Daming: You Have Become an Immortal, and You Still Want Me to Be the Emperor?

For new readers with average brains who are just getting started, it is just right. For those with better brains, the book is full of loopholes and feels like an assembly line or AI article.

It is a purely self-interested novel, directly treating the ancients as cavemen and relying solely on their own imagination.

It always feels weird, there is no logic in some parts, and the protagonist's IQ is worrying

It can be seen that the author wanted to create a funny protagonist, but he made him look like a junior high school student. .

Suddenly an idea came to mind. If Zhu Yunxi succeeded to the throne, would Lan Yu really have a way to survive? If Zhu Yunwen can't suppress him, then Zhu Yunxi can? At least Zhu Yunwen and Lan Yu have nothing to do, as long as they care about the relationship between monarch and minister, but Zhu Yunxi and Lan Yu are relatives. If Lan Yu lives until Lao Zhu dies, then the ministers won't be afraid of the monopoly of his relatives. After all, even Lao Zhu can't really suppress Lan Yu from behind, can he? He can only let whoever he wants die die. When the next generation really wants to deal with Lan Yu, Zhu Yunwen only needs to consider whether it can be done, and with the foundation left by Lao Zhu, there is a high probability that it will be no problem. After all, there is no need to think about it at the same time like dealing with Zhu Di. On the other hand, Zhu Yunxi not only had to consider whether he could do it or not, he also had to consider the reputation of Lan Yu. After all, he was his uncle and grandpa, and he was not a modern cousin, so he might not be close. If you get the reputation of being ruthless and ungrateful, you will not be able to please both the civil and military officials.

I can only say that in a worse era, the ones on Sanjiang were not even as good as this. I can only say that that's it.

The idea is good, but why does the protagonist look like a second-rate guy?

It's really a fucking department, there are at least a dozen of them in one chapter.

What the hell? Lan Yu is the uncle of the Crown Princess Chang, not the uncle of the protagonist. I don't even understand this kind of common sense. What are you writing about?

What did you write? Lan Yu's godson kidnaps the protagonist? What was the purpose of writing this? Just to disgust people? How poisonous! Shennong must be poisoned to death!

In the first chapter, I persuaded you to quit, bye J

I can read it, just barely, but it's actually on the new book list. Are there no books left? ! !

You cannot read this book with your head in mind.

The protagonist is a junior high school student with a funny personality

Yes, this book is good. You can open new maps in the future, such as playing Game of Thrones For specifics, look at the results of this book. If the results are not good, I guess it will be gone later.

If you want to play Shihuang, just open a new book. It is written that the protagonist becomes an immortal and serves as a dog to the First Emperor, transforming him into an immortal, helping him unify the world and making everyone on the earth do corvee service. It also allows foreigners to experience the greatness of our First Emperor 😁

Why don't you follow the immortal way instead of the divine way? Shinto relies too much on the faith of mortals

Really poisonous! Damn, I was persuaded to quit the first one. How could the writing and logic be so outrageous? Although the novel does not pay attention to strong logic, you can't have none at all in the first one. The protagonist's personality and behavior have completely changed. This is not possible. He was discovered at the beginning, and then reported to his stepmother, and he was immediately executed or imprisoned as a heretic, okay?

I feel that the protagonist's IQ is too low, like a child who has traveled through time. Then Zhu Yuanzhang was forcibly intellectualized by the protagonist. . . I can't stand it anymore. The author's writing skills are really not worthy of such a novel subject as the cultivation of immortals in the Ming Dynasty!

Write a novel to maximize your strengths and avoid weaknesses. The author's understanding of ancient political systems and other contents is really difficult to describe in one sentence.

I thought there was something wrong with my aesthetics, and felt that there were a lot of poisonous points. I yelled at the confidential content, brought out things that I couldn't explain clearly, and said it was a gift from heaven. Then I saw people complaining in the comment area and felt relieved. It seemed that I was still in line with the public's aesthetics.

I don't know when, "IQ Online" became a dispensable label and the choice of a few authors I don't know when, looking at the choices of most authors, you came up with the idea of ​​writing yourself At every moment when inspiration strikes, you write down the creativity, looking forward to using this creativity to add to your own work Every time At a moment when you are not understood, you open your book and look at the protagonists and supporting characters, as if you have become them, and they have become your close friends And one day, you suddenly find this comment in the vast sea of books, and suddenly encounter this book, you may get a friend, get an understanding, and get some ideas...

Jumping to another world will be interesting, writing about other worlds under the banner of Ming Dynasty.

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

Why are you playing Corpse Refining Sect! Have fun growing magical plants. Much more interesting than this

It's a waste of time to write. If you don't write a good historical novel, if you write it, it will become fantasy.