
After Becoming a Master of Martial Arts, I Became a Cultivator of Immortality
武道通玄后,我成了修仙者
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- Completed
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- 680k Words
- Genre
- Cultivation
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Cultivation Civilization
- Updated
- 1y ago
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- Qidian
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The protagonist saved an eldest lady, but the eldest lady could not see the situation clearly. She pretended to be the eldest lady in front of the protagonist day after day. The protagonist is also a real dog licker, even if someone slaps him on the nose, he is still smiling.
Very good brother, just follow this trend and don't end up starting traditional cultivation again. There are many versions like yours that just started to analyze, and then they started to pursue various ancient grain monsters and other things, and started to practice traditional cultivation of immortality again. Also, your updates are so slow, so you can't make them faster.
The writing is too slow,? ,, Are there any people who plot against the protagonist without directly killing them? ? As well as those hostile aristocratic families, dynasties and royal families, after killing them, collect the skills resources and deduction information,,,,
Goldfinger is awesome, but the character lacks IQ
If the protagonist also kills Master Zhu, I also agree that this is a decisive killing novel. It shows that the protagonist is not ignorant of the ways of the world, but he does a lot of bad things. The supporting characters also all have IQ problems, and the big-headed soldiers refuse to retreat even if they fight to the death. Okay, you said this is elite. Well, this kind of elite army, one of the eight major local families, can be secretly mobilized by controlling a few middle-level cadres, which is also a bad idea. What's even weirder is that the protagonist got into trouble because he saved a young girl from one of the eight major local families. Instead, this family just treated the protagonist as if nothing happened and just watched the protagonist being hunted down without even thinking about helping.
Dog licking, addicted to licking? ? Her family's kindness will be avenged, why don't they kill her together? ? It's another mass-produced by AI,,,, Qidian can't afford an editor? ? Or does the editor get a share of the novel? ?
Shennong
The author doesn't know how to write about female protagonists. It's very embarrassing. The male protagonist is a virgin (not a bitch, but a clown).
There are all kinds of poisonous plots at the beginning, the hero saves the beauty, and then in front of others, you create more than a dozen sets of exercises every minute. It took others generations or even more than ten generations to create more than a dozen sets of exercises every minute, which are good for others, and then you have to trade your exercises for other people's. When others go home and say that another family wants to recruit you, you don't agree, and you can't beat others. Do you think your safety is guaranteed? What kind of crazy thinking.
Don't have the power to protect the protagonist? The Zhu family didn't know through that young lady how terrifying the protagonist's qualifications were? Not guaranteed? The Liu family doesn't know how to keep a line in life? md Chaoting doesn't go to the Liu family to settle accounts with the protagonist? How stupid is that director? Who knows how to mobilize hundreds of people under his command? Don't overwhelm the protagonist. Your title is about changing the world anyway, so you might as well do some cross-posting.
Chapter 4 poisoned me to death. I have never seen a woman before, and the person who saved her was almost killed by her. What kind of bloody plot is this? 😅
The protagonist is so awesome, why did he forcefully save that woman? She could develop on her own, but now she is wanted by both the court and the underworld.
By the way, doesn't anyone think that Zhu Yingying's whole body is full of poisonous spots?
The essence of practice is self-transformation. A strong soul can better transform the body and transform the body into the world.
Is it poisonous in the first chapter... Can you avoid acute gastroenteritis if you eat fish that is already smelly? Can you be more serious...
What kind of game is there to kill enemies over levels? This is boring. Being driven away like a dog, you who write the book don't feel sick, but we who read the book feel uncomfortable.
It's a bit ridiculous. There is a huge gap between a grandmaster and a grandmaster. Killing a grandmaster by the protagonist is no different than killing a dog. As a result, the spiritual projection of a grandmaster almost killed the protagonist. I was shocked to see this.
Author, you are so awesome that so many people won't change even though they say it.
Shen Nong tested the poison, it was really 6. There were several fights, and some people ran away, but each time they just gave up and were too lazy to chase them, relying on this to advance the plot. Also, there is obviously a huge shortage of skills. With so many enemies, why don't they leave any survivors to practice and deduce the skills 🤔🤔🤔
It's all over the place. You tell me this is a world of low martial arts?
The protagonist's IQ is not enough
He picked up the carriage and didn't throw it away, so he got into trouble for nothing. When I went to the city, I didn't ask about my destination, but instead walked around leisurely. Killing the head catcher directly will cause things to escalate. You can obviously run away and then turn around to assassinate him. She was wanted, and everyone could find her, but Mr. Zhu didn't send anyone over as if he didn't want his granddaughter. Always carry the oil bottle with you. You can obviously send the heroine back to an escort agency, etc., And then go to the door to pay her.
First, the protagonist is so selfish that he directly burns down an area in order to improve his skills. The poisonous spots are too obvious. Typical demonic thinking, evil intentions, and unscrupulous means to achieve the goal Secondly, the protagonist's shit can destroy the innate, and he can create all kinds of incredible abilities by just making a flame. There is no foreshadowing at all. For something to come out, it must first have a theory, and the theory will have a general ability. Third, the protagonist looks like Long Aotian, a casual cultivator who lacks skills and resources and rejects the family without telling them, and directly offends them openly. It's like lighting up the toilet with a lantern. A stupid one.
There are too many logical loopholes
The soldiers of the imperial court were used as swordsmen. After the protagonist fought back, the imperial court only grabbed the protagonist and slaughtered him. It only dared to get angry with the Liu family and no one dared to kill anyone. How could such a fw imperial court still survive? How can there still be strong people?
I can only say that the comment section is harsh. The writing style of this book is relatively immature at the beginning, but it gets better and better as it goes on. Although it is not a masterpiece, it can still be read. Although the author's character creation skills are not very good, his imagination is not bad. It is a good book. The protagonist is not a licker. You can't say that someone who is being hunted and encounters you just wants to harm you, right?
One chapter a day is the only way to keep books
It's a bit toxic, but it's acceptable. What's unacceptable is that you haven't updated it for two days.
It's okay. Author, please stop being a eunuch. I have already seen that I have started to subscribe to the paid chapters.
Can I add more updates?
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Why did you stop updating?
Why not? No, what happened? What's going on? You didn't ask for leave.