The Red Chamber at My Fingertips

First, the author's depiction of a collateral descendant born into a slave's fate is... Quite jarring. Secondly, in the simulation, Grandmother Jia asked the protagonist to be Da Lianbao's servant... No, no matter how down on his luck he is, he is still a member of the Jia family. How can a brother be a servant? Third, did Lady Wang assassinate Jia Lian for the title?

The key to writing a novel like *Dream of the Red Chamber* is grasping the characters' traits! If you can portray the characters well, you've succeeded; otherwise, you won't be able to write anything truly original about the plot.

I have a lot of questions. Why would the author write that Lady Wang killed Jia Lian using Prince Teng's connections and military force? First of all, it's completely different from the original story. And this was after Lady Wang was engaged to Wang Xifeng and came to fetch him; why would Prince Teng agree to let her kill him? It just doesn't make sense.

Cavalry should use long weapons for charging, not swords. The protagonist should ideally use a spear on horseback and a sword on dismount.

Make the main character more capable and less effeminate.

A work of mischievous intent and poor taste is hardly worthy of being considered refined. The stories in it are all fabricated. However, if there are any errors or omissions, please point them out promptly. If I receive praise, I will be infinitely grateful.

It was truly painful for Qin Keqing.

They've started omitting chapter titles again... Chapter titles are practically a synopsis, and honestly, if you can't see them, there's little incentive to click and read.

It gets better later on, but there are still some logical inconsistencies. I won't go into the beginning, but just consider this: a dignified earl and general, yet his residence has no guards, and he has no personal soldiers accompanying him when he goes in and out.

I can't understand it; it has a classical Chinese feel to it, and it's difficult to read.