
Dragon Tribe: It Makes Sense for Platinum Star to Destroy the Dragon, Right?
龙族:白金之星打爆巨龙很合理吧
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- Completed
- Length
- 100k Words
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Myriad Worlds
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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The writing is so bad. I don't even know which sentence is speaking and which is narration. I advise you that if you want to continue writing this book, you'd better correct the punctuation.
6. Elementary school students are better at using punctuation marks than you are.
Author, if you don't change your punctuation, you won't be able to attract people. No matter how good it looks, you will be dismissed.
Good guy, your punctuation is really wrong. I saw a few at first glance.