Pirate: the Thunderous Fruit at the Beginning Is Thrown into the Mouth

Who can stand to watch the main character being a transvestite? Do you really think that the average person on the Internet is a million people and the real person is Yanzu?

It would be better to delete the Enel chapter, it is too far-fetched and embarrassing.

Go ahead and write this kind of thing 🍅, don't come to this disgusting person

It's natural to use electricity to train the body by yourself, so it's hard to evaluate.

If the thunder fruit is used to control the electrical signals in the body of an organism, can it indirectly control the five senses of the organism and achieve a different kind of mirror? After all, neurons are all electrical signals. It would be awesome if the Thunder Fruit could control them! Also, every living thing has a life magnetic field. Electricity generates magnetism. If the thunder fruit can destroy the life magnetic field of others, it can also kill instantly. And improving one's own life magnetic field can also lead to a jump in life levels. In addition, electromagnetic force is the four basic force of the universe. Light particle strike is the effect achieved by continuously accelerating infinitely close to the speed of light through electromagnetic force. Also, we can try to see if the three-body ball lightning can be reproduced through the thunder fruit? The essence of electricity is plasma. You can try using thunder fruits to attack plasma weapons, as well as plasma balls, plasma shields and the like. Electromagnetic railguns can also be used as a means of attack. Electromagnetic waves are also the carrier of computer information and can carry information. This shows that the information constructed by electromagnetic waves can be directly transmitted to other people's minds, and operations such as knowledge transmission, memory reading, and mind reading can be performed. You can even use electromagnetic waves to change brain waves or directly change the electrical signals of brain neurons, so that the brain can be developed, the brain can be used as a computer, and the Windows operating system built by electromagnetic waves can be installed into the brain. Treat your brain as a disk and do many computer operations. It can also change the electrical signals of neurons in the muscles, thereby modifying the muscle memory and achieving the effect of exercising without exercising.

If you want to complain and curse people, please say it under this post, I will delete the others.

If you don't know how to write emotional scenes, don't write them. It's okay to do it when it's time to do it. If you arouse your emotions, just touch your feet? Are you playing?

Is this protagonist trying to sell his butthole?

There are too many analyzes and monologues, almost taking up the entire chapter, resulting in too little main plot. This kind of thing can be mentioned in one sentence. It is purely superfluous and a common problem among novices.

The plot is stretched and there is no sense of involvement. If I want it, I will eat the thunder fruit. I joined the navy in the early stage to learn the six styles and learn domineering. When I have the strength of a general, I will become independent and invincible.

Hypocritical Pirates Playing House Pirates

It feels difficult to get involved in the plot. When I read these recent chapters, I almost thought I had read the wrong book. There is no pirate flavor 😅

Was this book written by a junior high school student?

There are thousands of pirates at the starting point, half of which are Thunder Fruits

Nowadays, aesthetics are dominated by transvestites. Are tough guys and handsome guys not popular?

It's free to rush, just like it first

Brothers are already free, so what kind of bicycles do they need?

Originally, I felt that except for a few short paragraphs at the beginning that were a bit awkward, the rest of it felt pretty good But it turned out to be like this for me? What should I say? What the hell is Enelu? (￣ー￣), If you write that the protagonist eats thunder and exercises under the sky island for several years, which leads to a different development in Enelu's life, I can understand. Why write that Enelu's life changes before the protagonist wears it? Some readers will feel disgusted when this happens when writing about fan fiction. Well, one of them is me😐 It is very annoying to read fan fiction where the logic cannot be consistent😐

I didn't read the content, but I saw it on Daily Guide. Your introduction... Are you planning to write a cool novel? This is not 🍅. Starting from writing this... I'm afraid I'm going to starve to death.