My Achievements Are a Bit Abstract

The more I read Chapter 140, the more and more something is wrong. I feel very torn from front to back. The protagonist behaves differently like a schizophrenic. Especially the first virtual realm is poorly written. On the one hand, the protagonist does not want to explore anything, and on the other hand, the protagonist collects the hearts of the virtual realm. The collection of the hearts of the virtual realm is completed. What happened next and the prompts from the system have almost put the answer into the protagonist's mouth. The protagonist is still saying that he doesn't know that this situation will not happen if he uses his brain. It is difficult to imagine that the high IQ that he was forced to show off at the beginning and the low intelligence and ignorance now can appear in the same person at the same time.

I saw Chapter 429. The plot of breaking the global martial arts test is really good. I couldn't help but look at the table of contents. From Chapter 249 to Chapter 545, I haven't finished it yet. Moreover, it can be said that there are too many, too many, too many, too many "intelligent comments made by netizens" in it. It can be said that it is endless, and the word count is completely low. There was even a chapter where four-fifths of the content was devoted to "the idiotic remarks of netizens", which really made me laugh. Friends with average poison resistance can stop watching Chapter 249 when the martial arts test begins. Friends with high poison resistance can read Chapter 364. Reading later will be a waste of your time. In general, the first 200 chapters can be used by friends who are short of readers to save themselves.

Before release - good looking Before 100 chapters - OK Before 200 chapters - Tolerable After 200 chapters - Answer

. . . . . Difficult to evaluate, it is better not to evaluate

The plot is good, but can it be less clumsy? There are a lot of repetitive and useless nonsense. It feels like a mess and I can't stand it.

The writing is good, I like it, author, come on👍👍 Don't give up💪💪

The protagonist is a genius, but he has always wanted to live an ordinary life, so after his spiritual energy recovered, he also committed to being an ordinary person. The tone is set here, and I hope it can be implemented.

I really couldn't help complaining, and I didn't want to be told that I didn't spend any money and I was not qualified to complain, so I gave a reward of 100 First of all, this book is a novice, about system achievements, urban superpowers, pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger It's not too poisonous. Take a look at Shu Huang, I guess I won't have the desire to read it if I don't read it for a day or two. Why I want to complain is that many of the things the author uses the protagonist to say are private goods. The setting of the heroine is very cheap, it was set 7 or 8 years ago. A high-level national official and a scientific research boss then started dating the protagonist online, drawing a circle that shocked the world. Isn't znm the female version of the Dragon King The same goes for the protagonist, who talks about sex and does everything in vain. She can't help but think seriously. People find out what she is wearing in her underwear every minute, and it all depends on the author to patch it up. In fact, the above can be tolerated, but I can't help complaining about it. I am currently seeing the riot in Chapter 21. The one who went to the supermarket to buy goods. Oh my God, not to mention those doomsday enthusiasts who broke the news online and the previous blockade. Even if it is superficial, those with some brains will more or less go to buy goods. I don't know if the author doesn't understand or to add drama to the pig's feet. Everyone is drunk and I am alone? Only the pig's feet are prepared in advance? Others have been immersed in the peaceful age? Only the pig's feet have channels, are others robots? Before the incident, I was still following the previous program settings.

I originally thought it was a funny one, but I didn't expect it to be this way. It seems like I'm going to screw up and mess around, but in fact I have to get involved in everything, and I always have to involve the protagonist no matter how rigid the reason is. This kind of method really persuades me to quit!

First of all, it's water, it's really too watery. There is too much irrelevant information (commonly known as nonsense), causing the pace to be too slow. Secondly, the author does not know what the readers want to see. I don't know about others. Anyway, I was attracted by the strange achievements, and there were fewer and fewer achievements later 💔, and the content later was very cliche, with no innovation 🙂 Anyway, I slipped away. Farewell🙏

What a waste of money. Really pay to see this. . . . A large family will force the king to throw you into a city alone and raise you like a wild dog. This is not appropriate. Let me put it another way: the emperor gave birth to two children, and then the old emperor went to guard the border. The eldest princess succeeded to the throne, and the prince was thrown into the folk, and it was called protection and training. None of the wild historians are as wild as you.

The setting is awkward as hell, but Awakening to the Extraordinary is not afraid of hot weapons! Take the first transcendent person that the protagonist beats to death, for example. The strength shown was only to the extent of breaking walls and damaging cars. Although the protagonist's unawakened power is a bit beyond the scope, he was beaten to death with fists. In other words, physical strikes are effective. It is reasonable not to be afraid of ordinary police guns. Can submachine guns be ignored? Can Gatlin ignore it? Or does it mean that hot weapon strikes are ineffective as soon as you wake up? The two Solar-class ones at the back can only fight helicopters. Can they still defend against missiles? Only sky-level people can fly. Do you want to know more about fighter jets? Do you know about nuclear bombs? It would be very speechless to weaken the state's violent institutions to death! There was no spiritual energy before the seal was broken, and it was difficult for extraordinary people to even preserve their extraordinary abilities. But as soon as the seal was broken, the sun burst out, and even the strong ones at the title level managed to survive before the seal was sealed? If it weren't for the book shortage, I wouldn't even bother to say anything and just leave 😒

