People in Marvel Are Lawless

The strength of the first three chapters persuades me to quit, but the protagonist described in the following is not only stupid but also useless. After the protagonist comes into contact with Gu Yi, his personality changes too much, and his personality is split, as if he is a different person. Moreover, the author wants to describe a fun-loving person, but the actual performance is that he is a clown who knows some secrets and competes everywhere. Authors write books to make money and for readers to read. If you don't care whether you make money or not, it doesn't matter. You can write whatever you want. If you want to make money, you have to cater to the public and not take it for granted. Do you think the protagonist I wrote has gone through hardships to strengthen himself and is immortal and has a strong character? I wrote it really well. What the readers see is that the protagonist is a waste or a clown. He was tortured into a dog and still feels very awesome about himself. The author can refer to the problem of "The Promise" and "Dream Showbiz" for this situation. The most shocking thing is that the author feels that it is not that he has not written well, but that the readers have a problem 😅

Most people are complaining that what is written is a piece of shit💩 Only the author himself thinks this is the gold in it💩

The main character is Xiao Zhao San. The title of the book is too confusing.

More than half of the people are complaining, have you ever thought that there is something wrong with the author's own plot writing 😅

As we all know, the titles of the stupid books in Qidian are now viewed in reverse terms. For example, leisure should be regarded as laborers, and people of the motherland should be regarded as social animals.

Can the author lend me 500 yuan? If he can write a big saint like the protagonist, I guess the author is also a big saint.

No, brother, why don't you vomit? If you want to enjoy yourself, write a book and enjoy yourself, why are you posting it online? They're all criticizing you, but you're still here to bully me. Why don't you write your own book to please yourself? You've posted it online, but others haven't said anything about you yet, so you're still upset. Don't write online articles if you have a fragile mind. Isn't it good to write for yourself? I had to explain myself for a long time. Is it useful? Useless. Readers cannot see in your writing what you want to share, what you want to express, what you want to convey. If you cannot express it yourself, you can only rely on the comment area to explain it yourself. You're so proud of yourself while you're still here, can't you just let it go and play by yourself?

Okay, okay, Immortal can indeed be lawless, but the protagonist is a bit lame in your description.

I was embarrassed. In the first three chapters, I was beaten to death by a gangster and then fought with a homeless man. Those who came in because of the title will have to leave after reading three chapters.

After looking at it, the biggest problem is that since there is such a big problem, the pig's feet are not dead. Generally speaking, if they are either causing trouble or going crazy, they will have a goal to go home at the end. But so far, I haven't seen the pig's feet have any mobility, and they are running around without any purpose. Without a goal, there is no motivation to move forward. How can the novel advance the plot? Suddenly an ancient one appeared, and after ten years of reading, he learned how to use a portal and ran away. The plot felt very abrupt. The Huskies still have a goal.

There is basically no way to save this book now. Unless we follow the example of Kent, a native of our country, he will not let go of anyone who offends the protagonist, put down all the plots of the original work, kill him if he is unhappy, sleep if he wants, and leave it for fun. Otherwise, the title of the book will backfire on him.

Many book reviews say that the protagonist's character is not likeable. Here is some explanation, I hope you can understand. The protagonist does not have a special and distinctive setting. He is not a holy mother of great kindness, nor a bad seed of great evil. He is an ordinary person with the most common complex human nature. Good and evil cannot be defined by one or two things. He will change as things develop. When the protagonist first came to Marvel, he was feeling terrified, and then he was shot dead because his abilities were resurrected, which was supposed to be a good thing. In the blink of an eye, he was kidnapped and blinded by Mrs. Gao's people. These encounters had a huge impact on the protagonist's psychology. I didn't write it down in detail, but it can be seen from some of the protagonist's behavioral reactions (actively asking for death, showing off, and hating) that the protagonist at this time is already showing signs of darkening, and even wants to kill everyone who knows his secrets (including people like Matt). At this time, Ancient Yi appears and gives the protagonist a hand. He not only explains his immortal ability to the protagonist, but also teaches him the suicide spell (instant death ability). The purpose is to let the protagonist understand his ability more clearly. With immortality plus instant death, no one in the world can really hurt him, so that the protagonist can completely free himself from worries. At this time, the protagonist's mentality changed again. There was nothing to be afraid of and he began to let himself go. There will be changes later, so I won't go into details here. It's the right time. I won't write out the character directly. Instead, I will set it out through the words and deeds of the protagonist or the words and deeds of others. Everyone needs to experience it for themselves. It will be more meaningful if you embody it yourself. That's all, I hope everyone understands and supports it.

