Even Androids Have to Work!

When writing this story, I didn't consider many aspects thoroughly enough, resulting in an unclear main plot. I wrote bits and pieces of content here and there. The protagonist is clearly an android, but he still maintains a human mindset. There was even a lot of filler dialogue every day. Please feel free to add anything else you want to criticize.

The writing is okay, but why isn't Chiyoko dead yet? This character is disgusting; the protagonist was almost killed by her several times and was even tricked by her... The plot is also inexplicably nonsensical. One main storyline wasn't finished, and then a hundred more were added. Shakespeare said a gun that appears in the first act must fire in the fourth. There are just too many plot lines; it's unbearable to read. Even the author must have had a hard time writing it.

That's pretty strong. Doesn't seem like a newbie. Is this some big shot's alternate account?

My personal suggestion is to change the title; don't even include "cyberpunk".

A pretty good book, a gem among cyberpunk novels. The story of androids and cybernetic beings is quite original. In the cyber world, as technology advances and prosthetic body replacement becomes increasingly convenient, the boundary between humans and machines becomes blurred. A third entity emerges between humans and machines—androids, possessing human souls and machine bodies, yet seemingly more human-like.

Very good! Keep it up, author!

More philosophical, android, and cyberpunk elements please! 😍

Not bad, it has a 2077 feel to it.