People Are in High Martial Arts, Staying up Late Will Cause Liver Damage

The creativity is quite good, the writing is also good, and it is worth owning.

Looking at the introduction, how unsatisfactory is real life? Are you still relying on bitterness and hatred?

Although I haven't watched it yet, I'm going to complain about the line in the introduction about protecting people in front of me. Is this because I'm running behind everyone else?

A picture can persuade 99% of people to quit

The point that poisoned me: (I only read Chapter 18) Although I personally feel good about the setting of this book, it is really an old routine. The protagonist saves a beautiful woman, and the beautiful woman is the richest man. Can he really not afford a few martial arts masters to protect him? Going out alone? And happened to be bumped into by you? It poisoned me so much that I didn't dare to read it (I personally don't like stallion stories, especially when the female characters don't have their own personality or strength. They just blindly attach themselves to the protagonist, lick the protagonist, and are jealous of the protagonist. I feel that there is no personality charm at all)

I feel really weak in cultivating immortals. I've almost completed the Qi training and built the foundation, but I still can't fly with a sword? It doesn't matter if you don't have magic, right? After all, one skill and a few basic spells should be standard equipment when entering a sect. Otherwise, wouldn't you be seeking death if you couldn't perform a single spell? Is this a low-end version of Xiuxian? Also, in the real world, martial arts has been developed for so many years. Can ordinary diseases still be cured? Just because the protagonist's father was drafted and disappeared for more than a year, he should be considered dead, right? Isn't there even compensation? His old lady really doesn't know why she wrote it? In order to drag down the family, why show that the family is poor? After all, at such an old age, if you really feel sorry for your child, you will not spend money on treatment. If you really feel sorry for your child, you will commit suicide.

In fact, I just need to write less of those messy romances, ambiguities, girls' inner monologues, and emotional stories. Others are actually okay. Every incident has to do with a woman, and it makes me sick if I watch it too much.

This immortal cultivator is really rubbish. He can't beat the first-level martial artist at the third level of Qi training, but he still has the wind sword perfection.

It feels a bit like a hammer in the east and a stick and a cone in the west, and there are always all kinds of messy skills practiced in the article. You can write this kind of thing, but the premise is that the amount of updates must be large before you can write it like this. If the amount of updates is large, you can write the main line in it. Otherwise, readers will feel that what is written here and what have I read. Although this kind of writing will make people feel that it is just watery If you don't have time to update a lot, just take care of the main line and write the content around the main line. There are occasional adjustments but not a bunch of adjustments.

The father is missing, there are brothers and sisters in school, and the grandparents are seriously ill. This kind of book is easy to read at a glance. It perfectly solves the problem of how to suppress the protagonist. It is even more uncomfortable than the orphan protagonist.

When the elderly are seriously ill and children are at the most critical stage of development, treatment is given up if money is not enough.

It's okay. I really want to complain about the protagonist's background He is also a young man with a miserable family. Isn't there such a thing as a normal family and a normal protagonist?

Why is that Jialan sect so awesome that they attack high-end intellectuals in public? Why haven't the authorities killed him earlier? Are there people above or are they the main combat force in the sinkhole?

The writing is indeed good, but it has no core appeal and has a few flaws.

Let me ask, is the protagonist just a spell-casting machine that only presses skill buttons? The idea of ​​upgrading Wind Blade Technique made me laugh.

It's not as good as the final priesthood. After 42 chapters, the protagonist is still the weakest among weaklings.

I was just short of 2,000, and immediately entered the classroom and started doing all kinds of cool and disgusting things.

I found that many people only know how to write about being handsome but don't know what kind of treatment a handsome person gets...

It's so difficult for the protagonist, who is a master of cultivation, to kill a junior warrior with the wind blade.

Congratulations on signing the contract, keep up the good work and update, don't be a eunuch, otherwise you will have to serve the emperor.

Fake corpse😰

Just writing about any pet in the novel will be more acceptable to most readers than some female supporting characters.

Isn't this just an everyday article? A little disappointed

By the way, you have more than 800,000 words, are you still wandering around in Xinshou Village?

Come on, I gave four votes, but the author, can you finish it? I would order it if I could.

The book is okay, but the introduction is a bit confusing.

They all came to see the cultivators and martial artists. The skills of cultivating immortals have been avoided, including hand-to-hand combat. What did you write?

This book is good, but why is it so low in popularity and has so few reviews?