Starting from Swordsman and Proud Jianghu, Longevity in Kendo Begins

Just read a chapter? Don't care. I'll just say six words, the middle part of the day after tomorrow. Farewell, you can read it if you can accept it, the writing style is okay.

I want to write elegantly, but I am uneducated. Don't be embarrassed there by driving screws,

The middle stage of the day after tomorrow, the middle stage of the day after tomorrow, the middle stage of the day after tomorrow, the great consummation, the late stage of the day after tomorrow, the first stage... And then the day after tomorrow, the first stage of consummation... And then the early stage of the innate, the first stage... And the early stage of the innate consummation.

If we regard science as methodology, there is nothing wrong with Wuxia's integration of science, but this book does not even understand the methodology.

The distinction between the peak of the early stage of the day after tomorrow and the middle stage of the day after tomorrow is really disgusting.

It's too self-righteous and poisonous. The protagonist is like a loser. The author is so humble and licking the dog for his obscenity. It's really embarrassing.

The protagonist is just like Erbi, he can commit suicide by jumping off a cliff. Thank you! Is a 14 year old girl very young? It's the third year of junior high school, or even the first year of high school, and the beautiful changing dresses are already attracting attention! In ancient times, if you didn't get married, you would have to pay a fine! I still feel that the world is unreal, and I am very worried. I am worried that you have crossed a woolen thread.

Are there any novels in which the protagonist concentrates on practicing martial arts? I really feel that the protagonist of this kind of world police is disgusting. Who do you think you are?

I've only read Chapter 8. If the author doesn't know how to write about emotional drama and psychological activities, don't write it. Just tell the protagonist that he likes to be a eunuch. It's boring to read so many 'helplessness, sighs, and headaches'.

The protagonist is a loser who thinks she can attract others' attention by jumping around. In fact, she is just like a clown, a virgin bitch, and an embarrassing loser who is still a mother-in-law.

If the author doesn't know how to write about feelings, he doesn't have to write about it. He writes here and there, here and there, escorting people, and running back to Huashan. It's like a lunatic! The main plot is unclear and the order is unclear!

I read more than a dozen chapters, and I injected inner strength into the horse. I got a great score. What kind of theoretical logic is it? It's so embarrassing. . .

I kept talking about the imperial court's nonsense. I originally thought that saving an imperial envoy was just a temporary copy, but it turned out that the White Lotus Sect of the aristocratic family was mentioned, which was too far. When I read Swordsman, I want to see how you can practice and upgrade. It's about the Five Mountains Sword Sect and the Demon Sect. I'm not here to see you running thousands of miles to quell chaos for the court. It's not that you can't write about the imperial court. If you write less, it will be over if you send people to the capital. As a result, you keep focusing on this writing. This plot is too long and I have no desire to read it.

How can I put it this way? The rhythm is like shitting. Every time you poop, you will get a big lump. It keeps pinching and is constipated. It highlights an uncomfortable feeling. The imperial envoy was robbed just after he was just starting out. The escort process was smelly and long. The beatings came one after another. He upgraded the protagonist frantically. The leader will be beaten out later. Is it true that after completing this fledgling mission, the protagonist will be invincible in the world? Can it be finished? Can't the plot be arranged more reasonably? It is divided into multiple story nodes, with contextual and rhythmic growth and changes. The exciting points are also small exciting points, which can be connected together to form a big exciting point. When people write novels, they also pay attention to a clear level, step by step, and a context to follow.

After reading the introduction, I thought it was Dr. Chen After reading two chapters, I realized that it was a piece of shit, and I was fooled!

From Jiangnan to Beijing, it's okay to go around Henan, but going to Shaanxi is too much.

It's all dialogue with character traits that have a child's temper. Has the author not graduated from kindergarten yet?

It's a good point that you use modern scientific thinking to write about martial arts, but your way of thinking is also unscientific. You need to write the protagonist to be smart, the kind that can be traced back to the origin, rather than showing your intelligence by lowering the IQ written by the ancients.

To tell a joke, Zhang Juzheng was investigating Japanese pirates on the southeast coast and was about to return to Beijing when he was hunted down in Shaanxi.

The author is so bad at word count, he should write it like this: The day after tomorrow, the middle stage, the peak stage, the early stage, the early stage 🤭

What kind of thing is written about, using a sword to control people, and forging a sword that can't even be considered a sword.

This is the first time I saw someone briefly saying that there is no force other than Taoism and the state that can destroy Shaolin.

I didn't want to read it after reading more than 30 chapters. What was written was always forcibly adding some messy psychological descriptions to the pig's feet. The more I read, the more disgusting it became.

I'm so happy that I've written so many chapters. I mean, can you make your logic a little clearer and take a good look at the map? It's really hard to read.

I really like reading this kind of mindless book, but there is a mysterious force that only made me read Chapter 86. I had no choice but to give up on this novel that I suspected was transferred from a female channel.

A bit rubbish. If you don't know how to write about Jianghu, don't write about it. I really can't stand it anymore

After reading more than 70 chapters, I still don't understand. In a place as big as Jiangnan, there is no governor or governor. There are only Jin Yiwei and the four major families. It's outrageous.

Great book, all set! I have been reading books for half a year, and I can be considered an old bookworm. I think the plot of this book is novel, and the characters in the book are all thousand-year-old with IQs. The characters are very rich, the economic system does not collapse, the protagonist improves quickly, and the force value does not collapse. Much better looking than Lord of Mysteries and Sun God. Why Mo Yan, Chen Zhongshi, lags far behind the author in terms of writing style, but if the author insists, he will definitely become a god.

Jin Yong's swordsmanship has no explosive points, so he should go to Gulong Martial Arts. Gulong is nothing but a fast sword🗡️. Swordsmanship can't split mountains even in the mouth⛰️. It still needs to be driven by energy core. If you practice swordsmanship, you can't splash water. Can you block an RPG?

The world view setting is weird. The protagonist's performance of incredible understanding is broken.