My Outer God Girlfriend

Outer god?! Will the protagonist be a naughty and effeminate brat who is beaten to his knees by Grandma Ji, a yandere goddess with tentacles?

I chose the wrong track and label. Sci-fi is very popular among newcomers. It might be okay if I choose a light novel. Is it really a single female protagonist? I feel that the rhythm of the emotional line is quite strange, and I haven't seen any real moments of excitement. It's hard to comment on the plot that is enough to arouse the readers' emotions. If you are writing for love, then go for it ❤️

The subject matter is interesting, but the logic in some places is hard to explain.

The male protagonist seems a bit too familiar

The subject matter is novel. I don't know how many readers have been turned off by the name of this novel.

The protagonist is Yogpao? The name is that Bai Ze has space powers and may be fused with the hourglass, which can match the power and omniscience of Yug's time and space. The restricted area of ​​Xu's father may be the restricted area that the protagonist was in before. The heroine is sleeping in the Mariana Trench. I don't know who she is.

Who is the heroine? Ghost girl or Xu?

After reading it for so long, I feel that one of the author's problems is that the writing makes people feel anxious and tense throughout. This will cause the story to lose a lot of immersion and charm.

It's been a long time since I updated 😭😭

It is very typical of light novels. If you pursue logic or rationality, you will feel uncomfortable (of course not without it). Personally, I always feel that the parts that would be more enjoyable are missing, so the interest seems to be average.