't explain it.

When talking about Hongfu, we have to talk about Dong Xuan'er. The original work said that she was a descendant of Hongfu's Hongchen clan. In fact, many fans will know the problem with this statement if they take a closer look. Hong Fu has introduced in the background that she doesn't like men with good looks and smooth tongues because she was raped by a scumbag, and this scumbag is the old devil Yunlu of the Hehuan Sect. During the Immortal Ascension Conference, she brought Dong Xuan'er into the sect because the original work was written in Han Li's Foundation Establishment Pill. This woman is practicing top-notch skills. Well, that means the reconciliation of yin and yang. However, the young woman Hong Fu is not a disciple of the sect. Then she found Master Han Li, but the girl was rejected by Han Li because of her poor performance in the sect. Then Hong Fu asked Han Li and Dong Xuan'er to go to Yan's house under the pretext of cultivating feelings. Then she was robbed by the devil. In the later part of the original work, she recognized Old Demon Yunlu. Here I will focus on [Who is Old Demon Yunlu? Yuanying monk, what is Dong Xuan'er's realm? It's only the foundation building period. How can two people recognize each other without knowing anything about them? Furthermore, if a demonic monk captured a woman, he would have to collect the tonic before killing her. Moreover, Hong Fu was too calm when he got the news that his descendants were captured, and did not look for it at all. The anime just made the relationship between the two people clear.

Author, harem 😁

After looking at it, it didn't look good. Probably a eunuch,