Transmigrating Across the Myriad Worlds, I Become a God All on My Own!

It was okay in the beginning, but it was really disgusting when I got Tsunade's underwear in the lottery. If the author couldn't find anything to write about, you don't have to write it. If you don't know how to do emotional scenes, don't force it into it. It was really disgusting. I would like to ask if there are any similar plots in the future?

Weasel and Shisui are not so easy to convince. You must know that their brain circuits are far different from normal people.

In fact, there is no need to set this 500 to speak. People don't want to read your discussion at all.

Seeing Byakuya from other worlds go on an adventure with Naruto Byakuya for the so-called Susanata Buddha, and then Naruto Byakuya actually directly changes his code of conduct. It feels very abrupt and changes the plot of genocide. In addition to the fact that the biggest obstacle to Konoha's top brass is Obito and Black Zetsu, let's take a look at White Zetsu's talent skill of disguise. Uchiha Shisui and Uchiha Itachi were beaten to the point of doubt when they were dealing with a spy from the Hyuga branch (I remember there was a patient in the family who had no money to treat the disease and could only sell information in exchange for money). In that battle, the two of them could be said to have lost their morale. They found that the power of the Sharingan was so weak that they could not resist Konoha in Crouching Tiger, Hidden Dragon.

The protagonist wants to get the Jade of Four Souls, but it turns out that both humans and demons know the news that the protagonist is coming. It's so poisonous to disgust people, right? It is said that I have been looking for the Four Souls Jade for a long time. I know where the Four Souls Jade is but I am unwilling to destroy it immediately. When I decide to go after a long talk, both people and monsters know that the protagonist is coming. It is so funny.

Uchiha Itachi and Shisui cannot be persuaded. They must destroy Konoha after defecting.

Just read two and eat them💩. If you don't know how to write about women, don't write about them. Just treat them as vases. You won't think that the plots you stuffed are very good.

So far, everything has been ordered before July 15th. It was okay at first, but the more I write, the more boring I am. I am not the only one who has this comment. Many readers said so. In fact, there are only a few main reasons. The first and most important point is that the author does not care about the number of words. No matter how poorly written it is. But a large amount can make you full. There are currently too few updates. However. Few updates can also make readers want to follow up. This is a good test of the author's writing skills. How to design a plot. Let the plot have its ups and downs. Even how to break the chapter requires in-depth research by the author himself. Now I feel like the author of this book has entered the stage of failure. I can't see the author trying hard to write well. Many authors say that books are difficult to write and their grades are not good. If you don't make progress yourself, why should you let readers consume? I digressed and continued to talk about writing this book. I don't know whether the author did it intentionally or not. The more I write now, the more I write. There are more and more forced explanations and self-talk. It's like others are pouring things into your brain all the time, preventing you from reading and understanding yourself. I don't want you to think it's typical, just listen to what I think. A good piece of work. They are all for future generations to comment on. If nothing happens, they always bring in private information to forcefully instill thoughts into people. Two plot characters have one sentence of dialogue and two pages of explanation. Explain two pages more in one sentence of dialogue. One chapter is a dozen pages. You taste it yourself. I don't know if the author meant it or not. The purpose is to produce poor grades just to show off the poor word count. If you are careless, you should work harder to improve yourself. Every time I write about a battle, I write about it in one stroke, not even a description. It's all self-talk and force-feeding to readers. It's weird that it's interesting to write like this. I say so much because I want the author to write well. Another 20 chapters have been decided and I still can't see the author getting better. I won't stay. Moistened directly. I spend money to read genuine novels. I just want to see something better and more enjoyable. Otherwise, why not watch pirated versions? If you want results, you have to work hard, write, plot, and have fantastic ideas. If you write well, your grades will be good. Readers are not blind. That's all. Don't blame me for speaking harshly. After all, I didn't spend money to study to suffer.

The author should hone his writing skills. I have only seen people who write more smoothly as they write, but I have never seen people who write more smoothly about Yola. How can your writing skills still deteriorate? It's outrageous.

I started writing more than 400 chapters about pirates, and now I have to write them for myself.