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After reading the update, I still don't understand why the second-grade marquis keeps targeting a commoner as a "waste". It's not so tough to set up a target. After all, the second-grade marquis is a second-grade marquis, and he is inferior to the first-grade marquis in terms of title and force. Unless there is a real hatred of life and death, otherwise he will not be so stupid to target him. However, in the author's writing, the second-grade marquis is a high-ranking person. , He is just a young boy with no city government, he is cute and stupid, and wants to provoke people who are stronger than him. The author writes that the first-grade Hou is also a waste, as if he is alone, without his own confidants, and will not arrange for followers such as guardians to follow him. His son was plotted against him, but he just slapped him in the face instead of retaliate. Is the son of the second-grade Hou opposite him still a warrior? Aren't you afraid of raising tigers? There are too many different logics. It doesn't look like something written by a normal person, but more like a hydrology written by AI.

🙂The story of the transformation of a loser who lost his teeth when he was too old

Why do you always think that scholars are weak scholars?

I started writing without even thinking about it. First of all, the first-grade marquis is higher than the second-grade, which means that the first-grade must be very good. Then the introduction to martial arts is the lowest in the first-grade, which seems confusing. Secondly, the first-grade marquis's martial arts training secretly goes to a brothel to practice secretly, and then goes to Jinshan Temple to practice secretly. Can't practice at home? How? Are you afraid that your parents will kill you if you can practice martial arts? Where better than your own home to concentrate on studying and practicing martial arts? It's not like there's some inheritance competition going on in your family. Then I don't know what the role of the little fat guy is, what is its significance? He is always there when the protagonist is about to practice, nagging him to go to a brothel. The protagonist goes to Jinshan Temple for retreat, and then goes to Jinshan Temple to harass. I am very curious. Firstly, this character does not drive the plot, secondly, it does not cause story conflict, and thirdly, it does not advance the development of the story. Why is there this character?

The Pei family has disgusted the protagonist and his family for too long. It is not popular nowadays. This kind of supporting character has been crazy about death. The protagonist has to find an opportunity for a long time and cannot solve it. Readers have no patience for such a routine. Life is already frustrating enough. Now that I'm older, I just want to watch something relaxing. Don't waste too much time on a clown. Let's move forward with the plot quickly.

Lao Deng has opened a new book and started to get involved from all over the world.

I think it's okay when I read it. Most of the readers who read novels now are old bookworms. What they are looking for is novelty and excitement. The writing seems to be very smooth, but the only drawback is that in ancient times, the first grade was the highest and the ninth grade was the lowest. I don't think it is necessary to do it the other way around. And I think martial arts should be divided into physical training and internal strength, as well as martial arts. These three types. The author's description of the martial arts realm from the first to the ninth level is actually a bit petty. There is no clear boundary, such as what changes will occur after breaking through a realm, such as the level of internal strength, how many levels of internal energy can be released, how many kilograms of strength, how many yards of speed, whether the life span has been improved, etc. Then there is the antagonistic villain, the Second-Rank Hou, who is a bit blunt. There is also a fat boy among the classmates who is a good brother. In this novel about being reborn into high school, more and more clichés are used. Remember not to be cliche when writing novels. Also, the world view feels a bit small. The protagonist is so awesome at it. I don't know what will happen in the later stage. However, when it comes to just practicing martial arts, the upper limit feels very low. Even if I write it down, I probably won't have much direction. Unless there is a cultivator behind. But it doesn't feel like a cultivator.