I Can Reload My Save in the Ming Martial World

The protagonist is really little Zhuge. Every time he calculates it wrong, he relies on throwing coins to revive Mang.

The protagonist who originally had a free golden finger was turned into a heroic character who serves the country and the people by you, the author. He dedicated himself to the people of the Ming Dynasty and died. I am so tired of watching it.

I would like to remind the author that the book is a good book, but there is a problem with the rhythm of your writing. Things come one after another, the protagonist has no chance to breathe, and the readers feel tired while reading. Now the whole book is basically a one-man show by the protagonist, and the main plot is completely "the enemy comes to the door - the protagonist is killed - reborn to fight back". It is recommended to add some plots such as "managing power, establishing a sect, making friends, and becoming acquainted with beauty" as lubrication. 👌Although it is a martial arts novel, the protagonist, as a time traveler, always brings some small shocks to the world from modern society, whether it is a new system or invention, in short, don't kill and kill all the time.

This book is worth platinum money, author, update soon! ! !

It's a waste to do such awesome things just for water numbers.

The recent stories are not good to watch. Brother Pig's Foot's enemy is a disciple of the Sword God, and a group of people in the arena gathered around to compliment him. Brother Pig's Foot is a disciple of the Sword Immortal and everyone knows it. The Sword Immortal is as famous as the Sword God, and the Sword Immortal has no property and is barefoot! With a bad reputation, in a martial arts world, people are not afraid of a top master who is not taken into consideration, but are they afraid of another local or foreign top master? ! Even if Senior Brother Pigfoot has a bad reputation and doesn't have any friends, isn't there someone who wants to curry favor with the Sword Immortal by offering him help in times of need? My senior brother's family has been suppressed for many years and has taken refuge with the enemy and the demonic sect. The elders in the family are shameless, but what about the young people? Isn't there a passionate and impulsive person? He also said that Brother Pigfoot is arrogant in front of outsiders and humorous in front of his own people. Aren't his family members his own people? Then what do you think the family is doing? How could he be framed? How come you don't even have a supporter if you have feelings for your family?

The writing at the beginning is okay, it talks about the growth of small characters, and the sense of involvement is okay. In Chapter 115, after King Ning raised his army, his writing style changed suddenly and he turned to military writing, writing about city defense, war, and group portraits. After that, I will change the map to fight against the Japanese, and I will probably take the dynasty hegemony route in the future. It doesn't suit your taste, so throw it away!

The writing is good. I would like to make a suggestion. Can you change Nan Jiyun's name? Nan Jiyun in history was a loyal and brave man, and I think he should be respected.

Such pressure on the protagonist? You can either make a small point with your golden fingers, write it as a stand-up, and write about officialdom under the guise of a martial arts hero while suppressing the protagonist, which is not beneficial at all.

The name Wu Chen doesn't sound good, it's not as good as the previous one