Jihan Northland King

The author's writing is good. I'm now at chapter 300, which is considered the middle part. I feel this part about Soochow is too long tomorrow morning. They are mainly about war, but there is no other lighter content interspersed in between. This will make readers very tired, and I feel that I am not as comfortable as I was at the beginning. And most of the readers considering reading this book are fans of Ji Han. I think the author can focus on the group portraits of Ji Han. If you want to write third-party content, it shouldn't be too long. You can put it in a side chapter. For example, the content about Liu Usuru. This person has obviously not been mentioned before, and then suddenly a chapter is about heroic demeanor. This looks really abrupt and feels like it was shoehorned in. Adding a lot of other characters into it can easily cause confusion, because later on you will forget what this character is for. I can understand that the author wants to create a feeling of a long-awaited snake with a gray line, but as a long novel with millions of words, it is better to relax a little. I have read another book "The Remaining Smoke of the Han Dynasty" before, and I also had this problem in the early stage, but it got much better later on. Already voted for the month, author, please continue to work hard

Northern King Liu Kan

The writing is really good. It would be nice to write a story about the early Three Kingdoms in this style. It's hard to understand.

The biggest problem is that he cares about his wife and children. What is the relationship between his wife and children who were originally the King of the North and your modern Liu Chen?

1. Regarding Ma Sanqi's true identity, it was previously written that Sun He was a wealthy businessman in the east of the city. Later, he knelt in front of the government office all day for his daughter. Then there was a detail later that Ma Sanqi rubbed his knees on the boat and said that he had an old knee injury. Here I guessed that the two might be the same person. Then Ma Sanqi became the boss of the boat and ran around to find his daughter. 2. When I first started reading, I felt that the world that the protagonist traveled to may not be a normal world, but a parallel time and space or an if line at the end of the Shu Han Dynasty. The evidence is that the protagonist has been suddenly comatose three times and has confused memory, and then there is the poem of Nalan Xingde that he and the princess faced. The two confirmed each other's identity as the traveler, so when did the princess travel through? And why? Reminiscent of the previous article where the protagonist attended someone's funeral and then got into a car accident. I made a blind guess and it is very likely that the two of them hated each other and did not know each other. If the protagonist is going to attend his wife's funeral, that could also explain his somewhat womanly behavior after traveling through time. 3. The evidence for the abnormality of this world is in the chapter of Huang Tian's sermon. Ma Sanqi goes to see the ancestor. The couplet written on the door comes from "Journey to the West". In addition, Ma Sanqi said that the ancestor has not aged in appearance for more than ten years, so this ancestor may also be a time traveler, but He traveled earlier because his ancestor asked Ma Sanqi not to disturb his brothers, so this person may have traveled through the Yellow Turban period, and ended up becoming a master of the world without knowing what happened, or he may have been trapped on the island (because he asked Ma Sanqi to bring the Lord of the World to see him). 4. The reason why this world is not the original time and space is that the existence of Zhuge Zhiyi was an obvious hint at the beginning. Although the Prime Minister had a clever plan, he couldn't say it accurately when Li Fu asked who could succeed Jiang Fei. So what happened to Zhuge Zhiyi? How it came about is a question. If it is related to the previous point, if the Taiping Dao ancestor traveled through the Yellow Turban period... The blind guess may be related to the Prime Minister and to Zhuge Zhiyi. This can also explain why he asked Ma Sanqi to bring the Lord of the World to see him. The author has quite a lot of details. Oh yes, there is another one, that is Liu Su, the son of the former lord's old general. It feels not quite right, because he can accurately save Liu Shi, and then waste time in sending Xu Guo back. His identity may not be good. The above are all personal guesses after reading. Welcome to discuss and add.

The plot feels pretty good, especially the civil strife of the Sima clan and the Rebellion of the Eight Kings. The only flaw is that the protagonist doesn't go to the Western Regions to take advantage of the chaos to regain Chang'an, which is a bit hard to understand, and the plot of Sasan is a bit redundant.

The awe-inspiring people are still there, but the Han Dynasty is dead. This work maintains the standard and has the qualifications of a great master

It is better to die in battle and lose the country than to surrender the country.

With the capture of Longyou, Sichuan's trapped dragon power will be revitalized.

My little boy, Liu Chen, swears to the death and will not surrender!

Although the Shu army defeated Deng Ai's surprise attack and instigated a rebellion against Zhong Hui, the gap in military strength and talent between Wei and Shu was still huge. Personally, Sima Zhao knew that Zhong Hui had rebelled and joined the Shu army to attack, and he would definitely lead his army to put down the rebellion. The Shu army could now take advantage of the Wei army's panic to gain some victory. But after Sima Zhao stabilized the morale of the army, how should the Shu army face the counterattack of the Wei army? Moreover, Zhong Hui's rebellion had the intention of peeking into the world. I think Zhong Hui would let the Shu army encroach on Yongliang and expand its power. The two sides might have a decisive battle. Can the author give some advice?

After watching a little bit, except for the early stage, which is a little heavy, the rest is pretty good.

The trade routes in Southeast Asia and ancient India can become the most important place for the Shu Han to accumulate national power. Cotton, horses, cattle, manpower.

In my humble opinion, the author, Chapter 27, the most commendable thing is the use of the big IP of the Prime Minister. This idea is different from other systems, or it is something that happened to have traveled through time and happened to know this history very well, etc.

I'm really looking forward to seeing the scene where Jiang Wei, Zhong and Deng Ai join forces to revive the Han Dynasty.

Everyone who keeps books can go ahead and read it next Tuesday, otherwise I recommend sending it 😭😭😭

I feel like the writing is very good. Has anyone commented on the plot behind it and whether it's worth ordering?

Sima Yan is so stupid that he still won't be able to take the throne? 😁

It's well written, why isn't it popular?

One chapter a day is a bit too little 😫

Is the author's book a double take?

All 20 chapters and 20 chapters have been ordered, I hope you can continue writing it!

After Zhong Hui pushed Hanzhong out, all the soldiers left. Can't he take Hanzhong back?

How can you be the emperor after protecting the prince?

It's been 274 years, and the emperor still doesn't care?

Eight hundred acres of land is just a handful, why hide it?

Zhong Hui is such a loser. When he meets the prince of Sasanian Persia, he will be at a loss. The Han people have been completely disgraced!

I made a small boat...

Killing generals and ascending first are not considered military exploits? What do you think? Did you know that killing generals, ascending first, capturing flags, and trapping battles play a decisive role in winning a battle? You... You&#*^%¥$!