Lingzhixian Clan

It's a bit limiting. This time travel is more indigenous than the indigenous. The protagonist Ling Zhifu, in our real physical world, there are piranha and various plants with thorns. In this fantasy world, there are not more ferocious plants. Why don't we plant them in circles around the tribe? I write them over and over again, just these few things, it makes me sleepy😪! With this improvement that comes from cheating, other indigenous spiritual planters must not starve to death? This professional feeling is not reflected at all! Since it is singled out to describe the main job and the article states that this industry has become a system rather than a way, then there must be a supporting combat system, not to mention the whole job of spreading beans into soldiers, but also the whole point of corresponding. I feel that as soon as I have the clan land, it starts to go wrong and return to the old routine!

There are only two left

It looks good, it's the author eunuch

Well written, rigorous and commonplace

Let me ask, is it single heroine, no heroine, multiple heroines?

Plants absorb spiritual energy, but only inhale but not spit it out. Is there still spiritual energy in the world of immortality? The biggest role of plants on nature is to interact, filter, and transform. This setting can be made more reasonable. Plants absorb the essence of the sun and moon (photosynthesis), spit out spiritual energy, and absorb underground nutrients and fertilizers to grow. This is more reasonable.

My writing has become more and more bland recently.

Non-toxic and pretty. Unlike some novels about cultivating immortals, the story does not start with a loan to buy the Foundation Establishment Pill (as if having the Foundation Establishment Pill will guarantee success), and the family goes bankrupt.

I just took a look at the table of contents and the pace is a bit fast. I feel like the writing pace is only over 200 chapters long.

It's been more than 300 chapters and I haven't built a foundation yet. How can I suppress it so much?

Can you handle this awesome bragging? How long does it take for you to be awesome? It's not worth watching, I'm withdrawing!

After reading a few chapters, I found that this author's writing is very strange. The overall writing style is very colloquial, even a bit verbose, and then the dialogue is written in written language, which is solemn and awkward. There is a fatal flaw. It was said before that there are not many spirit growers, but later it was said that 3 and a half spirit stones per month is the normal hiring price. The first level of Qi training requires 3 spirit stones per month. The protagonist breaks through the Ling Zhifu at the first level of Qi training and is considered a genius. This does not make sense logically. According to the situation of ordinary people, it is estimated that the breakthrough of Ling Zhifu is in the middle of Qi training. How many Lingshi are needed for one month of practice? Ten yuan or eight yuan? How many hours a day do you take care of, delay your cultivation, and still earn enough spiritual stones for cultivation? This is inconsistent with supply and demand. The author's writing style seems like that of a novice. The difficulty in writing a long novel is to build a worldview. One of the foundations for building a worldview is to build a currency system. Many authors know that they are not good at writing, so they just write it off. The advantage is that it is not easy for mistakes to occur, which will lead to the collapse of the currency system. The disadvantage is that after writing a book, the worldview is still vague and unclear. If the author does not have the energy to build a complete world view for the time being, he should not write about wages, prices, etc. Otherwise, it will be easy for loopholes to be unreasonable, and he will always be criticized by readers. By the way, try to write as little as possible about the poorly written and unreasonable plots of auctions, black markets, being hunted down frequently and getting rich by killing, secretly entering the treasure troves of aristocratic families to steal wealth, witches, witches and noble ladies being entangled and being inexplicably targeted in various ways. Look, author, I still love you for giving so many suggestions.

It's almost 400 chapters and I haven't built a foundation yet. I'm doing nothing all day long. I just follow this fire and that fire and just hang out in the street. The world view

First, the timeline should be lengthened, so that the family does not develop in a short period of time. If it develops so fast, everyone knows that you have a problem Secondly, family members should die of old age and fight to the death, so don't force the plot. Many families have a problem in cultivating immortals. One family member breaks through a certain realm, and then the rest will follow suit. It's as simple as eating.

More than three hundred chapters have not yet been established, and the plot is too slow!

In fact, you don't need to write too detailed about your daily life. Reading too much will make it seem a bit long-winded. 🙂Of course this is my opinion.

Unlimited combat power, don't get into any pits on the road

The writing is okay. You follow your own steps. I think it's pretty good. I've basically read all the family stories on the market.

Monks from small families look for female monks who are born as mortals, big families look for marriages with small families, and big families marry each other. The marriage of monks is a political marriage. The problem is that it is unrealistic for you to find a wife and develop your family through monogamy. The first is what to do if you are born without spiritual roots. If you want to give birth to a child with spiritual roots, how many will you have to give birth to? Separation of mother and child is another problem. It is not realistic if you are a female monk. First of all, you have to practice. It is not your fertility machine. After all, you have legs. Female monks are very popular and they will leave at worst. If you are unlucky, you may not be able to give birth to hundreds of children. After all, this is a simple probability. All children have the same chance of having spiritual roots. This is difficult to justify! So it is best for the family to have a birth base in the mortal world and just find a bunch of women to have children. You are already an immortal. In the mortal world, aren't you an emperor? Isn't it easy to find a bunch of women? If you have spiritual roots, pick them out for cultivation. If you don't have spiritual roots, just continue to hang out in the world. I can add a setting in front of you. There are a lot of children in the ordinary Liu family, such as grandpa, but your father has spiritual roots. This is in line with the setting that spiritual roots are unique. If children are born according to monogamy, the Liu family may have no descendants.

So far, it's actually a pretty good book, and I've been reading it. Here is a small suggestion. It is recommended that the author push the descendants of the protagonist, including the heroine, as far back as possible. Don't write it too early, otherwise it will be difficult to arrange it when the time comes. After all, if you start it too early. There must be some words and ink to describe it, as this can easily be too distracting. At that time, there will definitely be some deficiencies in characterization. If the author's writing style is good, just pretend I didn't say it, but most of them definitely don't have the ability in this area 🙂 (Finally, I hope the author will push the time forward a little. This feels a bit slow, but it is still okay at the moment, but if the author follows the current pace, it may take two to three hundred chapters to complete the foundation building)

What I'm writing about later is that whatever happens, it's best to write some interactive plot with the outside world.

It has been more than a year. I have been working in a factory for so long, so I must have saved some money. When will I come back to write novels?

After reading the book review section, it turned out that it took more than 300 chapters to build the foundation. After building the foundation, I entered the palace.

I have some bad views, especially about the son-in-law who is a breeder.

It has a strong sense of fragmentation and a bit of splicing.

It looks good, I love reading it, but it's not enough. The author needs to be more powerful.

In the first level of elixir, the lower grade is inferior, the lower grade is average, the lower grade is excellent, the middle grade is inferior, the middle grade is average, the middle grade is excellent, the upper grade is inferior, the upper grade is average, and the upper grade is excellent?

The last two chapters were about cheating money, they were about magic or something like that.

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Suppressing war, suppressing levels, various kinds of pressure, the economy of pressure was in chaos, and the system collapsed.