Even Androids Have to Work!

When writing this subject, many aspects were not considered thoroughly enough, resulting in an unclear plot line. I wrote a little here and there about what I wanted to write. The protagonist is obviously an android but he still has a human thinking mode. He even talks to the characters every day... If you have anything else you want to criticize, please add it. Some time ago I was debating whether or not to just cut it off. What kind of bullshit was written? It's such a waste! But after thinking about it for a long time, I still feel that even if it is just tinkering and revising, I should at least finish the story I want to write. I can't think about entering the palace every day. When I was thinking about this story, I actually only thought of a few plot points that I particularly liked at first, just for fun. Thank you to friends who have voted monthly, recommended, and read every day. I have read all the comments, and some of them are indeed spot on. Regarding the issue of revising the text, I will revise it as soon as possible. It is some changes in character expression and small plots, so as not to affect the original plot advancement. The last question is why it was not deleted. It seems to be a permission issue, so I'll continue working on it after I figure it out.

The writing is okay, but why is Chiyoko not dead? This character is so disgustingly written that the protagonist was almost killed by her several times but was actually deceived. . . The plot is also incomprehensible. One main line was not finished and a hundred main lines were written. Shakespeare said that a gun that appears in the first act must be fired in the fourth act. There are so many plot lines that it is hard to read. It is difficult for the author to write it himself.

A bit strong, doesn't feel like a newcomer. Is it the vest of some big boss?

Personally, I suggest changing the title of the book and not adding Cyberpunk.

It's a good book, and it can be regarded as the bread and butter in cyberpunk literature. The story of androids and cybernetics is quite innovative. With the continuous development of technology in the cyber world, it is becoming more and more convenient to replace prosthetic bodies. The boundary between man and machine is blurred. There is a third party between man and machine - android, with a human soul and a machine body, but seems more like a human.

It's quite good, please come on, author.

Let's talk more about philosophy, androids, and cyberpunk 😍

Not bad, it feels like 2077