Pokémon: You Can Become Stronger Just by Fighting

The author Man Yun said that in the first battle, there was a scene where the cry slowed down. Why didn't you even check the skills when writing a Pokémon novel?

Passing by

I really don't understand. There are not many good writers on urban elves. They all follow the trend and write either eunuchs or crappy ones. It makes me feel a little disgusted when I see urban elves.

Riding on the waves

I feel that the author may be a cloud player. He doesn't care much about most of the things that both the clearance party and the battle party care about, and the common sense mistakes are quite serious.

Why are you still reversing the course of history? Bogaman's characteristics are: unyielding (unyielding), aggressive, and eager to win. After waiting for so many years, he finally changed his characteristics. You changed it back. To be honest, Emperor Nabo has excellent attributes, but the only disadvantages are speed and skill value. You should focus on these two points for cheating. I feel that Fairy Heart is really unnecessary.

Why did you update Chapter 54? Characteristics were not mentioned at all. Also, you said in the article that their elf qualifications are good, but I don't believe that they don't have inherited moves. If you can, don't write a love line. From these few chapters, I can see that you want to write it, but the writing is really not good. It has no beginning and no end, and the same goes for the plot. Write whatever comes to mind.

Well, how should I put it, I always feel that the protagonist's abilities are not enough. When it comes to training and command, I feel that the protagonist is quite ordinary. Apart from having a golden finger, he doesn't feel that he has any outstanding abilities. .

Is Gengar's cry Geng Geng? ! Shocked me for 100 years

Isn't this too shocking? Why is the skill proficiency not getting higher? I only saw that you can gain experience by eating tree fruits, but how can you gain skill proficiency by eating the tree fruits before? That's nonsense! I didn't see that you set training to increase experience or level up? Bogaman trained independently in the past, but he has not improved at all... Okay, direct upgrade is not good, then your plug-in is too rubbish, and the experience points can only be used for lottery draws. Why did you set the plug-in to give experience points? It is better to set points and points

To be honest, the Sinnoh Royal 3 family still prefers Brother Monkey.

Pig's Knuckles can't take advantage of the system. Pig's Knuckles should continue to play games and upgrade now, but the system's function is not being fully utilized. If you write slowly, you should write about everyday things. This will not please both parties.

Your introduction to the elves is too long-winded. It's enough to give a detailed introduction to the characters and the like for the first time, but to make up for the word count later on, especially the moves. If there are so many moves later, I won't be able to introduce one elf in one chapter. The suggestion here is to introduce the new moves and characters, but don't worry about it later. The protagonist's elf can be introduced as a whole after one stage (if this is all charged, you deserve it), and the second setting can be introduced in a special chapter. I feel like there is something wrong with the plot design. The focused finals are not as interesting as the second semi-finals, and the way the elves fight is very strange. I feel that except for Bogaman, the other elves are not lacking in physical strength and can use their moves casually. It also gives me the feeling of riding a bicycle on the edge of a cliff. Once restrained by the opponent's play, there is no room for resistance. This may be the reason for the low level. Also, the wave of water has become a trump card. The power is only 60, the water gun has 40, and the flame jet has 90. It wouldn't be so strange if I were given a water cannon and a water oath (can I do this if I can do water fluctuations?). There are really no inherited moves among so many elves. Overall, the author is still capable, but he still needs more control over the plot and sorting out the moves. In the elf articles I read, penguins have not been written about the initial elf. It would be a pity not to seize such a good opportunity.

Fake system text: Strengthening Pokémon Real system text: Strengthening the protagonist

In the future, this Bogaman will not evolve like the stupid old guy who doesn't listen to the trainer's words at the beginning. Let's see how the author solves the problem later. Such a character is really not lovable.

The second half of the introduction is bad enough. Who came up with such a cheap introduction? It makes me annoyed when I see it.