Changing the Plot Starts from Moving into the Love Apartment

Lin Wanyu

Qin Yumo

There is really no need for this woman Chen Meijia to be a nymphomaniac for nothing.

Now that I see it, I can be sure that I must have come from Luzi. The urban life copy includes cultivation and ancient martial arts. The standard beginning is very exciting, and in the later stage, I will write a lot of crotch pulling.

It's too weird to open a harem in a love apartment. I personally don't like to see the original version. In fact, you can also open a harem with other women, such as Qin Yumo, Nuo Lan, Wei Benxia, ​​etc.

The rest of the story is a bit hard to watch. The Lin Group is not a small company. How could my daughter's boyfriend not do an investigation? How could the protagonist keep it a secret when he has so many skills?

I read one chapter but didn't finish it, and I slowly started to feel like a loser

I really don't understand why I like Lin Wanyu. She is as thin as a straw and looks malnourished.

What we are saying is that if Shado does not pay attention to quality and control quantity, it will collapse in the future. Either forget about women, or the entire article is about women. The whole article is to go to a today, go to b tomorrow, and go to c the day after tomorrow. Moreover, it should not be difficult to figure out the popular taste of the female protagonists and supporting characters in these fan fictions. If you want to make money by saying something unpleasant, you should not bring your own ideas and cater to the majority of tastes. In the latest chapter, there are almost ten women in three film and television dramas. If not, I will write Xiao Shaozong Zhutianliu. Like Chen Meijia and Fan Shengmei, it is speculated that women who were more controversial in the later period, Qu Xiaoxiao, simply did not write about it.

After seeing Chapter 52, I placed an initial order and ran away from the review. It really has a lot of flaws, the most controversial one is the inclusion of all traces, and it is not taboo on meat and vegetables. Chen Meijia's plot before Chapter 52 was the most fucked up. She said she was going to stop it at the beginning, but ended up slipping into the original plot. The emotional scenes were written in a weird way, probably due to my lack of experience.

I suggest that the protagonist stop talking about love, because every time it appears, it pisses me off 🙂

This book could be renamed The Complete Collection of Earthly Love Stories, which would make me extremely embarrassed.

No, I really can't stand it anymore after reading Chapter 21. It's too greasy. These greasy love stories, the author, don't even use oil when cooking at home!

Dear friends, if you like this book, please read it every day. It is very important to read it during the new book period. It affects whether the book can be written. Please.

Can you be more ruthless and rely on the mind control of the entire system? Yuri becomes the head of state to start a war, and then everyone goes to heaven together. In this way, the intervention value will definitely be huge.

The rest is okay, but the earthy love words are too awkward. Can you please change it and speak more normally?

Jiang Nansun

You kid really has nothing to do with it. One chapter was posted, but it was blocked and revised, and then another chapter was posted, and it was blocked and revised again, right?

Come on!

The results are indeed a bit poor, and it's normal to want to end it. If possible, I hope to finish writing the love apartment part.

Author, why is Chapter 251 missing? What was said? Is there a group? Post it in the group and check it out!

Comrade the author, has he ever written about Guan Shan?

Is it okay to recommend one every few chapters? I don't have anything else to do when I recommend chapters. I'm tired from reading books.

Gone? Or go to the new world? Gods and demons? Xianxia? Martial arts?

Read with caution, don't read during the fat loss period

Are there any stories about "iPartment" with multiple female protagonists? Let me know if you have any, thank you.