I want to express my opinion, but you don't have to take it seriously. Writing Marvel is not cool, but half of it is cool. If you don't discriminate against black people, it's half cool. If you don't engage in big things, it's half cool.

It's not like you're writing an online novel, but instead making an independent film, which is dark and twisted, as if it's close to reality. All the bad things in the world are your world and pursuit. As for whether the audience will resonate with it, whether they have a sense of empathy, whether they like the protagonist's outlook or not, it doesn't matter. This is all a matter of commercial films. Then if you keep a diary, why bother writing a novel for others to read?

Author who feels good about himself. Are you excited?

No, why did you write the first three chapters? Why write a protagonist? You can obviously avoid such a scenario of being beaten to death, resurrected and blinded by a gangster like this.

The protagonist possesses the power of immortality and discovers that his mental aspects have also been strengthened. Not only does he have mental immunity, but he also has the ability to remember photographs. After living on the streets for half a month, I finally learned English. Then he went to a restaurant to work illegally. The boss was a bit of a gangster and only gave him one-third of his salary. The protagonist saved a little money after working for three months, went to a second-rate dealer to get a driver's license, and then took the driver's license to open a bank account. Then the protagonist went to deliver food to people and run Didi, but found that it was difficult to make money, and remembered the saying of studying hard and making progress every day, so he went to a community college to sign up for an adult degree (there is such a thing in China), but found that his undergraduate degree was too low, and he had a photographic memory, so he went to graduate school, majoring in computers, and then usually wrote programs for others. In my private life, I once wrote ERP software for a company. As a result, someone found the protagonist who called himself Rising Tide Organization and asked him to bury a hidden API in the program. The protagonist felt that the other person was not a good person and ignored him. However, this was just a test for this organization and invited the protagonist to join Rising Tide Organization. The protagonist considered that he could cooperate with the other party to learn hacking techniques and utilize dark network resources, so he joined naturally. This brought him into contact with Skye, and in turn, S. H. I. E. L. D. The protagonist discovers that Stark has been kidnapped and understands that the plot of Iron Man is about to begin, so the protagonist prepares a sum of money, posts employment news on the dark web, and hires a team of mercenaries to successfully grab an experimental sample from the Extremis Virus Laboratory based on the information stolen by Rising Tide. After the protagonist gets it, he injects it into his own body without hesitation. Although he has the ability to be immortal, he still cannot solve the side effects of the Extremis virus. At this moment, you couldn't control so much, so you decided to make money, so you went to the gang's territory and robbed the other party's cash reserves crazily, but your whereabouts were also exposed, and you had to leave New York. At this time, someone in Rising Tide contacted you, claiming to help you. Based on your past life experience, you felt that the other party was either SHIELD or Hydra. You had no choice anyway. You agreed, and the other party helped you clean all the funds in your hand and arranged a clean identity for you. But what's weird is that the other party didn't arrange your next move. You had money to write programs for others, and you used the money to enjoy life as much as you wanted. After playing for a year, you found that this kind of life was boring, so you went to college again. This time you choose biology. You have to use your own research to solve the side effects of the Extremis virus and become a strong man with long battery life and long attack power. It depends on how the author writes it later. He and Skye joined S. H. I. E. L. D. And developed obscenely. Or stay and fly with Skye, join the Inhumans, gain abilities through rituals, and become a fire man. After Skye's mother died, he officially took over the Inhumans and became the Fire Lord of the Inhumans. Then he led the Inhumans to develop steadily, but the world was unstable and he had a conflict with the mutant Magneto. Magneto was a pervert and insisted on converting everyone into mutants. You were the first to be affected as you were close, and then you burped. Then your immortality was activated and you came back to life. You accidentally got the mutant ability "Man of Steel". At this time, you have the Inhuman ability Fire Man, and the Extremis Virus just complements each other. Coupled with the melee ability Steel, your strength has been strengthened. However, you feel that you still can't beat Magneto, so you learn from the painful experience and decide to use scientific methods to practice like ancient Qigong practitioners. You suddenly think of the principle of hot air balloons, and then gain the ability to fly by burning up your whole body. Forget it, I'm too tired, I can't make it up anymore.

The title is wrong and the article is still lawless. You will live like this coward even if you are immortal.

After reading the comments and knowing the content, I'm probably going to pounce. It should be a common problem that the plot and logic are not dealt with well. For example, a powerful golden finger is often failed. For example, if you talk about a big crisis before, you will play house with a small person later. This kind of situation usually means that the author starts writing a novel as soon as his brain gets hot and makes up the plot. If the author adds some childish values ​​​​to emphasize friendship and patriotism, then the dog will not read it.

