Romantic Comedy with All Members, Why Am I Single?

How should I put it, it was a bit uncomfortable to watch, the plot of Kitagawa Ummu and Gojo Shinna felt a bit forced. If the male protagonist feels resentful because Kitagawa and Gojo may have a relationship in the future, then do most of the other female protagonists have to do the same thing? When you wrote about Xiao Ai, you said she didn't follow the original plot and why. It would be better to start by writing that there are not five new dishes. Also, after dating Kitagawa, why is it inconvenient for some girls to tell them that they have a girlfriend? I didn't say anything to Kasumigaoka at first, but I said it later. And it is often emphasized that the male protagonist already has a girlfriend, but there is still no behavioral reflection. I know that the male protagonist wants to start a harem, but he has concerns, but he can't keep emphasizing it no matter what.

Wenzhaogong is inherently a drawback, but you have to use the content of the copy and the number of words.

While thinking about not being sorry to my girlfriend, I took a shower with my sister later. What were I thinking? Both time and place. If you want to open a harem, just open it. If you don't want to, don't hesitate. Are you waiting for the plot to make the heroine(s) fall behind? Scum, too scum, crumbs, too crumbs.

Seeing now, in the free chapter, the protagonist did not hesitate to win Kitagawa Uimu. However, in my opinion, the tone of this book is harem-oriented, and there is also a mark on the character card. But since you have won Umimu in advance, then you will definitely consider yourself Umimu's boyfriend. The old-fashioned plot is that Umimu intends to hide her relationship with the protagonist and not make it public, and then the protagonist can have an affair with other girls with peace of mind, and finally the Shura field breaks out. But the most important thing is that you are a copycat of daily animation. If you are not extraordinary, then why do so many female protagonists accept each other? First of all, the protagonist is exhausted just by dealing with a sea dream. Without a solid body, I am afraid that he will die on them in the end. And I haven't seen what the protagonist's plug-in is yet. Maybe you don't want the system, but at least give it The protagonist has some cheats, such as having a super memory, being very strong in everything he learns, and then giving him a body that can become stronger through exercise. Then in the end, when you become famous and have a halo, the female protagonists may silently agree to the male protagonist's idea of starting a harem. Or directly join Mai-senpai's world view and use puberty syndrome to explain it, but the protagonist's mutation is permanent and effective. Otherwise, why would the protagonist have a harem in a world without extraordinary beings, and there is a high probability that the heroine also has Ying Lili, whose father is a diplomat. It is impossible for you to just write the heroine Hai Meng in the future. Then I can only say that we get together and break up, I can't stand it. I hope the author can continue writing. If you don't have peptide bonds, and you still love the harem party, I will keep subscribing. I may subscribe to the book, but the subscription will not be less. I will subscribe for a while and then read.

I'm just wondering if there is a novel version of "April"? If not, how can I copy the original text? Or do you think what I wrote is the original text? Then my writing is pretty good.

I want to open a harem but dare not, I am timid and angry.

Originally, the time traveler would have replaced the core, leaving only the interpersonal relationship and the shell of the original character. In particular, the image of the shell is the most intuitive and easy for readers to search and imagine and substitute it into the work's behavior. Not only does the protagonist feel that Xiuxinzi is a husky, he also dislikes Iura's green hair and insists on dyeing his hair white to change his hair style, saying that he is like Gojo Satoru. The original Iura Hide has lost his core and turned into a shell. The original relationship between brother and sister has also changed, which is somewhat subtle. It's better to create a character who has all the interpersonal relationships you want, without appearing unauthentic.

After reading so many harem stories, I feel like this one is over. New characters are constantly appearing, and you accept them as you see them. The male protagonist feels like a succubus. Every woman falls in love with him. There is no communication, no events, no emotional sublimation. The author most likely cannot grasp it. There are so many female protagonists that they are basically marginalized. The rest of the story is either too watery to watch or an unfinished eunuch. It needs to be written with richer emotions to make it look better, but there are too many female protagonists and the writing style is difficult to control.

