Immortality Starts with Double Pupils

Gee, all of the author's novels are full of daddy flavor. Everyone in the novel is smart and understanding, but well, they are just acting and pretending. As a result, it turns out that the author is still the father

Gods, immortals, demons, and demons have all come out, is this still low-level martial arts?

Having double pupils is the path to invincibility, so why bother working hard in the officialdom?

The introduction is too noisy, longevity, demon, double pupils, a bit high-end, sudden, catcher, gold medal, silver medal, low-end

Brother, you yourself said that Chongtong is a sage who studies literature and martial arts. Shouldn't you take it out as soon as you get an opportunity in the mezzanine? You still have to master Niuma Boxing before you can use it. And then you just put it down without knowing the word? ? ? The first poisonous point is when your father tells you career strategies. Disgust flashes in your eyes. You are an adult who traveled through time, not a child anymore. The second poisonous point is that I had a premonition that this gold-leaf brocade book was a top-notch technique and then didn't study it. The third poisonous point is to say goodbye to the leader of the Shennong Gang, "Then I will say goodbye and leave." Are you speaking in the first person or the third person? Also, when I traveled back in time, I had a three-year-old daughter. I should fill in the hole with a sentence of concern about missing my family, or else don't mention my daughter. The summary is that the subject matter and background have unlimited potential, but the writing style needs to be strengthened and strengthened.

It's particularly unreasonable. A waiting arrest can actually see the gang boss of an area directly. I think it can only be the younger brother. After all, the boss is a warrior, and he bothers his boss with everything. How is it possible? You can't meet him unless the county boss orders it, or the arrest can come out. Also, why do gangsters give money to gangsters? They must have paid filial piety from above. Why should I give it to you? At most, I think you have the skin to step back a little bit.

The first time I read the author's book was 8 years ago. After so long, I feel like I have regressed.

Empress. Disgusting. It's a woman who doesn't rely on Wu Zetian. Develop towards stupidity and sweetness

If you open the introduction and catalog at the beginning and there is the Empress, you will not be able to view it directly.

Selling dog meat with sheep's head, the title is immortal, after reading two chapters, he is a crime solver, and he is still a hypocrite. He eats and drinks for free, collects protection fees, and enforces the law impartially. Funny

They are all reading novels, and they are still teaching me the ways of the world. If I love teaching so much, why don't I become a teacher?

I feel like ten years ago, the writings written by others were better than yours.

Nowadays, there are still people who challenge to write the Virgin Mary. I can only say that the author is generous. . . I'll withdraw first

Warriors are bloodless, and it is even more strange to want to write about the principles of officialdom. The author who practices martial arts seems to be a holy mother, but not quite a holy mother. In short, he looks nothing like a warrior, not like an official. It is very awkward.

There are a lot of personal things mixed in with the world, such as quoting scriptures and the like, which is a bit of a drama all the time.

Pig's feet are really pig's feet. Without the protection of the author, no amount of life would be enough.

It's this shark-arm-shaped pig's foot again. He has been a eunuch for two lifetimes without knowing anything about the world.

The words do not convey the meaning, and the preface does not match the postscript. It just looks miserable.

What did the protagonist do before he was reborn? He was a state-owned enterprise and he knew how to perform autopsies? ? ?

Put on a fantasy skin to solve the case. What do you think? Martial arts is not practiced. There is no reward for solving the case. Boring 😶. The first case is to find the son of a man who has done many evil things. Solving the case doesn't feel any better. One chapter is all about reasoning. Boring to watch

If Jiang Li hadn't been Jiang Que's son, I would have said that you are a fucking idiot 😅, withdraw, withdraw from the trap

I don't know why, but it's a bit too harem-y. It's always been written that girls are more covetous. Personally, I feel that in this extraordinary world, girls shouldn't be so covetous. After all, many people say that when boys and girls' physical abilities are at the same level, society may return to a matriarchal society.

Haha, let's open a new book.

Now that the Dream Broken Knife is available, when will NTR Tauren Yellow Hair be released?

Goldfinger should change it, don't call it Chongtong.

This book is written very realistically. When the father talks to the protagonist about worldly things, the protagonist resists because the protagonist wants to make decisions for himself. The main character went through the police investigation to see the rules of the workplace and to protect himself. Revealing talent is to provide better training conditions and lay a good foundation for becoming a martial saint. The protagonist has too many talents, many of which are not developed to the limit. When the talents are developed to the limit, he may become the supreme.

Brother, I won't criticize you. The subject matter is well chosen. The first few chapters are okay, but the later chapters are incoherent, and the content is a bit wrong. It's like using things to describe people, and it has no charm to attract people to read.

He is actually the same author as Zheng Zhi Tian World

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From the introduction, I think the author looks like a young man? Do you feel anything in the text?