The great fortune of heaven and earth has come to the Phoenix Collection, and the immortal bones of those who are lucky enough to be in heaven have access to all kinds of magic. All the great avenues are vying to enter the mortal world. The Phoenix Collection has a blacksmith shop, a tailor shop, an embroidery building, and a martial arts hall overnight...
Three years later, Su Qingju accidentally fell into the water, and the past and present life came face to face.
The roc rises with the wind in one day and soars up to 90,000 miles.
The young master wields his sword at night, and his spirit reaches the sky.
Reader comments
Just reading the introduction gives me a sense of suffocation from the sword.
Um, what do you say? It feels a bit too fast-paced, with waves coming one after another. Jianlai has never had such a hasty start. There are also friends and family who are trying to hold the protagonist back. I feel a little annoyed when I see it.
I have been watching it intermittently, and now I have read Chapter 42
At first, I felt that there was indeed a problem with the rhythm, and that it would be a bit unable to keep up with the author's ideas and plot connection
But starting from Chapter 39, whether it is the visual sense brought by the text, the plot The clarity of the marching lines and the overall rhythm of the steps made me feel a lot more comfortable
Although there is still room for improvement, I feel that the author is really considering the readers' opinions and suggestions, and is very sincere
Keep up the good work!
I wish you all a happy New Year and good luck in the Year of the Dragon! 🐉
The prince wields his sword at night, on the queen's bed
😰Do you think it's very similar to Jianlai? I think it's okay. The author has his own ideas and style. The second volume seems to finally focus on the protagonist, and the sense of déjà vu 🤓 is coming!
I thought it was a Taoist priest wielding a sword at night
Friends! It will be great if you get through the first thirty or forty chapters! The back is great! ! ! Zundu looks better as you go to the back 😆😆😆
Has the starting point mechanism been changed this month? I have seen several Chinese-Chinese translations. The subject matter and story direction are basically the same as those in the old books.
It seems that with dozens of chapters, it is much better than many articles, and I will continue to read it.
But the plot is too urgent, the protagonist is too weak, and there is a constant stream of opponents. Before one is over, another one comes, causing all kinds of troubles to suppress the protagonist. It has been unable to solve Xu and Li, and it continues to bring crises and various troubles to the protagonist. The golden finger feels useless. It usually can neither turn the tables nor directly improve the protagonist's abilities. . . Although it doesn't feel like a sadist, it's close to it. In fact, you can slow down the plot and improve the protagonist's strength.
Language style: boiled water
World structure: history
Plot advancement: history
The beginning is on hell difficulty. You can't die because of the protagonist's aura.
Compared with the early stage, He Jianlai's character development was too hasty. The first few chapters were okay, but the later chapters were too rushed.
The beginning is similar to Jianlai. The effect of hanging is small in the early stage and has a big effect in the later stage. It is a bit frustrating at the beginning. After the hanging starts to be useful, it is okay and gradually gets better, but it is not enough.
I have read more than ten chapters, and the writing is incomprehensible. The twists and turns are too blunt and brainless 😅😅
Night sword fight
I looked at the title of the book and it was similar to the title of the Taoist Night Fighting Sword I read. I thought that book was pretty good, so I clicked on it and hoped it wouldn't disappoint me.
Cultivation of immortality in ancient times
The arrogant daughter of a large sect and a casual cultivator were childhood sweethearts, but the cultivators later separated. The male protagonist finally met the female protagonist after going through ninety-nine and eighty-one hardships.
The writing is neither ancient nor modern, it just sticks to it.
It is quite different from Jian Lai. The plot is similar to that of most novels nowadays. Goldfinger is very rushed and there is no plot foreshadowing, which makes people feel very abrupt.
It does smell like a sword, but the writing is still good.
Why have I made so many mistakes and not put them on the shelves? ? ? ?
Observe and recommend books
A story about two male protagonists, "The Last One"
The first male protagonist is ugly and lecherous. He was supposed to be the devil in the world of demons. But by some mistake, he was recognized as the holy son of the fairy world. From then on, he embarked on the path of the prodigal son's return...
The second male protagonist, his personality, is upright and handsome. He was supposed to be the holy son of the fairy world. But by mistake, he was destined to be the holy son of the fairy world. Next, he was identified as the Demon Son of the Demon Realm, and has since embarked on the path of becoming a villain...
The story unfolds between these two half-brothers...
This is the theme of this novel, if you are interested in reading it, read it, at least the logic is online, the plot is reasonable, and there are laughs and tears. Welcome to complain
Although the work definitely refers to the sword, I hope the author can write something unique.