Chapter 183, what the hell is Chapter 184? Why is the protagonist always obsessed with things that happened in the anime but didn't happen in reality? Do you really like to make yourself miserable? 🤔 It was the same thing in Haimeng before. If you open a harem, you can open a harem. What are you doing? Isn't it better to write about sweet daily love life after winning it than to write about these disgusting plots?

Now, not all the heroines and supporting characters in the role column have appeared, they are just hanging up first.

Dating a girlfriend, the result is the same as not dating. She said she wanted to change, but the next day she still had an affair with another girl. That's not how the harem is written, either.

Isn't the protagonist kind of a character? I don't see where the custom in Japan of younger sisters and older brothers bathing together comes from. If you want to find out, check it out. After reading the marketing account, start it directly And the biggest problem is that the protagonist is kissing other girls while apologizing to Hai Meng. If you want to refuse, just reject it. Refuse while maintaining ambiguity, being both upright and upright, creating an innocent character and being a scumbag at the same time. Who are you kidding?

Now that you have a harem, open it up thoroughly. Don't make it so awkward and care about this and that. Whether it's because the world here is a comprehensive comic world or because of the intervention of the protagonist, it is no longer the original work in the original single anime world. Don't care about those relationships that have not happened. Just pretend they don't exist, otherwise it won't be good for your senses. In one sentence, we are all the same person, so don't worry about the original work. Otherwise, should we read the same person or the original work? It's too short. It's gone after just a quick look. Please give me more.

It's better not to come back to the plot of Chapter 183 where you fantasize about being cheated. Although it is to promote the plot of pushing Shiyu, it is still quite disgusting to watch. And if there is no such plot, I feel that Yinglili can be added to get a double kill. It seems that Yinglili was also ready at that time, and she took the initiative, although the effect seemed not to be great. If there is something to promote the plot later, try not to have such a self-inflicted plot, or a fantasy plot, especially since there are so many descriptions in almost one chapter, just follow the normal plot. The main purpose of reading fan fiction is to read light-hearted and enjoyable things, so don't make the mistake of watching them. I don't know if the author reads the comments, but I'm still reading them, and then I give up when there's a plot like this later.

Doesn't anyone think it's awkward to have so many empty ears? 😅 In fact, just write normally. There is no need to edit so many empty ears. The sneezing joke appears so many times that it becomes boring if it happens too many times. In addition, the content of the novel that the protagonist copied several times took up half a chapter and almost drove me away. This is the first time I have read a book with such a low word count in so many years. Don't do it again.

Don't add other episodes. How can anyone write a comprehensive comic like you do? Your main world view has not been extended, so you have to add additional episodes. Don't you have to write it?

The number of female protagonists is limited to three or four, and the main plot is interspersed with daily life. It is almost completed with more than one million words. The viewing experience can be much better than now. Now I can't finish this kind of story without reading one million words.

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If I don't want to write, I'll start a new book, and I'll add a girl more slowly in the next one. Even a Neptune like me thinks it's too fast.

The portrayal of Touha Inisa is so disgusting. I have never seen a doll that changes clothes before. It is not so disgusting. Also, the male protagonist is not proactive and irresponsible. I really don't see any responsibility. It all depends on the change of the female character's own concept. The character creation is very classic. Every woman falls in love with the male protagonist, and then all the other women stick to it.

It was pretty good in the early stages, but more and more female protagonists were added later on, resulting in not being able to write much about each one. If the harem started too smoothly, it would inevitably ruin the character design. More and more stamp collecting is developing.

There were too many new heroines added too quickly, and the daily routine of dating that was originally quite interesting became like rushing to the set. Opening a harem all depends on the heroine changing her ideas on her own, and the unique characters have begun to converge and become labeled, which is a pity.

Are there any similar harem comics with a bit of a golden touch? At least there is a physical enhancement, otherwise the protagonist here feels that he will be finished sooner or later.

It's over and my sister hasn't come yet... I came here for my sister

What about updates? Why is it suddenly not updated?😰

170 Chapters, so cool

Can you please update more? It's so slow. I want to keep it but I'm afraid of you being a eunuch. As long as you finish writing it, I'll book it all.

Give it a try