Changsheng: I Have a Treasure Map

Make a copy of all the exercises you have learned. And then based on every city, every town, every village, every county, every country. The four arts of cultivating immortals are alchemy, weapon training, formation, and seal writing. The introductory method and the small success method. Pass it on to everyone in the world, and then distribute those forbidden techniques, burning lifespan-enhancing realms to all mortals in the world, and absorb the power of others to improve your own cultivation. [It's like, all mortals practice the Evil-Repelling Sword Manual or the Sunflower Manual, and only you practice the Heaven-Swallowing Demon Technique or Beiming Xuan Gong, Transformation Technique, Star-Absorbing Technique, etc. Make all the mortals in the world your blood bag. Or give all mortals in the world to practice the Demon Summoning Sutra of God's Tomb. And he is the ancestor who created this technique. If you die, you will randomly take the body of the one with the weakest or the strongest technique to practice.

The writing of a female character like Jiang Mengyu is really vicious, just like how it was written ten years ago. She is surrounded by people with dark hearts, and she is the only one who is stupid and sweet. Then the protagonist either actively or passively takes care of her all the time, which is a burden. Depending on the situation, there will be a lot of scenes later.

Why don't you start writing about orphans in poor mountain villages? That way you can write hundreds of thousands of words and then start cultivating immortality.

My crotch caught fire 🔥 and I jumped three feet high. My good brother tried to confront me with a fire extinguisher to no avail, because this is my unquenchable fire of praise for this book! I couldn't stop crying and wanted to cry, because I was afraid that the tears would blur my eyes and prevent me from seeing such an excellent work clearly. I went crazy. I went crazy in the living room. I jumped up and down, mumbling words. If I'm not crazy, I'm not a human being! If I die like this, please hand over my body to my dearest author Da Da!

It's too low to change the practice of Kung Fu and still have to practice it

I have read more than 30 chapters, and I really feel that it is good. It is not the usual cliche route. The characters are well portrayed and things are explained clearly. The pace is a bit slow in the beginning, but the plot is compact. If you continue writing, it should become popular.

I've finished watching it, and it's quite interesting. It feels a bit like the grassroots rise of mortals. Although it has a system, it doesn't completely rely on the system. The protagonist's brain is always online, and the supporting characters are also well portrayed. There is no daughter given away yet. Now I have left Novice Village and am preparing to go out into the outside world. I am very curious about what the follow-up will be and I look forward to it.

Characters from the black and white camps can upgrade each other better. Forced, this is very disgusting. No matter how good your story is, it will be useless. It will only speed up your death.

I will not delete normal opinions and negative reviews. Any comments that are personal attacks and uttered obscenities will be deleted as soon as I see them. 🙄

I have finished reading the latest chapter, let me know your thoughts. 1. The character Jiang Qingcheng is not described in detail enough. He was obviously a genius, but his explanation of why he betrayed his family was not thorough enough. You can use a few words to deepen your portrayal of this character. For example, he can use the family education he has received since childhood, his ancestor is very kind to him, and he cannot accept his ancestor's perverted ideas, etc. 2. Jiang Mengyu feels that the author wants to write about a character like Shen Youchu. But it didn't make sense for what she was going through. The author's portrayal of her is very inadequate. Whether she was trained by the ancestor of the Jiang family to become the cauldron for his breakthrough in the Jiang family, or when Jiang Qingcheng led her to escape from the Jiang family, she should not be so innocent. Even if Jiang Qingcheng loved her very much during the years when she escaped from the Jiang family, she shouldn't. A cultivator who respects power and can kill people at any time. If Jiang Qingcheng wanted her to live, he shouldn't let her be so simple. 3. For the male protagonist, the author suppresses the male protagonist's ability too much. In the first stage of Golden Finger, spiritual stones are still used. In the second stage, the lifespan starts to be used. What to use in the third stage. It is recommended to modify the second stage. Also, expressing that the protagonist is surprised does not necessarily have to be expressed through the words and deeds of the male protagonist. It can also be through the demeanor of the male protagonist. When the tiger body shakes, it can be used as little as possible. It looks really strange. Also, regarding the separation between the male protagonist and Jiang Qingcheng, the male protagonist, a person who cherishes his life so much, actually bets with his life whether Jiang Qingcheng will let him live. When I saw this paragraph, I naturally thought of choosing the first one. 4. Let me ask about the good aspects. Some of the characterizations of small characters are very good. Just a few sentences can give people a sense of picture. The plot is very compact and not watery. Although the author is only level 1, I feel that his level is very good. If he keeps writing, he will be at least level 5.

Let me teach you a good way to make money for the protagonist. Since you have written about the method of becoming a Talisman Master before and it is monopolized by the cultivators, and you have an introductory book for Talisman Masters that allows people to learn how to make talismans, you can simply make tens of thousands of copies of this book and sell it to casual cultivators. It will definitely make more money than learning how to make talismans from scratch 🙂