Apocalypse: Item Upgrades Starting with the Fire Ax

Save money: Korean-style kimchi online game, keep fighting monsters and upgrading repeatedly, from spicy crayfish to overlord sunset shrimp, the plot and world view? That's not important

Wishful writing is really bad for the book. This is a common problem among most authors nowadays. The mistake in using this type of book as an object is that, like similar books, there is no limit to the exaggeration of things. Some books just add a piece of material to something to synthesize high technology, and some decompose it to directly decompose the technique. Why are they not raw materials? Is there any limit to writing a book? Secondly, the biggest problem in writing a book is that it cannot contain personal emotions. This is the key to the quality of the book itself. The best way to write is like a tree. How the tree grows, the book is written. The so-called personal emotions are the personal concepts and feelings of different people, rather than the popular conventional concepts and feelings. If you add too many weird ideas and intellectual details, it will be like a tree full of holes dug by woodpeckers. It will not stand up to any scrutiny, and the book itself will not be very good-looking. Be smart when reading, and don't read mindlessly. People will become stupid after reading for a long time, and the comments written will also mislead people.

It's been more than thirty chapters, and the world view has not yet been laid out, and what happened has not been explained. There is no description of the reactions on the earth. It is all about fighting, upgrading items, and fighting again. If you continue to read it, you will feel tired.

I can only say that I am second-rate in terms of specialization, which is the same as stocking up on things that the system doesn't add. Just play. Pure twosome behavior

The writing is good, but the protagonist is too pushy, indecisive, and wishful thinking. He thinks that the religious aunt is not harmful, so he doesn't care about her development. He thinks that he can go home through that door without his life, so he wants to squeeze through. That Manager Wang and that xx can even see that something is wrong. Alas, he just doesn't care, just plays, and just wastes. The protagonist says that he just wants to live and go home, and nothing he does is beneficial to his life.

I've been abusing humans, and I feel that humans' high technology is worthless in front of them, but the problem is that with the capabilities they have shown so far, it's a bit weird to say that head-on confrontation is incomparable to nuclear weapons, but I believe that humans can't be led away like this forever after they are prepared. The bullies are just ordinary people without weapons. If there is a car-load of fully equipped and military-literate troops, look at how cool they are. If they are so powerful, they will wipe out humans in one fell swoop.

The writing is quite good. This book has its own characteristics and is not the popular literature nowadays.

Author, I admire you very much. It's not that I've never seen this kind of writing before, but it's the first time I've seen you with such a long battle line I've just cleared 100 chapters of monsters, and all the clues I found are suspenseful. I really haven't filled in any holes And it seems that it has been changed in the past, and some of the plots have been changed. I had question marks all over my face If I hadn't seen the latest chapter that finally gave some serious clues, I feel like I would have been depressed to death I really sympathize with those who have read the latest chapter before me: I read more than 90 chapters in one go, and I don't know what the main plot is, how to get out, and I don't know who the villain is. I know it, but I feel lonely after reading it Of course I don't deny the wonderfulness of your puzzle book, but it really filters out the readers... Impatient people can't read it, people who are short of books can't read it, and those who don't like the Riddler have to curse a little bit❌ Blessed are those who follow me and follow me after reading it. Can you understand what this book is about and what the main plot is? The previous classmates once again express their sympathy... I can't even imagine the heart-wrenching feeling of following a novel for more than a month and being confused and completely unaware of the main plot and world view 😐😐

The writing style is acceptable and the narration ability is passable. At the current starting point, it is a work that has a chance to be on the list. The only problem is that I feel that I have the motivation to read this book until I write the latest chapter. The water ahead is too fierce. In order to wait for the release of the book, it is easy to drag down the few readers in the early stage. The author had better consider this point, make good choices, and don't play this book to death.

The item level increases by one level, and the protagonist adds a little experience. Upgrading a weapon from level 7 to 8 requires 482 experience points, and the level of the weapon is too high and the protagonist's level is too low to bear it. Shouldn't we upgrade the items on our body more? When the item is at level one, only 5 experience points are enough to upgrade it, which can increase the character level and improve functionality. Just keep knocking on weapons, clothes, and shoes, and don't move anything else. 100 experience points cannot upgrade weapons, clothes, and shoes to the first level, but it is enough to upgrade 20 items to the first level and add 20 character level experience points to the protagonist. He simply didn't add it and focused entirely on the weapon, which resulted in a plot where he couldn't bear the power of the weapon.

Water bottles, hats, skull rings and smartphones and now laser pointers.

First, now that I have seen more than 40 chapters where I either fight monsters or encounter monsters on the way, I suggest that you don't need this kind of rhythm. Your plot points are not well written, so you can write less. Second, every time the ancient memory is emphasized, this can be regarded as foreshadowing the subsequent plot and writing about the worldview. But if you want to write about the worldview, it is better to just use a chapter to foreshadow the worldview. Third, it's crystal enhancement. To be honest, it's a bit like the feeling of déjà vu when I watched "The Demon Farm" before, but in the end it depends on how the author writes it. But now it seems that the side effects of this enhancement are quite large, so we should solve this problem as soon as possible. I hope the author writes well.

13. Ten thousand words. The whole text is about fighting, leveling up, going to the next map, fighting again, and leveling up again. It would be boring if it continued.

I can only say that the author is a genius, no derogatory intention.

After reading the latest 62 chapters, I just want to ask when will the pumpkin head on the cover be put on? 😃😃😃

Not a real way home, feeding on humans, loving brains... I know they are online novels!

Still have an invincible flow? Right now, what does the protagonist's performance have to do with being invincible? It is understandable that there is no way out of the subway lounge, but why do you have to upgrade your clothes and shoes? Every three levels of items provide a little experience. The experience consumption of low-level must be lower. Why not upgrade other ones and have the protagonist linger on the edge of death? And See for yourself, such a huge irrationality. . . . .

It was too focused on describing the upgrades of the fight and forgot the original intention of the mysterious and apocalyptic world view. After looking around, I felt confused and confused.

Why does it feel like it was written by AI? Sometimes the sentences are inexplicable and hard to read.

What can I say about this book? Now that I have read it, I feel that nothing is fluent (it is not fluent in various aspects). I can't see the writing style. I can't see the logical details. I can't see the logical details. The plot is like stepping on a banana peel and sliding wherever you go. The main character just stands out a little bit and I think about it and then that's it. I write a few paragraphs of text in each paragraph (maximum 300 words with punctuation marks). Then I delete a little bit of the arrangement and start a hook (such as a mobile phone upgrade or something) and it gets over. It seems that every character is very mentally retarded, including the main character. Overall, it's like the author decided to write this new setting without preparing an outline, but the plot is like a wild horse that is completely out of control (a rush to collapse)

My grades are a bit poor. I feel like I'm going to GG.

It's really good to watch. The world view slowly unfolded after about sixty chapters. I found it to be really good. It's also very enjoyable to fight monsters and upgrade. I can clearly feel that the protagonist is slowly getting stronger.

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