Dating Show: I Got the Script, So I’m Taking It Easy

Based on my judgment, the author is probably a complete novice who is writing a book for the first time. Why do I feel this way? Because it's similar to my own experience. I know a bit about the tricks, but not much; my writing has a certain flair, but lacks a satisfying element.

There seem to be too many variety show-related posts on Daily Poison these past few days.

At first, I thought: "A 10% discount?" But later I realized it's actually quite well-written so far, with natural transitions and a well-structured plot. Highly recommended. Also, I finished reading it from scratch, and it's 5:25 PM now. I have an 8 AM class tomorrow morning, what am I going to do? 😭😭😭😭

The writing is a bit too slow. How long does it take to build up this plot in 30 days? This should be a side story, not the main one. There's some repetition between chapters. I understand the author wants a warm and cozy atmosphere, but that requires faster updates. It's gotten a bit boring these past few days. Actually, the beginning was quite good.

Author, hurry up and start fencing with me!!! Let's have an online romance, and then I'll use your chat style to chat with my goddess. I'll be a ruthless copy-and-paste robot; you handle the brain work, I'll handle the physical work. I'll reward you after I succeed.

In conclusion: Non-toxic and edible! Congratulations! You've discovered a romance novel that respects the reader's intelligence, eliminating the jarring and overused live-streaming style that seems solely for the author's own reaction writing convenience. Currently at 190,000 words, the story is progressing well.

There weren't many exciting moments. It felt like the author was tired of the same old Koishimura stories and wanted to write something different, but it just wasn't as good as the cliché Koishimura tropes.

The pacing is poor, and there's not enough conflict. If you compressed the current 65 chapters to 25 and started adding more chapters, I think it would be much better. Having only character development without conflict means there's no story, which is a weakness.

Up to chapter 27, the plot and the female lead were alright, it was a bit of a slow burn. It was just that the male lead was so freaking complicated, especially in chapter 27. Was the penalty for breach of contract millions or tens of millions? After sending the text message, I didn't want to read any more.

How to describe it? At first, I also felt the plot was quite drawn out. It wasn't the kind of story where every plot point was substantial, and the male lead didn't seem to be the kind of character everyone admired. By chapter 77, only Ai Xi had feelings for the male lead, and it was a mutual attraction.