My Life Has the Gift of Growth.

Update every day to keep the word count down, right? See you in half a year.

Di San

The writing is quite good, and the rhythm of setting it up is fine. I am just a little worried about the comeback of an old author, so I subconsciously wrote a plot that was exciting a few years ago. It was fine a few years ago, but now it is poisonous.

It was a pleasure to read the first few chapters, but after seeing the turning point in chapters 6 and 7, I always felt like I had a lump in my throat. Just write it hard

The character creation in this book is very good. It is rare to create a relatively good mother (this is really rare in Seven Points Orphanage). The characters are very vivid, very real, and very three-dimensional. The heroine is also very suitable, and the other supporting characters are also okay. But the problem is that the plot twist is too blunt, the plot needs to be polished, the pace of some chapters is too fast, the foreshadowing is not in place, and the foreshadowing has just begun to be laid. The reasons for making enemies are too far-fetched (mainly because the encounter with Zhao Linglong is too abrupt), and it is easy to lose readers without two very big points. Then, I can only hope that the author will continue to work hard. The important plots and turning points can be slowed down and not written in one stroke. Also, if you can write about daily life, write more. Since warm and humorous daily plots are what the author is good at, then write more. Humorous and funny daily life can also become the feature and bonus of your novel. Finally, 2 recommendation votes are dedicated to you~ (I can't help it, the level is low, there are only two per day, please give me more recommendations because of my many words~)

It is said that your book is the founder of this genre, but the number of words written by you as the founder is not as many as those who follow the trend. If you do this, you may lose your identity as a founder. On the contrary, others who wrote better and wrote more took over the identity of the founder of this genre.

I was walking down the road and saw an American spy killing people. Then the spy put a knife to my neck. But she suddenly doesn't want to kill me anymore? What logic?

What kind of evil dragon form is the ultimate life form?

Chapter 6 You don't change. There's no need for you to write a book, you won't get ahead.

It's wonderful. I can only say that I don't want to eat this meal, so don't blame everyone for eating it. Let's get this theme sorted out.

It was good at first, but then it felt weird.

The plot of the first five chapters was very comfortable and full of expectations, making people want to continue reading. However, in the sixth chapter, Zhao Linglong suddenly appeared, and then the plot changed rapidly. All the efforts of the protagonist and the heroine were just to defeat this Zhao Linglong later. There was no sense of expectation at all, and the attraction disappeared.

The first few chapters were well written, but I fell into a cliché after meeting that woman. . However, I have to say that the writing style is very nice, but I didn't like the plot at the end so I gave up. You can try reading it. If you like the plot, it's still worth reading.

Chapter Six: Pure Stone Feeding, I specially selected one to talk about

Such authors will never change anything they say. They will write as they should and the way they write will never change. Instead of making suggestions, just withdraw if you don't like it. Advice is useless.

The writing is good, but the plot structure also has problems. The female villain appears too abruptly. Why does she dare to use her powers in school? Why can't she sense a little kid? At this time, the villain story comes when the protagonist is only a few years old. Later, Han is told that there is a bad guy. How does the protagonist know that she is a bad guy? What if the female villain has special abilities? After all, you have seen too little of a little kid. The early chapters are very good. From the female villain, it is obviously wrong. It always feels weird.

It's meaningless. It's been almost 3 months and there are no 90 chapters. Although I don't write novels, I don't know if it's difficult or not, but as a reader, I really have no desire to read this act.

There are too many subtitles in the comment area, so I won't repeat them. Here is my sincere advice to the author Feichang. This book gave me a taste of "Legend of Masters", very light, just a little bit. But the author's entire novel collapsed from Chapter 6 onwards. The accurate description is that it has become vulgar and has become a novel with a strong commercial flavor. If you give the first five chapters a definition, it would be very spiritual. Diners cannot teach chefs how to cook, but they can comment. There is a saying I often hear people say, when a gun is described at the beginning, then the gun must go off in the next section. So, the follow-up author, can you implement what you think in your heart and don't waver. What readers want is a qualified story, whether it is a business article or a fantasy article. After all, the author also needs to be good! It is not the messy, fragmented and inconsistent work that it is now. The author should set a tone for the work.

