Tantric Family to Divine Dynasty

The setting may be rigorous, which is a big advantage, but the writing skills and story interest are lacking, and it's not very gripping. It's like an academic paper, it has its value, but most people don't have time to read it. This is my feeling after reading more than 20 chapters. I don't know what will happen next.

This is a book review 👀₍˄·͈༝·͈˄*₎◞ ̑̑

Western fantasy version of "Xuanjian Immortal Clan"?😏😏

The writing is awesome. Is it the old eunuch from the outside station?

Spiritual boiling! I have taken another step forward on the road to knowledge! Carmen!

Thirteen long steps to ascend to the gods The road to divine sacrifice: (Irene, Nada, Momir) First sequence: Attendant, extraordinary characteristics: worshiping gods, malice perception (12) Second sequence: Listener, extraordinary characteristics: listening to malice; mastering spells: Silence, Mystical Ear (38) Third sequence: preacher, extraordinary characteristics: soul declaration Path of knowledge: (Byrne,) First sequence: recorder, extraordinary characteristics: profound memory, sketch (12) Second sequence: pharmacist, extraordinary characteristics: medicine identification, self-recipe formula (28) Third sequence: Occult scholar, extraordinary characteristics: deconstructed perspective; master spells: flame control, mirror deflection, voice mark, avatar, transposition (85) Road to conquest: (Lucius, Yag) First sequence: Gladiator, extraordinary characteristics: physical fitness, weapon proficiency, desperate fight (11) Second Sequence: Duelist, extraordinary characteristics: quick attack, sword dance (24) The Silent Road: (Chris,) First Sequence: Hunter; extraordinary characteristics: tracking senses, trap making (45) Second Sequence: Killer, extraordinary characteristics: lethal, flexible body, silent (63) The third sequence: Pretender, extraordinary characteristics: Pseudo Spirit Cards (108) Path of Order: (Vanessa, Moore) The first sequence: Guard, extraordinary characteristics: protection, fatal counterattack (83) The second sequence: Sheriff, extraordinary characteristics: patrol, arrest Road to Disaster: (Archibald, Sava) First sequence: Storm Guard, extraordinary characteristics: Storm Armor (83) First sequence: Craftsman, extraordinary characteristics: skillful hand, heavy attack (83) Path of power: (Tio,) First sequence: Servant, extraordinary characteristics: follow, reward (108) Second sequence: Butler, extraordinary characteristics: family management Road of love: (Inna) First Sequence: Poet, Extraordinary Characteristics: Praise; Mastering Spells: Psalms, Heroic Psalms, Mourning Psalms The Road to Contract: First Sequence: Employee, Extraordinary Characteristics: Concentrate on Work Updated from time to time, and may not follow the author's progress. Book friends who have relevant supplements can write them below

Members of the Fisher family (to Chapter 193)

There are still about a dozen pictures left to catch up to the latest, but it's no longer interesting. Not to mention the criticized slow update and other issues, the style of the novel has completely changed. It has lost its cautious and confidential style and relies entirely on Carl for survival. It has changed from a Western fantasy novel to a fairy tale novel. The protagonist will never die, all fatal injuries can be avoided by black mist, and everyone has invincible skills, such as ashes, phylactery, resurrection, etc. Even those who die from old age can be reborn by being reincarnated in descendants. All the villains cannot understand Carl, and there is no irresistible force to check Carl. To put it bluntly, this book has become a child's graffiti, because there is only beauty left in this world, without sadness and trouble. The story can be seen at a glance. The author still needs to practice more. The outline and writing skills are indeed too different, and he cannot grasp the grand story background. . .

Since blood is the bond, why not have children? Ten or eight is too outrageous, but three or four is not too conspicuous, right?

Completely group portrait. The protagonist's presence is no higher than that of other important supporting characters. It feels like he has now become a real tool serving the plot. It's unclear whether this writing method will be recognized by more readers, but abandoning the special nature of the protagonist is undoubtedly a bold attempt at the starting point.

The man behind the scenes is not necessarily easier to write than the group portrait. There are quite a few references for group portraits, and there are even textbooks such as Xuanjian Xianzu. But I have always felt that no one can really write about the masterminds behind the scenes. Too many masterminds are too superficial. If you write about spiritual recovery, the changes of the times have changed the production relations and superstructure, as well as the performance of ordinary people in the face of the tide of the times. The most important masters may not necessarily write well in this area (and this is easy to hit the red line) ), if you write about the creation of the world or like this book about God (I am God, the spiritual ruler), you still can't escape the problem of epic feeling. The protagonists of this type usually have a low sense of existence, and they don't have an anchor point like the family, so it is more difficult to exert force. Moreover, changing the era of this kind of book is a big problem. If you don't change it, you will basically get stuck and have nothing to write. If you don't change it well, it will collapse. The only relatively reliable thing is to write light novels and write about human beings. However, there is actually no essential difference between that kind of novel and the ancient rebirth style that was played badly. They all know the plot and then go for it. I don't tell you, but you all know what's going on.

