
Invincible Demon Lord, the Spirit Corpse Advises Me to Be Kind
无敌魔主,灵尸劝我善良
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 10k Words
- Genre
- Cultivation
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fantasy Cultivation
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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5Chapters
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The previous book has its merits, such as the decisive killing in the early stage and a little bit of brains. The only drawback is that the opening of the harem in the previous book is not complete. The plot routine is too similar, just one, do something and then be chased like a dog. It doesn't matter if you do it 1/2/3 times, any more will make people bored. Later, you are the one writing the book, not you. Why do you have to write the outline according to the outline? Forcibly bound to the family to become a virgin bitch, and let the protagonist's child dance with a sword, what level is it? A little foundation builder is randomly involved in all kinds of things. And it was written like a heroine from the beginning. Then Lin Siyin had to arrange that kind of plot, which was outrageous, so what if she was given the heroine position? And the most unacceptable thing is that she has no brains to hand over those two drops of jade breasts. Secondly, there is too much nonsense. There is also the purpose of arranging a blind date for the protagonist, and the protagonist half-heartedly accepts it. Wait, it's very unreasonable and written like a piece of cake. But overall it's still a bit good, the early stage is okay, about 30/40 chapters ago. I hope you keep the good and improve the bad.