Pirate: I, a Cultivator, Rule the World

. . . I had originally deleted this book from my bookshelf, but after seeing that the author was willing to correct the typos and grammatical errors, I added it back. After all, there are many people these days who are too glassy and refuse to listen to good and helpful suggestions. This is rare 🙂

I have a plan to change the name of the magnetic field rotation to Yuanci Shenguang, and change the protagonist's name to Bai Wunan. Is there any idea?

It's not satisfying, and I don't know what the main character's purpose is. And he's also young.

Cultivation of immortals is not suitable for pirate novels. Cultivation of immortals is traditionally slow. People in Pirates have gone from ordinary people to the peak of combat power in a few years or more. Cultivation of immortals has only just started after more than ten years. Unless it is a brainless and cool novel that reaches a big level in two or three years, but this kind of novel will definitely die.

Scholar O'Hara feels that you deserve it, and you don't have the strength to touch things you are not qualified to know. If you don't destroy who you want to destroy, nuclear weapons are something your small island is qualified to research.

It's a bit interesting. If you use Xiuxian to write about pirates, the combat power is not easy to compare with the realm, and it is easy to cause controversy. Of course, the most important thing is to plan the plot and outline well, and handle the relationship between plot and tasks well. The creativity is good. I hope the author can write this book better. Come on!

Original text: In this way, Robin can also share the pressure of arrest and arrest from the world government and navy. Have you ever thought carefully about where Robin came from since you have so many abilities? Aren't you adding to her pressure?

Why are you spreading this immortal cultivation technique so randomly? If you can just say it to your wife and son, no matter how much stuff you have, it will definitely be spread by others. You don't need ordinary people with high-end combat power to know about it. Moreover, your ability to cultivate immortality is your specialty, and it is not the case if others have it. Also, how do you plan to write about your combat power? Cultivation itself is slow, but being strong is really strong. Can you control your strength? If it's weak, it's disgusting. If it's not strong enough, it's even more disgusting. It's like exaggerating One Piece.

The writing is very good and the descriptions of fights are good. Brother, I read it with my hands in my hands. One Piece is a comic about my childhood. There are many elements of my childhood in it. You combine the oriental fantasy styles such as immortals, alchemy, and weaponry techniques into it, and it seems nondescript. It's better to just write fantasy... And the combat power in the early stage has begun to collapse. Personally, I think it's great to write about golden finger internal training, physical training, and main sword skills. Other elements of cultivating immortals are not needed, including titles..., Otherwise it will be strange no matter how you look at it 😅

After reading the previous part, there has always been an emphasis on the magical power of cultivators, but almost no emphasis on physical exercise. Will there be more content on physical fitness in the future?

After reading these chapters, I feel that it is no longer attractive. The protagonist is really incompetent and loves to show off even though he is not capable. You want to become an immortal, you want to strive for hegemony, you want to overthrow the world government. You think that others can't do anything to you when you are hiding on an empty island. After three lifetimes, you have lived like this. You don't know what the "palm technique" falling from the sky is.

Before it's too late, the protagonist's name is changed to Bai Wu. He will never change it again. Bai Wu is actually the name of the protagonist at the beginning of this book. Unexpectedly, he changed it back in the end. Sorry if it affects reading. Hakutake, the emperor of the sea behind, the revolutionary army has Emperor Yan, who makes many civilians look forward to it. It is not too much to say that the protagonist is Baidi. The world of pirates is dark, and the word "white" is consistent with the protagonist's main line of overthrowing the rule of the world government. The word "" represents suppression by force, which also shows that the path taken by the protagonist is domineering, suppressing the world by force.

I finally understand why I can't read it and I don't want to delete it from the bookshelf. The author's title is catchy. It starts with the King of Heaven, but the author's way of writing is hard to read. Many of the plots are incomprehensible, and the protagonist is not smart enough, unlike a time traveler who knows the plot. As for why it was not deleted from the bookshelf, I find the author's persistence very interesting.

"One Piece: Becoming the King of the World from the Age of Rocks" If you are short on books, you can read this book. It is a very interesting and novel pirate fanfic. This book stretches the timeline to before Rocks attacks the Valley of the Gods. The protagonist Li Yuan has his own domineering body-tempering secret "Sword God Body Tempering Art". Rise up in the Rocks Pirates, become a cadre, and plunder the property of the Celestial Dragons in the Valley of Gods. After the Battle of the Valley of the Gods, participate in the New World Hegemony and occupy Wano Country. Become the world's greatest swordsman and dominate the new world with Whitebeard and others. The protagonist has four children, Stephens-Gane, Wei Zhuang, Esdeath, and Chi Tong. They are all great swordsmen, competing with Hawkeye and Red Hair...

I want to build a KouKou group. I'm super interested in this subject!

Immortal cultivators are worse than cultivators. Cultivators just copy homework, cultivators develop subjects, wizards study subjects, and magicians do homework.

General's frozen sea, how did you compare to a small Qi refiner? At least the golden elixir is almost the same

O'Hara is not as good as Doflamingo. He only threatens the world government if he masters it. For example, the national treasure should be the King of Heaven. Do you, O'Hara, understand all the 800 years? Before the atomic bomb exploded, there was no country with nuclear weapons.

I'm still an old virgin at the end.

Is the Kingdom of Sorbe in the East China Sea?