We middle-aged and elderly people don't read articles to draw pictures 🌹🌹🌹, nor do we just want to kill time 🕐🕐, we are following the footsteps of the times 🦶🦶🦶 to show our true selves Record a beautiful life and leave beautiful memories🕣🕤🕥, although we are no longer young👨🏻‍🦳 but we have a heart that will always be young❤️✨❤️✨, encourage you and your loved ones💪💪💪

After reading 200 chapters, there are too many places that give people the feeling that the male and female protagonists are willful based on their status. For example, the female protagonist does not consider the overall situation and wants to meet the male protagonist first. The male protagonist is deliberately put in jail for a week just to act out a visit incognito, and then reveals his identity and directly seduces others to show off. (The author said that he wanted to write about the psychological transformation and growth of the protagonist, but I couldn't see any growth, and it was not well reflected in the subsequent plot) Also, the identity of the top military commander in a local garrison, Yingzang, fights with a group of high school students in a ring to compete for college entrance examination places? Brother, you are really good at writing 😁😁

It smells like a Japanese-style migrant worker comic. At first, I felt that I had no identity or status, but later it became more about blood and fatalism.

My evaluation is to start high and go low. When the Dragon King slaps the face at the beginning, the rest is a piece of shit, no different from the garbage outside. I doubt that the front and back of this book were written by the same person.

The funny article is not funny and is destined to be a hit on the street

The pacing of the first part is pretty good, but it's fun to read for a novice. The later batch of inexplicable water that enters the virtual realm can only be skipped and read. There is no need to write about the virtual realm and cultivation of immortals. These are too complicated and messy. Just write according to the framework before it is put on the shelves.

The official knows that the protagonist is awesome, and the protagonist also knows that the official knows that he is awesome, but the protagonist insists on pretending to be an ordinary person, and the ordinary people around him don't know, and then occasionally comes out to pretend to be awesome.

I've been crazy for the past one or two hundred chapters. There are various campus competitions, and later there will be national competitions. I'm convinced, you idiot.

It's too watery, the plot development is too slow, it's been on the shelves for so long, and there's not even a decent battle. It's supposed to be a good read, but it's very unpleasant if you do it this way. It's been dragging on for more than ten chapters, and it's an effective plot. That's all. I'll write a big story about the quarrel with Xie Ying 🙂🙂🙂. Come on, be more real. Don't make up for it. You've already put it on the shelves.

You can read the book, but I don't recommend subscribing. It's enough to see the protagonist enter the establishment. The painting style of the protagonist is quite interesting. But the plot design is too disgusting. The writing is too watery. Every time the protagonist starts to show off and get slapped in the face. A wave of cannon fodder for the supporting characters will be killed first by subduing their wits. And such poisonous points are still enjoyed. In addition, in the book review area, I also saw a very active deacon account. Click in and take a look, more than 300 days, this is the only book. Deacons aren't expensive either. Can you open a small account and get some snacks?

I thought it was an abstract, funny and light-hearted article, but it turned out to be an invisible pretense about the fight between immortals and aristocratic families. Did the author change? The male and female protagonists can be considered excellent before their identities are revealed, 150 It's hard to explain what follows The city's aura revived and transformed into an ancient cultivating immortal family, and the male protagonist was given the most nimble second-generation immortal identity. It can only be said that it is too cliché, and the personalities of the male protagonist and the female protagonist do not match their identities, so it is a bit awkward.

I started to change my style as soon as it was released. If I feel affected, take a few days off and set my own pace. Don't get carried away and finish this book as soon as possible. It's really annoying. I want to see a boy and a girl, I want to see b Qianhui

I regret it. I really started high and low. It was like this as soon as it was released. The last few hundred chapters were too watery and used the same old routine. I was tired of reading it a long time ago. The entire chapter was just a psychological description, just explained. It was very tiring to read. The first 100 or so chapters were enough to read, and it was difficult to read (◍••).

Okay, the writing is very good, stop writing it, damn, I still think the idea is very good, and the plot is also good, but can it not be so stupid? Who the hell wants to know so many psychological activities, I skipped more than half of a chapter, don't say I read pirated copies, or black people, I have read novels for so many years, you are really stupid

Unfinished business, serious opening high and going low, lightning protection

The setting is good, but the writing is getting worse. Not to mention the invisibility of the follow-up system, the combat power is also inexplicably broken. Starting from the martial arts test, the front is still a rookie in the middle level of Xinghui. The protagonist reaches the Huiyue after a while? There is also Wang Erzhu, who inexplicably shines in the sun. It's not that he can't shine in the sun. There is no excess in TM. I don't recommend watching the back. It's simply awesome.

Are you serious when you say it looks good? The first few chapters are okay, but what the heck is going on at the beginning of the test? It can't be so messed up. . .

There are a little more flaws, the nonsensical plot is good, there are quite a lot of jokes, the characterization needs to be improved, and the plot is a bit too watery. Some things can probably be understood without explanation, but the settings are a bit confusing after repeated explanations.