All Heavens Martial Patrol

The picture shows the game Nishuihan's profession Blood River (also considered a kind of Blood River sect (actually it doesn't matter much 😜), which happens to also use guns

Who has chosen the heroine? Jade book?

I remember that the main plot at the beginning of the book was to go out to find the cause of the death of the master and senior brother. How come we directly enter the Supreme Being? Is the outline changed or something else?

It's been a long time since I've seen a fanfic of One Life Supreme. I have the desire to read more. Come on, author

Your sudden change of direction is so abrupt that I can't stand it.

Since I wrote about the spear and the white horse, why not write about the combination of the horse and the horse and one person using the power of the horse to charge and kill invincibly?

Come on, author, the writing is pretty good.

The writing in the front is really good, although it is a bit watered down and has not entered the world of Lord of One Life, but in the back, it is a bit abrupt to enter the reincarnation, and the reincarnation tasks are also a bit streamlined, which does not reflect the personalities of several characters in the original work. They are like irrelevant NPCs. They are very impatient and finish the first reincarnation task. Comparing the plot in the lower world of Lord of One Life, one is very detailed, and the other is very rough. It's very fragmented, as if someone else had written it.

The author's writing is good, he doesn't look like a newbie

Jin Baoyi became a giant. . . Licking well

😰 To be honest, it's a bit confusing. There are so many characters. Although Wen Lao is one of the four great martial arts masters of the new generation, his popularity is indeed not as good as that of Jin Lao. Don't mess around, Finally, it's not fun to read. Although I think you wrote that the protagonist is very powerful and defeats the opponent, I can't be involved in the protagonist at all, and I can't experience the sense of pretentiousness The story used by Squid in the dungeon has a sense of deja vu. I'm not familiar with the names of those characters, but I feel familiar with the series of deeds and stories. It's the story of the Sword Emperor, isn't it the Legend of Double Dragons of the Tang Dynasty? As for the kind of stories that are ugly but not plagiarism, there are fewer squid characters and the stories are relatively simple. , And then fill the story with hidden side branches such as powerful chess and deciphering the world view, so that it will not appear dry, It is like the chapter of Zhenwu Tomb in Gujiazhuang, which is to prevent the marriage, the purpose is clear, the story is smooth, and there are not so many complicated things,

The talent of the pig's trotters is quite awesome. It's not much different from the three Zhang Sanfeng stacked together.

What kind of martial arts is the Three Character Classic?

Author, can you send me your outline?

Mingzun has already lived his second life, when will you win the resurrection match?

Let's put it this way, weaving the author's words into cloth and selling them to the north will be enough to solve the water shortage problem in the north.

Come on, author, you wrote well.