I won't be disrespectful. The background setting of this content is mostly based on Jian Lai. However, there are a lot of articles in the world. You can learn from it. Don't copy the gourd just to make money. Write it well. Jian Lai is a masterpiece and you can learn from it. But it also has disadvantages. The beginning is too big. Now the general manager is so slow. Maybe this part that needs to be finished is not easy to write. Don't follow in the footsteps of the general manager.
Just reading the introduction gives me a sense of suffocation from the sword.
Um, what do you say? It feels a bit too fast-paced, with waves coming one after another. Jianlai has never had such a hasty start. There are also friends and family who are trying to hold the protagonist back. I feel a little annoyed when I see it.
I have been watching it intermittently, and now I have read Chapter 42 At first, I felt that there was indeed a problem with the rhythm, and that it would be a bit unable to keep up with the author's ideas and plot connection But starting from Chapter 39, whether it is the visual sense brought by the text, the plot The clarity of the marching lines and the overall rhythm of the steps made me feel a lot more comfortable Although there is still room for improvement, I feel that the author is really considering the readers' opinions and suggestions, and is very sincere Keep up the good work! I wish you all a happy New Year and good luck in the Year of the Dragon! 🐉
The prince wields his sword at night, on the queen's bed
😰Do you think it's very similar to Jianlai? I think it's okay. The author has his own ideas and style. The second volume seems to finally focus on the protagonist, and the sense of déjà vu 🤓 is coming!
I thought it was a Taoist priest wielding a sword at night
Friends! It will be great if you get through the first thirty or forty chapters! The back is great! ! ! Zundu looks better as you go to the back 😆😆😆
Has the starting point mechanism been changed this month? I have seen several Chinese-Chinese translations. The subject matter and story direction are basically the same as those in the old books.
It seems that with dozens of chapters, it is much better than many articles, and I will continue to read it. But the plot is too urgent, the protagonist is too weak, and there is a constant stream of opponents. Before one is over, another one comes, causing all kinds of troubles to suppress the protagonist. It has been unable to solve Xu and Li, and it continues to bring crises and various troubles to the protagonist. The golden finger feels useless. It usually can neither turn the tables nor directly improve the protagonist's abilities. . . Although it doesn't feel like a sadist, it's close to it. In fact, you can slow down the plot and improve the protagonist's strength.
Language style: boiled water World structure: history Plot advancement: history
The beginning is on hell difficulty. You can't die because of the protagonist's aura.
Compared with the early stage, He Jianlai's character development was too hasty. The first few chapters were okay, but the later chapters were too rushed.
The beginning is similar to Jianlai. The effect of hanging is small in the early stage and has a big effect in the later stage. It is a bit frustrating at the beginning. After the hanging starts to be useful, it is okay and gradually gets better, but it is not enough.
I have read more than ten chapters, and the writing is incomprehensible. The twists and turns are too blunt and brainless 😅😅
Night sword fight
I looked at the title of the book and it was similar to the title of the Taoist Night Fighting Sword I read. I thought that book was pretty good, so I clicked on it and hoped it wouldn't disappoint me.
Cultivation of immortality in ancient times
The arrogant daughter of a large sect and a casual cultivator were childhood sweethearts, but the cultivators later separated. The male protagonist finally met the female protagonist after going through ninety-nine and eighty-one hardships.
The writing is neither ancient nor modern, it just sticks to it.
It is quite different from Jian Lai. The plot is similar to that of most novels nowadays. Goldfinger is very rushed and there is no plot foreshadowing, which makes people feel very abrupt.
It does smell like a sword, but the writing is still good.
Why have I made so many mistakes and not put them on the shelves? ? ? ?
Observe and recommend books
A story about two male protagonists, "The Last One" The first male protagonist is ugly and lecherous. He was supposed to be the devil in the world of demons. But by some mistake, he was recognized as the holy son of the fairy world. From then on, he embarked on the path of the prodigal son's return... The second male protagonist, his personality, is upright and handsome. He was supposed to be the holy son of the fairy world. But by mistake, he was destined to be the holy son of the fairy world. Next, he was identified as the Demon Son of the Demon Realm, and has since embarked on the path of becoming a villain... The story unfolds between these two half-brothers... This is the theme of this novel, if you are interested in reading it, read it, at least the logic is online, the plot is reasonable, and there are laughs and tears. Welcome to complain
Although the work definitely refers to the sword, I hope the author can write something unique.
I won't be disrespectful. The background setting of this content is mostly based on Jian Lai. However, there are a lot of articles in the world. You can learn from it. Don't copy the gourd just to make money. Write it well. Jian Lai is a masterpiece and you can learn from it. But it also has disadvantages. The beginning is too big. Now the general manager is so slow. Maybe this part that needs to be finished is not easy to write. Don't follow in the footsteps of the general manager.