Reborn: My Artistic Era

The protagonist's situation abroad is described fairly clearly, but his father's family has some kind of main branch, legitimate descendants, and illegitimate children, and some other inexplicable background. Is the country still like the Republic of China with its concubines? This is completely unexplained.

I've dropped it. The current plot is not only padded but also disgusting, constantly emphasizing power and such. You need to understand what kind of art you're writing.

It's alright. It's just that there are too many supporting characters appearing too quickly, it's a bit overwhelming. Also, I really don't like the protagonist's background and relationships; it feels a bit like a female-oriented novel. The main problem is that it's not very likable. The protagonist's parents had an unplanned pregnancy, and he went to Germany, and his father didn't care at all?

I've already stopped writing some chapters, and if I keep going like this I'll have to give up. The focus of this art-themed work should be on the art itself; having too many female leads ruins the whole framework.

This is a terrible book. If you're going to write about urban life, then write about urban life; if you're going to write about art and painting, then write about art. Nine out of ten chapters are just a bunch of women talking. The main character hardly ever appears, and there are almost no exciting moments in the book.

Currently, it seems far less impressive than a "soulful artist." If there were more female characters and a more roguish male protagonist, it would be far less impressive than "Full-Time Artist"—that's plagiarism. It's not that I think I'm better than them; it's just that I'm being misled.

It's very well written. The interactions between the protagonist and various other characters are portrayed very well, and it's truly exhilarating. It's comparable to the book by the great painter in its own way. A great read! 🙂

The author posted in the wrong place. This is a female-oriented novel, confirmed.

Is this some kind of pretentious act? Can't you just get to the point?

Why are so many people putting their faces on the spot for the protagonist to slap?!