Three Kingdoms: Liu Shan of Shu Han

Stop adding unnecessary drama and conspiracies. What Liu Bei said to Zhuge Liang when he was dying was absolutely sincere. There wouldn't have been any executioners nearby. Liu Bei's ambitions and aspirations outweighed his desire to continue the family line.

When the protagonist transmigrated into the body of the Crown Prince instead of the Emperor, the Battle of Hanzhong had just ended. Did the protagonist make no difference to the Battles of Xiangfan and Yiling? If the Battle of Xiangfan was difficult (even if it was, troops should have been deployed to defend Yiling first), then the Battle of Yiling would have been easy.

This Liu Shan is just like any other Liu Shan; he's not much different from the others. I'm getting tired of him.

The writing is quite good, the concept is quite good, but I don't understand why the people of Shu Han call themselves the Shu Kingdom.

If you traveled back to before Liu Bei died, why not change the story of the disastrous defeat at Yiling?

The plot is good, but the writing is poor. It's not that it's terrible, but at least don't make it so complicated, with all the unnecessary psychological descriptions. Inserting psychological dialogue into dialogue boxes is absurd. One main character is one thing, but then there are cats and dogs too. It's utterly ridiculous. Don't they know you can't insert narrative passages into dialogue boxes?

Is this the mid-Eastern Han Dynasty? The author might consider writing about Emperor Shang of Han, Liu Long, starting with the period before Emperor He of Han's death when Empress Deng Sui ruled as regent. The author should consider writing about Empress Deng Sui's crowning achievement and the revival of a fallen dynasty.

This novel is so well written! Keep it up, Chen! You'll definitely become a top-tier author. For those waiting for updates, you can also check out "Rolling Ming Dynasty," it's pretty good too.

I hope there will be less narration and more dialogue. Let the narrative flow where necessary. What's the point of all the narration? It reads like a short video novel narration.

Brother, please write just one more chapter! I can't take it anymore, please, brother. I feel like ants are crawling all over me, I'm shaking uncontrollably, and I can't breathe. Please, brother, just one more chapter, just one more chapter. I promise I'll never touch this stuff again. Please, brother, really, just one chapter. I swear I'll never touch this stuff again. I just can't take it anymore.