At Thirty, from Divorce to the Richest Man in the World

It's so perverted. A mother-in-law, a sister from my ex-wife, and an adopted sister from my ex-wife cannot accept this kind of abnormal thinking.

I feel that the quality of this book has dropped drastically compared to the previous book. I spend a lot of pen and ink describing the clothes and body postures of the two mothers-in-law, how sexy they are, and how much they make the protagonist fantasize about. As a pervert, I think you are a bit too perverted~ Also, the titles and context between the two mothers-in-law are very messy, and it is difficult to distinguish the identities of the two intuitively. , The attitude of the two mothers-in-law towards the protagonist is the same from the tone of the protagonist, and the differentiation of the characters is not done well, then I can't remember who the two people are. Of course, it may be that the number of words is too few and the plot is not developed, but judging from the current writing style and writing style, I don't have high hopes for subsequent improvements. I hope the author will polish the details. At the same time, if you have enough energy, it is best to proofread the manuscript. If someone's name is mixed, it will be more difficult to distinguish who is who. It's quite thoughtful that the winning numbers for lottery tickets change according to the protagonist's different choices, but the lines and situations the characters communicate with seem a bit idealistic and even childish. The performance of Goldfinger was very vague when it first appeared. Why did financial investment information suddenly appear? You have no details! When you see a mobile phone, various information on the mobile phone is displayed. When you click on the mobile phone and see stocks, various investment information will appear, right? There are a lot of situations like this where there should be details but not, not just Goldfinger, there are no details to speak of in terms of plot advancement, character dialogue, or feedback on things. What I mentioned above are all the most basic issues from the reader's perspective. More professional ones include article structure, story rhythm, and characterization (especially the two mothers-in-law~ You really chose the selling point of this story... The title of your book says sister-in-law! You put all the The hormones are all bursting out in your mother-in-law. What do you think? ಥ_ಥ) I can't even say that if you want to eat this bowl of rice, I mean full-time code writing and this life, you really have to work hard or find a professional training class to improve your professional skills.

The protagonist divorced the heroine's sister, got together with his younger sister, got together with his childhood sweetheart "good buddy", got together with his secretary, got together with the female bank manager, secretly got together with the mother-in-law who changed her name, and gave birth to a baby before the mother-in-law went through menopause ƪ(‾.‾")┐

Haha, yy is a good thing, but going too far is just mindless.

After reading a few chapters, I have some questions. I don't understand it, or did the author make a mistake? The ex-wife's adoptive parents passed away and the biological mother was 41 years old. So the question arises. The 30-year-old male protagonist and his ex-wife were college classmates. How did he have a 30-year-old daughter?

Super, super classic Shuangwen mode, and it is a mode from more than ten years ago.

Normal people can't write it.

Although it's a cool article, you can't really be brainless! Do you know what it means to have billions in cash in a few months in 2008? You are the number one cash flow person in China and you have no ability to protect yourself. Do you want to tell the world that I am a fat pig and come and kill me?

The formulas in this book are very old, and they don't have the feeling of modern literary works 😃

The plot should not ask for the 3 million. They are all divorced, which makes people look down upon. Although it is difficult to turn over without starting capital, it is not difficult if the male protagonist has a golden finger. He can do everything after a few rounds in the stock market.

It's a brainless and cool article. The process of accumulating wealth is extremely simple and crude. It's a brainless account. It's 5 billion in just over 20 chapters. I couldn't stand it anymore and ran away.

This is what you wrote about the sex scene in Chapter 34 and you don't want to read it anymore.

It's all the same routines as the previous book, and the characters' psychology hasn't changed much. It feels like a second installment, and I can't get into it~

Don't always write about the people in your ex-wife's family. It's boring and boring.

At which chapter will there be meaty scenes?

This tastes just right, what was written in the previous book was a mess. I have no intention of reading any further!