A Passing Visitor to Konoha

Are the main character and Hinata a couple? (I agree 🐶)

First, the title is a bit too literary and not really suitable for Naruto fanfiction. I remember an author friend telling me that it's quite difficult to change the novel's title after signing a contract, so leaving it as it is actually fine. The literary style can differentiate it from other Naruto fanfiction on the market and attract readers.

No one's leaving a review, so I'll write one myself. (Sigh) This is my first time writing an online novel. Before writing, I watched some posts and videos. Only after writing did I realize that the opening is very important, otherwise, it won't keep readers engaged. I didn't have any grand ambitions for this novel. Just a few points.

The language is distinctive, and the storytelling is comprehensive, demonstrating a deep literary foundation.

There's a suspicion of protagonist abuse. Hinata is currently missing with a severed arm, and the protagonist's later actions seem to be driven by impotent rage. Since leaving the village for a mission, the protagonist's combat power has been a mystery; it seems that no matter who the enemy is, he gets beaten bloody before suddenly unleashing his full power.

There aren't any major problems otherwise, but this system seems to have a lot of potential pitfalls 🥵 First, a fully data-driven system always gives people the feeling of being in a vat of brains; Secondly, the character abilities given by the system are rather niche (I apologize if I'm just ignorant), which leaves many people confused about the protagonist's abilities and makes the fight scenes…

He's already so powerful he can shatter the void, yet he still has to suppress his strength; it's so frustrating to watch. Might as well just go somewhere else and have some fun!

Girls don't write about fight scenes; I personally find it uncomfortable. Creating clones or substitutions when attacked? That's impossible; even fighting seven opponents at once is out of the question. Orochimaru's skin-shedding substitution technique is the most powerful; even severe attacks can cause injury or death. A genin creating clones or substitutions when attacked? Without prior preparation, they'd be dead countless times over. Most girls simply don't have a knack for fighting.

Why suddenly uninstall the system? What was the point of the previous 60 chapters' setup regarding the system?

That's very well written, keep it up!!!