Starting from the Seizure of the Throne in Kowloon

The author's writing style is too poor, the creativity is very good, but the author doesn't grasp the plot and setting well, the writing is a bit broken, very scattered, the logic is illogical, it is not exciting enough, and there is no explosive point! There are more oral pleasures!

The introduction is very attractive, but the content is relatively simple and hard to read.

My IQ has been insulted. What did I write at the beginning? In the world of high martial arts, I want to save the world with literature, but I want to eat shit. What on earth is the protagonist going to do? He appears here and there, and does it there. Does he want to improve his strength, world peace, or be a bad guy? You are neither a bad guy nor a bad guy. Why do you want to practice martial arts? Why does the protagonist live?

After being a Shennong for a while, he was poisoned to death in the first few chapters. The moment I was caught by some bandits, I started to lose my wits. I was poisoned on the spot and wrote this comment to warn future generations.

It's a bit toxic, the relationship between Sanhu and the protagonist progresses too fast. Why do they want to help the protagonist fight against the killer? Especially that woman, the protagonist treats him like a subordinate. There is also the Bronze Medal Killer who has the poster's order, so this thing is too low-level. In terms of martial arts, we don't know why the protagonist wants to learn it, but Sanhu just lets the protagonist learn everything. And why the three foxes have the innate technique, I hope the author can add it in the future. I don't think it's as good as the last book. Although I didn't read much of the last book, it can be said that the two books are the same in terms of conception.

The intelligence is touching and I really can't stand it! ! !

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Seeing that he was persuaded to quit in Chapter 214, the protagonist took more than 200 guards with the lowest cultivation level to Baiyin County to serve as the county magistrate. Then all forces in the county did not respond. Later, the Qin family with only an ordinary grandmaster came out. Because the protagonist did not agree to help solve the case, the Qin family was The middle-aged son of the grand master jumped out and shouted at the protagonist, "Bold, you are a small county magistrate..." Because the protagonist was offended, the maid next to her showed an aura stronger than that of the grand master of the Qin family. After rejecting it again, the grand master of the Qin family showed an "angry" dark color in his eyes. Oh my gosh! I have always emphasized that this is a world where martial arts is respected, and the strong cannot be humiliated. But this kind of stupid plot appears here. Is it because the reputation of the protagonist who is number one on the genius list is not useful, or is his previous record false? Or maybe the Qin family father and son are mentally retarded and only see the identity of the protagonist, the county magistrate, but nothing else? For the sake of the plot, I was forced to lower my wits. When I saw this, I felt so disgusted that I couldn't help but feel unhappy. It seems that my drug resistance as a bookworm of more than ten years is still not satisfactory, so I bid farewell, colleagues.

The 10,000th vote was cast by me. Wouldn't the author consider adding more details? 😁😁

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The author just described a grand scheme of politics as hacking each other on the street, or one person hacking from the street to the end of the street! Even Brother Haonan knows that living in the world relies on loyalty to make money and have many brothers. The protagonist has been in the officialdom for several years and doesn't even have a close confidant! Can you imagine a deputy mayor and public security bureau man and a group of horsemen hacking each other on the street? It's so beautiful that I dare not look at it! ! !

Kowloon seizes the direct descendant? This has nothing to do with Kowloon winning the bottom! I've read more than two hundred pictures, but I haven't seen anything related to the title of the book? When I first read it, I thought it was the first world that the protagonist traveled through, the Infinite Saga Kowloon Seizes the Inheritance 🤫, but now I realize that this is another pretentious series that sells dog meat with a sheep's head!

Is it true that any book can be read now?

Chapter 1 is extremely poisonous. A bandit could actually read and knew that officials were suing him? The protagonist knows that the world is dangerous but he doesn't follow the official path (there are no mountain bandits) and he doesn't go with the caravan? Didn't you hire a bodyguard? ? ? This IQ? Speechless

Anyway, I was addicted to you after reading it Why did you write such a rubbish for the main character? A prodigy with a golden finger, who investigates cases all day long, why don't you build your own power, and I can kill whoever the hell I want, from beginning to end, and let you investigate me, who dares? This is ancient times, what kind of case are you investigating? Running like a dog all day long, running here and there. Do you really think that Bao Zheng and the like in ancient times were investigating cases all day long? You have read too many novels, right? Look who are the people investigating crimes in modern times? Who are those people above?

After reading dozens of chapters, I was persuaded to quit the Qian family case. I found out that the Qian family committed the crime, leaving only two aunts and one son. Damn... I'm still trying to figure out who the murderer is.

I feel that the level settings of the skills are as poisonous as those in the novels I have read before and now. The yellow-level skills are comparable to the Xuan-level skills, and the earth-level skills are comparable to the heaven-level skills. Then, after practicing, the yellow-level skills are much more powerful than the earth-level skills, and the earth-level skills are much more powerful than the sky-level skills. The poison in the poison

I always feel that the author forcibly prevents the protagonist from upgrading. The best part of this book is the various martial arts. The investigation of the case is not interesting at all. It is like adding a chopped green onion to the soup of the century as a garnish, which makes the taster feel uncomfortable.

It can poison people to death for several times. The plot is like a sitcom. It develops meticulously and jumps suddenly. There is no shaping of each character at all. Each character is given a name.

The first one decisively persuades you to quit. The dialogue is neither vulgar nor foreign, which is embarrassing. Also, a document for external transfer was actually issued by the Ministry of Household Affairs. Although it is a novel, you don't even have the most basic common sense. You are writing Mao!

It feels like you are no longer the person you are. Has your pen name been sold?

Doesn't anyone feel that every one of the author's books uses extremely frivolous language?

I can't stand watching the Qian family case anymore! Forget the flaws in the early stages and just pretend that the time-travel mind has not changed. For example, when the Ministry of Household Affairs declares one's identity, one person returns to his hometown in fine clothes, and there is no entourage when he takes office (don't you find a few fellow villagers to be your entourage when you take office? When you want to be an official, people in your village are not allowed to rush to get there? You don't want to give the whole job to the people in the same village?). When the main case came to the Qian Mansion case, the third child died in the cell, and he was definitely dead after eating the food sent by the fourth aunt, so you let the fourth aunt go? The Qian family is dying and only the fourth aunt and a child are left. You just look at the fingerprints and ignore it? ! ! The higher-ups were pressing for solving the case, but you just ignored your own principles (that little fish story) and found a scapegoat to take the blame? ! ! !

Qidian's recommendations are becoming more and more poisonous now. They push everything on them, and they almost blinded me.

Collapse, the map has not been changed, the combat power has collapsed, one realm after another pops up, you think the grand master is awesome, sorry, there are heavenly beings, you think heavenly beings are awesome, thousands of heavenly beings, you say they are awesome or not.

The protagonist is a piece of shit. He also likes to be picky and complain about everything. You can't watch this kind of garbage. It will kill you if you watch it.

The rest of this novel is pretty good, but your technological development is a bit too confusing. In the past few years, you have been able to build an excavator with me. This is a bit disgusting. In a few years, you might as well lift all nuclear bombs. In the past few years, you have developed with me and developed from ancient times to an excavator. Are you kidding me?

When writing a crime-solving story, you must at least have a high level of intelligence and be calm when things happen. Although it is a martial arts world, strength is the basis, but the IQ of the pig's feet fluctuates. One moment I am reckless, and the other moment I am cowardly. I just write whatever I want. Although it is a martial arts novel, at least the world view must be more rigorous.