Douluo's True Demon Arrives

This is specifically written to describe the quality level of martial souls. There are eleven levels including inferior quality, inferior quality, inferior quality, inferior quality, inferior quality, and superior quality. I would like to ask the author, does this mean that a low-grade martial spirit will evolve into a low-grade martial spirit?

Is there a Shennong? This author also deleted the comment. I guess it won't be any better. I can't accept the opinions humbly. I think...

It can be seen that the author wanted to integrate the environment of Qingmao Mountain in ancient Zhenren. The two works were originally incompatible with each other, so there was a strong sense of division.

I think you are a little strange. Gu Zhenren has rich character settings, and each character has a different way of thinking. Why are you so busy linking Master Gu with Douluo Continent? Everyone in Douluo Continent is a love brain, and no one has a brain. Maybe you are following Master Feng Gu on the Internet?

It's very messy and bad. It's just a piece of cake. A Gu world full of silver coins and a Douluo full of dinner are sewn together. The look and feel is very bad.

What jb is playing wildly, it is recommended not to watch it

It's a bit messy to move Master Gu into Douluo.

I don't want to read it when I see Chapter 6 First of all, since the author wants to write about real people, he must also know that the Immortal Lord has love and is very serious, instead of just knowing his demons and unscrupulous means. People are like this after 500 years and the family relationship with their younger brothers has been separated. But what has the protagonist experienced in this story to be so unscrupulous? Secondly, this writing is really messy.

The author's way of writing is really not suitable for Douluo. There are also Douluo real-life fans who write good personal pronouns, but the real-life version is really not suitable.

Is your introduction sarcastic?

After reading the first seven chapters, I felt so confused. Sometimes it mentions the protagonist's awakening of the martial spirit, sometimes it mentions another character Fang Zheng (who seems to be the protagonist's father), sometimes it goes back in time to write about the protagonist gouging out his mother's soul bone (before the protagonist awakens the martial spirit), and now it writes about the love between his parents. The timeline is too confusing. I hope the author can sort out the timeline

The author did a great job of cheating on this Founder. He is even more awesome than other fan fiction protagonists. Innately full of soul power, level 20 at 6 years old, ten thousand year old dark gold bear soul bone, Golden Crocodile Douluo is one of the top five masters in the world. But this is a supporting role? ? ? The protagonist doesn't even have level 10 soul power now. How can you suppress Fang Zheng's cultivation speed like this? With this kind of treatment, other fans can just marry Qian Renxue.

Please, really, please don't do anything when writing Immortal Lord M.

There is one thing to say. This is a book that opens low and goes high. The early stage is indeed a bit stinky and long, and it is difficult to distinguish the characters. But in the later stage, it is definitely many times better than those Shuangwen Douluo colleagues. If you want to watch it, jump directly to him escaping from Qingmao Mountain. All you need to know is that his parents sent it away and he took away his mother's soul bone. And his cousin Fang Zheng, who wanted to take his soul bone, was taken away by the boss of Wuhun Palace. Then reading further down does not affect reading at all.

Except for the part with the external soul bone, it can be said that it is copied from the comics, and what is the meaning of the real demon as you said, and besides the external soul bone, I don't understand the meaning of the protagonist entering Shrek. He already has talent, just find an ordinary academy and plan some fairy grass, but it has to be written as a group flow, and there is nothing new. If you want to accumulate connections, with the protagonist's talents and plug-ins, as soon as you level up, you can go directly to the Seven Treasure Glazed Tile Sect to recognize your relatives. Even if Ning Fengzhi is a little suspicious, he has to admit it. If you have talent and blood relationship, you can find such a good sect protector there, and you may marry Ning Rongrong. If not, you will find a sideline to marry. Although the front is controversial, it is at least very creative, much better than most fan fiction nowadays, but the Shrek chapter is just a bunch of excuses. Alas, it doesn't live up to expectations! Disappointment! Slipping away, slipping away.

Already voted, hoping to stay black all the way to the end

Write Douluo. Kung Fu methods can only be supplementary. Mainly martial arts. Otherwise, the sense of fragmentation will be too serious. Not like fellow Douluo fans anymore

Don't give too many examples, just pick out a few useful ones occasionally. Keep giving examples will make the plot move slowly.

And travel through Douluo. Not taking the grass jelly means you have a brain disease

The forty or so pictures there are just a few of them. If someone writes that Gu Yue Fangzheng reaches the sky with 5-6k words, Fang Yuan will come out. You directly use tens of thousands of words to describe the supporting characters in the early stage. The protagonist hasn't shown anything yet.

Before the first part of Douluo, there was a saying that the first ring lasted ten thousand years? Did I miss it or has my worldview changed?

Excellent! Another Douluo fanfic cut 🤓

I remember that the Ice and Fire Yuanyang Pot is also the place where the body of the Ice and Fire Dragon King is stored. It contains the soul bones, body and dragon soul of the Ice and Fire Dragon King. You don't need to compete in the Soul Master Competition. Soul bones that are tens of thousands of years old are simply not as good as real dragon soul bones, not to mention that there is the sternum of the Mountain Dragon King in them. If you have time for the competition, you might as well go to the Dragon Tomb City of Slaughter. After all, he was a civil servant in his previous life. The fighting skills are too weak compared to those veterans fighting on the battlefield. By the way, you can create your own fighting techniques and methods. Or create your own soul skills that can match the insect instrument. But it seems that Qiankun Wenqing Valley was mentioned before. I don't know what use it is for this guy who has no emotions? Tang San's Xuantian Book. You can seduce Oscar and make him crave power, allowing him to choose a sausage that can see through, thus gaining a unique skill. After all, this thing is still very useful. Of course, if we could train dead warriors who could detect soul memories, they could directly take over Tang San's internal strength and techniques. Then learn the operation of Huo Gua again. After absorbing many dragon bones and fairy grass, his qualifications were pushed to the extreme, and he created a ferocious beast that was about to die (it was really not possible to create a soul beast by himself in the entire copy). Let the other party become the second martial spirit. Then go to Qiankun Wenqing Valley\Slaughter City\Poseidon Island to solve the soul of this wise martial spirit. If we can recruit high-end thugs, we can do a lot of damage to Tang Dachui after he bombed the division competition. I can

The content I wrote today was too explicit and was taken down. It may be released later.

Come on, you are already strong if you can continue writing.

It's uncomfortable for a character to suddenly appear. The author should at least explain why this new character intersects with the main plot.