Man, this new chapter, eight hours after it was published, is still in the 80th place. The plot, writing, and rhythm of this book were all good at the beginning. Now it's mixed like this. To be honest, I thought you were slower at first and thought you were playing hard to get (which is actually not appropriate). Later I found out that you were scolded and your grades started to drop. Not only did you not increase the speed, but it became even slower. I think you are going to be an eunuch. Now you give people the status of a living dead. It is tasteless and it is a pity to abandon it.

It's all good, but there are only two flaws. One is the rhythm, that is, the turning point in Chapter 6, which is too abrupt and too intellectual. The other is that the data and cheats are vague and not precise, but the writing is not bad. The remaining two are easy to change. Take out your own outline and details and compare them with those excellent works. As long as the filter is not too heavy, you can usually make changes. The second is to simply make a data table and text. Also, remind the author that the protagonist should not be deflated or eat less. Now it is not better than before.

The meaning of the plot is unclear, especially the female alien warrior

What is the situation with the alien martial artist? The fact that Zhao Linglong can still go out and move around proves that she is no different from normal people at least in appearance. Alien beasts are not evil gods. It is impossible to believe in alien beasts just because they eat their meat. So it is neither a group to keep warm under the pressure of normal humans nor a gathering because of the belief in evil gods. Then what is the basis for the existence of this organization? What are they going to do and why are they doing it? It's impossible for their genes to mutate and they are no longer human, so they want to destroy human beings. This is ridiculous. The hybrids in the Dragon Clan cry out for loneliness all day long, and no one wants to exterminate the human race, ushering in the prosperous age of hybrids. If humans exterminate ordinary hybrids, they will become the bottom of society. The mutants of the X-Men did want to kill ordinary people, but that was based on the suppression of mutants by ordinary people. People like Zhao Linglong who live smoothly in normal society are closer to hybrids, so why do they oppose humanity?

Finally I got to the eunuch. I had said before that I was going to die and deleted my posts. I kept writing nonsense and refused to change my words. How could I keep writing? I was constipated and had big bowel movements every day.

What kind of stuff is promoted by this daily guide? The author has already shown it.

My friend is still alive. I haven't read it for three months. I really have no books to read today. I was looking around in the bookshelf and saw that you are still updating. There are 33 unread chapters now. In other words, it is still an average of one chapter every three or four days. It is still the same as before. Author, there are not many authors who have not changed their original intention.

The consequence of writing such a broken story is that the relationship between Bai and Zhao is inexplicable. I read it in one go, and then I felt that Bai and Zhao suddenly established a relationship directly from friends, especially when Zhao asked Bai for a kiss.

If there is no eunuch, please check the comments section later to see if there is any eunuch

I just said that this book seems to have a familiar feeling. It turns out that it has been updated for almost a year.

I'm curious how the author came to the conclusion that the main reason why some book friends gave up on this book was that the emotional lines in the book were too developed. Is this the result of frank discussions with many readers? Or did you just make it up out of thin air? As for the classification of novel types and labels, my personal opinion is that they are just tools. For creators, it can be used to optimize plot design and sort out the story line. For readers, it reduces the effort required to select works that suit their tastes. And because the planned story development exceeds the scope of the preset types and labels, the story development created by oneself is regarded as a failure... It is difficult for me not to question whether this is a bit putting the cart before the horse and treating the tool as an end? Finally, let's talk about whether the writing was smooth or not. If you, the author, only want to develop within your comfort zone, then of course you can increase the same weight. If you, the author, want to expand your creative abilities, you still have to strengthen yourself. Although I regret that this book ends abruptly, I still wish the author a better one next time.

Is there a studio to write a book using the author's name? I will definitely read it as long as it is in the introduction.