From Raising Corpses to Raising Corpses, a Right-Wing Immortal Came Out of His Liver

After reading Chapter 20, let me talk about it - (The writing style of the veteran author is not bad, and it is not as immature as the newcomer. So far, my sister has not been picked up in Chapter 20, so it is acceptable, and the writing is relatively smooth) - (Let me talk about the shortcomings. The author overly suppresses heretics, which is a poisonous point. It's not just a minor drawback, but the character conflict is too rough, and how the Land of the Dead came about has not yet been explained. The new author is probably already on the road now) - Summary (Beyond the starting point of 90% of the novels, you can read the book shortage of cultivating immortals, and the writing has a shadow of being heavier)

Holidays have to be celebrated, leave has to be asked for, there is no leave request note, there is only one update a day, and the attitude is extremely bad. Friends who want to read can give up and go read something else. Based on the author's attitude, I have already seen the ending of this book. It is either a bad ending or a eunuch.

The biggest shortcoming of this kind of book about the sect is that the protagonist has no sense of responsibility. He only eats but does not work. It is said that the life of the lower-level monks in the sect is difficult. As a result, he uses the support of the lower-level monks and the protection of the higher-ups. He shrinks back when something goes wrong. The reason why the two books "The Legend of Mortal Cultivation of Immortality" and "Gou's Cultivation of Immortality in the Troubled World of Demons and Martial Arts" are so popular is because Han Li is cautious and does not hesitate at all when he should take action. And the protagonist in Wenzhao Gong's book is Zhen Gou. But I would rather be the head of a chicken than the tail of a phoenix. I am the boss of a small place, or I am a casual cultivator. Others owe me. He does not owe others. Nowadays, the Gou Dao articles written by these street writers are all irresponsible or overly cautious. The essence of Gou Dao is to restrain first and then promote. As a result, the current garbage Gou Dao articles are all for feeding the readers. At least the cool articles have a good place. At least the literary Qingshu still has a part of the audience. This kind of sloppy writing only makes readers uncomfortable.

Is the protagonist mentally ill? Like to tie yourself up with things? Return of cause and effect, if there is such a thing, there will be no betrayal in the sect. He saved someone in front of him, but he needs help from this person in the back and still says that he owes a favor. How inferior is this person? Your boss pays you a salary every month to support your family and you still don't risk your life to repay your boss?

The base-building flying speed is actually only a little faster than 20 kilometers per hour, which is not as fast as others riding a bicycle. I can't accept it. Did you write these data with your eyes closed?

The protagonist's IQ and EQ are a bit low, and the author's writing is a bit awkward. He is a first-level qi-training disciple, a second-level manager, a third-level deacon, a fourth-level elder, and a fifth-level peak master. It's really confusing to me. You can write more than a thousand chapters about golden elixirs.

It feels cool to watch from the front, but the leveling pressure is too heavy. In chapter 20, there are only two levels of Qi training. When it comes to more than 70 chapters, it is still two levels of Qi training. The flow level pressure on the data panel is so hard. It is unimaginable that it will take more than 200 chapters to reach foundation building. I will not be able to get enough later.

The author of this setting didn't even read it himself. The only fairy mountain within a radius of 500 miles, a sect with tens of thousands of people in such a small territory? A sect with tens of thousands of people has so many corpse buryers? What about this bloody battle in the abyss? So capable of death.

The characteristics of the protagonist's practice of left-handedness are that he practices quickly (the protagonist obviously practices very fast), has strong fighting ability, and does not live long. With these characteristics, under normal circumstances, who would dare to mess with them? It's good for you, just step on everyone.

Poisonous point: At the beginning, my sister went to be a concubine. I read the comments and said that I haven't carried it yet. If you mind, you can leave.

At the beginning of the book, the sister learns to get out of the way and sells it to the protagonist to get benefits? Isn't this forced moral kidnapping?

I get annoyed when I see that sister B. What a plot-defying plot. Were you still alive three or four years ago? The plot in the future will definitely take this as the main line. Who wants to watch this? I thought I was being left-handed, but this is the result.