The name is lawless, but it starts from the outdated bottom-class labor mentality, but you don't realize that you can be lawless when you know that you are immortal? This came from the mouth of the third person Gu Yi. Can a person who silently protects him be so unable to control his mouth? Why did a Supreme Mage from Ancient One go crazy and morally kidnap the protagonist? Things done out of guilt are not long-lasting. Hatred, belief, and responsibility awakening are all good things, but they have committed a moral kidnapping. The first thing he did when he knew he was immortal was to kill the three black men at the beginning, no matter how cruel he was. Then they would tie up explosives and attack the Hand, go there dozens of times to force them to sue for peace and admit their mistakes, and then come to the door one by one with a baby-like smile. Knowing that he will destroy the timeline without him, he crazily changes the plot to create countless worlds, and then participates in the rescue with a smile!

There are a lot of complaints in the comment area. I have always been tolerant of these comments and am willing to accept them with an open mind. Due to limited manpower and lack of writing power, I dare not say that there are definitely no problems with what I wrote. Some places are indeed not handled well. I accept all of this. However, many of the people who complained in the comment area did not read the book carefully, and some even made complaints without even reading the book. Many readers said that the title of my book does not match the content, but the problem is that being lawless and without taboos is not invincible. It must be gradual and there must be a growth curve. You cannot just punch Gu and kick Thanos right from the beginning. This makes readers happy, but what should the author write? As for the character of the protagonist, I emphasize again and again that he is neither a Virgin nor an ox or a horse. I think the description in the book is straightforward enough. Why do you all regard him as a saint? Can the Saint think about killing Matt and the others to protect his secret? Can the saint refuse Gu Yi's overtures and Gwen's prayers again and again? Can a saint do something like "rob the rich and give to the poor"? Can the Saint destroy the Hand and kill the Kingpin in the first 100,000 words?

The sadist is outdated and has no sense of substitution.

This protagonist setting is indeed not very good. Do you think it looks good to you?

Given the immortality of the protagonist and the title of the book, I thought the protagonist would first strengthen himself and then live a wanton life!

After reading Chapter 4, let me know what you think. The author probably thought of the creative method and wrote it there. This is not impossible, but you have to refine it yourself before showing it to the readers!

Some people complain about the plot, some don't like the characters, and no one can change their subjective opinions. But I like it very much, I like it very much

My name is Belak, and I am a mortal. I saw Nurgle spreading the plague, I saw Khorne killing wantonly, I saw Tzeentch playing tricks, I saw the slayer trembling on the bodies of the gods... Mortals indeed have limits, and so do the gods... I originally thought I would die bravely like a hero, but I never expected I gave up, I knelt down and surrendered, voluntarily becoming a demon. I prayed devoutly to the Four Evil Gods and vowed to become their first mortal believer in the world. So, I became the devil's chosen one. ............................. My name is Belak, and I am a demon prince. The four evil gods were overjoyed to receive the support of the new race. In order to compete for my allegiance, they kept blessing me, so I obtained the plague of Nurgle, the blood madness of Khorne, the magic of Tzeentch, the perversion of Lust... I used the power of the four gods to conquer countless ethnic groups, build huge palaces and statues, and let mortals respect me as a god. I originally thought that as the Demon Prince, beneath the four gods and above ten thousand people, I would fight forever. But I never expected The four evil gods were jealous of each other, and in order to monopolize my faith, a scuffle broke out. They finally asked me to choose one of four options. So, I thought, since I am so strong, what else do I need these four old men to do? I choose, want them all! .................. My name is Belak, and I am a Shadow Father. The four evil gods were shocked by my heroism. They made a temporary truce and jointly took away all the blessings from me, shattered my material body, and imprisoned me in the Shadow Realm forever, never to come to the mortal world. I thought I would never choose and sink forever. But I never expected Tzeentch interceded for me and allowed me to come to the mortal world once every hundred years to crown their new eternal choice! And act as his little brother to drive at will. Is this grace? No, this is humiliating! So, I designed to kill the first 12 Eternal Chosen ones, and now it's the turn of the 13th one. This child Archaon is my heir, and he is the vessel I chose for myself! I originally thought that I would successfully seize the body, escape from the shadows, continue to rule the world, and take revenge on the four gods. But I never expected A guy with a warhammer would run into the medieval world and kill, destroying everything! ............. My name is Bilak, and I am a poor man. Actually, I am not dead. I have 30,000 tons of gold and 30 million magic soldiers sealed in Cathay. Now I only need to click, collect, and read to unblock it! Believe me, when I unblock you, I will pay you back a hundredfold. The devil has no jokes! Only lies (delete this sentence and don't post it)

Zhen Shui can write a few even if he is a beggar. I don't know what I think.