Excluding the Uchiha? Fine, I Am Done Playing with You

He died directly from the poison in Chapter 3. He wanted to capture Tsunade, the Hyuga clan leader, and the Ino-Shika-Cho clan members. Hahaha, with that kind of ability, why did you run away? You should have just rebelled against Sarutobi and become Hokage yourself. Even if you had the ability, and you captured and took them away, how would you manage them?

This protagonist seems a bit off. Why kidnap Tsunade just because there aren't enough medical ninjas? Is Tsunade weak? Even if Orochimaru and Kabuto exploited her hemophobia, they'd have a hard time subduing her. And what makes them think kidnapping her will make her serve the Uchiha? And what about the Hyuga clan members? This is like a beggar trying to start a business with a rich man!

Come on, the fighting power of pirates is above that of the Naruto. Madara Uchiha is only at the Admiral level among pirates.

I have no desire to finish reading three chapters.

Is the author planning to go to the One Piece world on the day the book is released? He's been dawdling in the Naruto world, holding back from going to the One Piece world, waiting for it to be released before going there to trick people into subscribing. Then he'll write a few dozen filler chapters to trick people into subscribing a little more, until no one's following him anymore, then he'll quickly abandon the story, start a new account, and start all over again.

The protagonist has no problem staging a coup. Whether Fugaku's faction agrees or not is irrelevant; they can only follow along once the coup is launched. Failure means the death of the entire clan. The coup process is simple: notify the clan members to hold a clan meeting that night.

After reading the first twenty-odd chapters, most of it was nonsense. They were already bullying the Third Hokage and Danzo, yet it took over forty chapters before the protagonist finally escaped. This is one of the major flaws. It's clear the author wanted to create tension, but with so much unnecessary dialogue, I honestly didn't see any tension. The protagonist's character is ruined.

I was originally looking to see when it would leave the village, but I ended up seeing it go on sale... Why write so much on a basic background board with such mediocre writing? |･ω･`) A bunch of mind controllers have arrived in a world of One Piece. Okay.

Just tell me straight, in which chapter do you leave Konoha?

Why are the last few chapters so weak? One Arlong storyline took four or five chapters of filler. Are you kidding me? Luffy and Ace were defeated in one go. Arlong takes four or five chapters and you're still making it weak. You're trying to be cool but you don't know how.