Samsara Paradise: Demon Hunter

Su Xiao+Feng Bujue=Su Feng😏😏

In fact, the essence of Yan Mo Dao's ability is a separation-like conceptual ability, not a spatial ability.

The setting is okay, but the reincarnation paradise is a bit stretched, especially the derivative world in my hometown has been invaded, and the native world is still excusable, but this is too much, especially the demon race has the same name as the Spell Extermination Alliance, so it is better to rename it, and the race is changed to the abyss native race, and now it is the derived bloodline of that race.

This is another reincarnation fanfic that I like. I hope the author won't give up just because there are few readers at the beginning, and stick to it.

The demon losing his charm is really superfluous.

The technique is immature, and the plot is always confusing, especially the talent bonus is too low, and it is of no use. It would be better if I just add a sword skill.

I came here for Devil May Cry, but failed after three or five chapters. This is not because of the problem that other book friends said, but it is because the author's plot jumps and fragmentation in the novel are too strong. It is okay to dig holes and bury buttons, but the holes dug by the author make people feel very boring. For example, I have no interest in the identity and background of the protagonist, but the author always seems to deliberately create a feeling that the protagonist has a high level of character, "Although he has no father or mother, but Labor and management are really awesome." Another example is the few hundred million at the beginning, the forced killing of several plot characters, and some "combat of wits and courage" scenes. To be honest, I have never played Biochemical 2. I remember that the plot characters don't seem to be reckless, right? Why are they all given away for free or as gifts? Okay, that's all. I don't have any say in the later part if I haven't read it. After all, the plot has not unfolded. Maybe the author will make up for the sense of fragmentation in the later stage.

I like them all, I hope there will be less poison identification, thank you! (PS: Everything is being updated this time!)

Chapter 180 requires 500 book friend points to comment. Everyone understands. There is a lot of nonsense after it is released, but I am brave and I can find reasons for the author to convince myself.

Isn't the devil a good friend of Bai Ye? I remember isn't Bai Ye an ally with the demon clan? His profession

I always feel that people who write about reincarnation and paradise are very demanding on their brains and energy. For example, I spent about three to five months, and in the end I only bought a book called What's That? Calling you Bai Xiao seems to be correct. He only raised 20 pieces. Wow, it's so slow.

It seems to be bad. I have to say that there are no major problems with the book's subject matter, the protagonist's ability system, and the ideas. However, the author's description is indeed very "immature". The main problem is the handling of details and the sense of text and pictures. The main attractions of this type of novel are the thrill of upgrading the protagonist as he becomes stronger step by step, and the visual appeal of the battle (feeling of pretentiousness). The author can try himself or ask people around him to listen to the book and see if he can imagine the scene of battle. I think this book has a big problem in this regard. Taking the recent battle against violators as an example, what I want to see is: 1. The protagonist's analysis of the enemy's skills, and the battle of wits and courage with the enemy (combat wisdom), 2. The gorgeous or handsome moves of both sides, the visual sense of the swords intersecting, 3. The protagonist's crushing (sense of pleasure) Or Jedi counterattack (pleasure), 4. The strong temperament of the protagonist, the lawless arrogance/insidiousness/handsomeness/(even ugly, helpless) of the offender are all okay, but the unnecessary jokes and confusing combat descriptions really make (me) uninterested. In fact, I am quite looking forward to the different magic tools in the back. I hope the author can describe them well in the next book. ❤️

Is he a eunuch? , It's okay to rewrite it😯, it's so quick

My writing ability will probably become very perverted later on. If I later meet the protagonist of the original work and feel that I can't beat him, then I'll be a bit deliberately trying to please him.

Why do I remember that Su Xiao and the devil are allies?

Why do fans like to go to One Piece?

You are already a eunuch, you don't need to read it

Actually it's not bad. I was chasing after the million words of reincarnation. The tens of millions of fans till now are really too few. There are so many that I can't hold on. Come on, author, keep updating! ! !

Like the title, let me share my personal opinion. I feel that many of the settings of the book are too vague, as well as the description of some details. In the section of Longhu Mountain, the protagonist and one of the supporting actresses have only known each other for a few hours. In order to shape the image of the protagonist, the woman suddenly said that the protagonist will never (always underline) aimlessly, there must be something important, and the tone of an old friend is just a compliment. If you say that the protagonist is charming, then you will have a intrigue with the protagonist later on. , What is the picture of the woman, and the part about Revolver Man that follows, in order to highlight the protagonist, the protagonist just finished saying that Revolver Man will be blocked, but the next page merges with the protagonist, describing Revolver Man's anger, and the result is not explained how to pass the level. , Kaka slaps the protagonist in the face, the pretense is too bad, and there is also the general skill of teleporting to the bullet position. This is not explained clearly at all. I saw this skill on the attribute interface of the weapon earlier, but in the later stage, the weapon was broken into pieces and it can still be used? There are no restrictions, it's too buggy. The overall evaluation is that the details are still not handled well, it is too immature.