Immortality: Immortal Lord in the World

The knife is chosen over the head. You can also have fun and flirt every day. It feels like time is suspended. As long as the protagonist is not at that level, nothing will happen.

There are dozens of chapters. I haven't become a warrior yet, but I spend a lot of space describing how bad the gang is and how miserable the bottom class is. What's the point of writing this? There is also a deputy gang leader who is watching over him. The protagonist is not even a warrior, he is just not in a hurry, he is just confident.

So childish. What do you mean by saying thank you every day to your loved ones? Are you educated? ? ?

It's frustrating, it's been dozens of chapters and the main plot has not progressed, and I've been writing and talking to those passers-by and supporting characters all day long! ! No wonder so many people abandon books! ! I couldn't stand it anymore and gave up!

It's frustrating, why don't you divide each realm into 99 levels and write it down slowly.

Overall, the writing is okay, and I have the desire to read on. However, the plot of the story advances too slowly, and it's unsatisfactory. Chapter 39 is still a third-rate swordsmanship inherited from my family... And I haven't picked any medicine.

I really have enough water to practice martial arts and then go to collect medicine. This nonsense has been written for more than thirty chapters without being completed.

It's really too ink-drawn. It feels like the main character is just grinding away without doing anything serious. It's really not good at writing.

It's too watery. There are almost forty chapters, and there isn't much plot progress. Most of the content is filled with conversations between various passers-by and supporting characters.

It's pretty good to watch, but it's too slow to warm up and improve in strength too slowly. I'm really afraid that the villain will suddenly become ruthless and kill the protagonist with just one breath.

The article has nothing to do with the title of the book. It always writes about ordinary people, how disabled they are, gangsters, and so on. It's so poisonous that people don't want to read any more.

My IQ is not very good, and there are problems with my behavior.

Everything within a hundred meters radius can be seen, but such a good scientific research tool is used for killing. What are you using to observe sound, light, electricity, space, time, genes, and the universe? Isn't it more useful than those?

Baishuiwen is like this, not attractive at all.

I can't tell if it's good or not, it's boring just looking at it! Goodbye

Forget about three golden chapters, I won't give you 300 golden chapters.

Even if I give you a plug-in, you won't be able to use it.

The more I look at it, the more unreasonable it becomes. Brother, do humans still exist in such a world? ? There are monsters under the ground, there are monsters again, and there are two or five zombies and ghosts in the country! In such a severe situation, if you don't talk about the unity of the human race and everyone practicing martial arts, why do you want to monopolize the imperial family? ? It is already unreasonable for the human race to be alive.

There seems to be something wrong with this protagonist. What the hell was he writing?

Grind, grind, grind!

The plot seems to be conflicting, but it's not exciting enough. The protagonists are all supporting, so overall it's pretty flat. I really can't tell whether it's good or bad.

I have a fiancée. I also have a bunch of sisters and brothers. I'm really impressed. There are no men left in the Demon-Suppressing Division. What's more, the four sisters are all on top of the stove and need you to save them. It's clearly written very well before. Hey.

Why don't you go find the secret book and just hold on to your machete? A bunch of warriors don't have more powerful secret books? I don't know what I'm busy with

Observe, discover, and summarize your scientific thoughts? There is nothing new about practicing Qigong just by observing.

This... The author is awesome! Conscience. Some other books charge a fee for twenty chapters. I don't even know what the hell he is writing.

Brain supplement?

It's well written, but why hasn't it been updated recently?