I have indeed ordered them all so far. Cthulhu, sequence, behind the scenes, and becoming a god are all elements that I like very much. The writing is not bad, but I have to admit that your layout is really like shit. With such a powerful force, you can tell how high-level it is just by hearing the name. Why are you so anxious? Why is a family with such a strong trump card so anxious to fight this and that, put themselves on the stage, and quietly develop three to four generations to develop the true heritage of the family? Isn't it the same feeling at the beginning? Moreover, your description of this world is very general and has no sense of mystery at all. The combat description is also too bad. The part about fighting the Ether Dragon is almost like a joke. The protagonist is so useless that he is already on the eighth level. In the end, he has no power of his own and needs to extract the life span of the believers. The subject matter of this book is really good, and the author's writing skills are also okay. It is a pity that the result is this.

I feel that none of the descendants can achieve great things. Specifically, there is no one who can truly control the overall situation. They are not as good as the generation of Byrne Irene. In terms of character, temperament, ability, and even dedication to the family, these three and four generations have not experienced the difficulties of starting a family, but they have enjoyed the life resources of the nobility.

A masterpiece of family portraits. If you like cultivating immortals, you can read Clan of Immortals. If you like Western fantasy, you can read this one. The writing is not bad, but the character creation in the first generation was perfect, but it became a bit blurry in the second and third generations. The summary is not bad.

The settings of the third generation of Darren, Lillian, Kano and Kristen make me want to delete the book. They are all crazy, especially Kano and Kristen. What the hell is this setting?

The protagonist appears too closely. You can learn from Xuanjian Xianzu and see how it was written. The protagonist of that book almost does not appear. Your book has too strong a sense of presence.

Why is it getting harder and harder, the family is beginning to be divided, some people are beginning to clearly hate Christine, writing about Archibald's grandson breaking the law, and not mentioning whether the previous converts have developed their own family members, or whether they have developed into family members. This will definitely cause problems in the future. There are also the Purifiers and the Black Tide, who co-operate with the same family but each plays their own role. To develop their power, they have to borrow family funds and then pay them back. Karl couldn't sense the heart of the blood recipient. He couldn't tell instantly when someone was taking actions that harmed the family, so he had to write some internal battles to clean up the unclean ones. If you want family members to abide by the law, why don't you promulgate dogma? A family with gods also has some shortcomings of ordinary forces. Wouldn't it be better to let Kaldo play a role other than making sacrifices and advancing? A family blessed by the gods is written with the feeling of rising of an ordinary family 🙄 (This post only represents my personal opinion, some opinions may not be correct, please correct me 😳)

Looks good, come on! The only drawback is that it's very anti-theft.

The front is wonderful, but the back is not good. Please think carefully, author.

The early stage is amazing, but the later stage is not suppressed. The shortcomings of the battle screen are like the turn system is not well written. Otherwise, it is no worse than the Xuanjian Immortal Clan. I feel that this genre is more suitable for Western steam, Cthulhu, and not suitable for the Eastern Immortal!

I have read this book a long time ago. Now that I think about it, the early writing is really to my liking. If I stick to the style, it will be easy to become a great master. Unfortunately, the author seems to have insufficient writing power. The style has changed in the middle period, and the world view is quite large. I feel that the author cannot control it.

As a reader who has read the author's 3 books, I can only say that the biggest reason for the author's failure is that the world view is too big and there are too many characters. I hope that the next book can learn from the lesson. Why didn't the author send a notice next door when he started a new book at the starting point?

Although the testimonials for the launch are very laborious, the content is really bland. It feels like a re-skin of the very ordinary fantasy novels before. It is said to be a secret sect, and it does not have that kind of god-like atmosphere.

I felt good after reading the free chapters, but after reading the 1.6 Million-plus words, I suddenly felt bad. After flipping through the table of contents, it turned out that it was unfinished. The world view was too big, but the author's writing power was completely uncontrollable. After reading the world map posted by the author and combining it with the content of the novel, I realized that this novel would require at least three million words to be written, but it turned out that it was only half-finished, and I can only say that it was completely unfinished. As of now, the protagonists are still an unpopular family in a remote corner of a remote country, and the most powerful empire can easily crush this country. In the end, they have to write about the secret family religion that saves people in need. Do you think you can write it in 1.6 Million words? Dashui B next door has written only half of the twelve volumes of poems with 10 million words, and you are thirteen steps up the ladder, tsk tsk tsk 🙂 The most important point is that after reading the author's final sigh, he actually had the nerve to say that the first order was poor. Do you think your first chapter has a hit point? Is it the climax of the plot? Can being ordinary attract people to subscribe?

The author's next book should be on this theme. This theme is definitely in the right direction. As long as it is written well, it will definitely become a god!

I only regret that the author cannot update ten times a day😭

Suddenly I remembered this book. Is it finished? ?

When will the new book be released? I've been thinking about it! ! ! !

After two months of raising it, I was told that the book was finished 😰

So Chaos Star was killed because he signed a contract. The whole process was just to collect a debt and did nothing? This is too unlucky 😅