This novel is actually quite well written, but for the sake of water, not to mention what other immortal cultivators have to pay for seeking the Tao, the protagonist is cautious all the way, facing various difficulties, and endlessly improving his talents. The resources that good guys can be invincible in others are all consumables for upgrading to the protagonist! I keep pressing, and I don't know if it will cost me thousands of chapters to wait for the protagonist to be a cultivator who hides everything and is cautious, or if he waits for the Nascent Soul in an evil way! According to the author's way of writing, every breakthrough will be interfered with by someone, and there can be a few who can achieve it through cultivation. The spiritual stones turn into Yin Spirit Stones, and all the heavenly materials and earthly treasures are made of Yin Spiritual Materials. Those resources for normal cultivation of immortality are not as strenuous as yours! I can read this novel, but it's really depressing

I think I should take advantage of the small number of words to overhaul the story. Poisonous points 1: The protagonist's sister sells herself to support her. Poison point 2: There are too many cultivators in the sect in the article, and they hook tens of thousands of immortals. A radius of 500 miles is equivalent to 1

You can't read it after the 110th chapter. The protagonist is forced to lose his mind. If you noticed that something was wrong with Li Mu but didn't save him, then why are you slapping corpse energy on him? Isn't it just to get a few more pictures? It's simply poisonous! I can't see the rest of it at all. Anyway, Shennong is dead and I'm going to burn paper if I have something to do.

Damn, I felt like I could read it when I saw the first one, but then there was a beautiful sister who sold herself out in the second one... Reality is so hard, reading a novel with such a heart-wrenching plot, I felt like I had eaten a piece of shit 😢, I regret not reading the comment section 😭😭

The name is already called Dead Man's Peak, but I still emphasize that I look down on right-wingers, so I might as well change it to Guangming Peak.

It's such a mess. I've been reading this book for so long. It's the first time I've seen such a shameless author who has such a unique way of stopping updates. I'm ready to abandon the book. . .

This author is really awesome. He said at the beginning why the world is so dark, and later said that the protagonist's technique requires human blood. It is really too dark and evil. It is completely incomparable to the righteous way. A small force with 200 people responsible for burying corpses is the righteous way, and the evil master who teaches cultivation is the right way. Tao actually needs a person's blood. It's so evil. It's really evil. The protagonist himself feels that he is evil. He also said that it's no wonder that the heretic actually needs a person's blood and even wants to kill people. So the corpse that you 200 people bought is not the corpse of a dead person. What kind of corpse is it?

Brother, is the copyright sold? Later, he was wrong and just defrauded the starting point. Wasn't Wen Jiu brought by his sister? Why did he become an old beggar again? Where is his sister? The system is gone, and the AI ​​writing is not so messy, right?

I am still updating, which ruins my character. It is better to stop updating for a few months and then update again. A good book has been ruined by the author.

I really lost my mind and wanted to read Grandpa Feiqiao's book. I have been tortured for almost five years. Maybe this is love. Why don't you let me be the operations officer to compensate me?

It's getting more and more difficult to understand from behind! It's getting more and more chaotic! It seems someone else has written it

I think there is no need to criticize the author with plots that have not yet happened, even though I know that many of you have read a lot of low-level novels, so you are familiar with the routines of low-level novels. When you see your sister, you have already fantasized about how she will be reduced to nothing. What is the difference between this behavior and McCarthyism? Tell me something that "Shen Nong" won't tell you: Yes, my sister committed herself to the Xu family for the protagonist, but the Xu family did not abuse her, did not restrict her personal freedom, and even acquiesced to her sister to get resources for the protagonist. Of course, you can also insist that this is a sale, then I have nothing to say Say; Yes, the man my sister married is a scumbag, but he is only rumored to be a scumbag who married more than a dozen concubines, and has never shown up. He has been missing for dozens of chapters, and is very likely to have died. Of course, you can also insist that Void ✘ people are considered to have lost their virginity, then I have nothing to say. Of course, if Fei Que really uses the Xu family to disgust her sister in the future, I will be the first to scold her.

See 437, it's getting worse and worse, give it up, Jin Dan is okay, at least I can pay to watch it, what the hell is Yuanying? Is it possible for a human to write it? In the past, the protagonist controlled the zombies, but now the zombies have become seniors? Yuanying ended up beating a bunch of fund-building elixirs, and they seemed so awesome and passionate. I couldn't stand it anymore. The Golden elixir chapter is really interesting, but Yuanying is just a piece of shit

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I've read more than 20 chapters, and there's nothing wrong with the writing. I'm a bit of a noob on common sense, but I'm not good at emotional intelligence.

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I remember that it was clear that starting from chapter 399 was a waste chapter.

Isn't Feng a male? Why is he the female protagonist? I looked at more than 100 pictures and didn't even notice that she was a female.