Reincarnating Through the Heavens: Starting in Naruto, I Choose the Otsutsuki

I couldn't stand it when I saw the introduction. Can these reincarnated people choose their own parents after they are born? So if one person chooses Jiraiya and Tsunade, another chooses Orochimaru and Tsunade, and another chooses Sarutobi Hiruzen and Tsunade, what will Tsunade do after they reincarnate? Forced to be 🐔 give birth to these reincarnations?

Also, your character description is actually a bit too pure. The various inexplicable disputes between the reincarnations, and the ninja world are written for you like a child playing house. Brother, think about how many years they have been fighting? Konan, an orphan from the ninja world, talks to you so peacefully, the ninjas of Amegakure Village approach you rashly when they see you as an unknown ninja, and there are a few little details at the end, the black-haired Otsutsuki? I know that when writing this novel, the protagonist's image and name are basically very free from recognition by the locals. However, you wrote a story about a Kaguya tribesman whose image is close to that of the local people. Later, your protagonist is not a tattooed person. As a result, the image has nothing to do with Otsutsuki except for the white skin you mentioned.

After reading the introduction and reading Chapter 5, this setting is a piece of shit. If everyone could choose their own birth parents and fabricate them at will, the original characters would have lived and died long ago. The key is that this is not a parallel universe. There are thousands of reincarnations. How many can one original character give birth to? The funniest thing is that he even added that a copy of the ninja world has existed for thousands of years. It is really a defense. After selecting the parents, the dungeon space will allow the parents to have a relationship according to the situation so that they can be reincarnated and born in the dungeon. Then choose Sarutobi Hiruzen and Tsunade. They can only be born after they sleep together. The problem is that you, Tsunade, are not the only one. There are thousands of reincarnations. Everyone chooses Tsunade to be their mother and then their father. Parents are all random people, does Tsunade sleep with people all over the world, speechless Choose Sarutobi Hiruzen and Kushina, Namikaze Minato and Uchiha Mikoto, Namikaze Minato and Hinata, Naruto and Tsunade, Danzo and Uzumaki Mito, Chiyo and Jiraiya, Naruto and Kushina, Sasuke and Mikoto, Sasuke and Sakura's mother, etc. How can they be reborn in the reincarnation space? What do you think?

It's quite an abstract setting. Thousands of years. The first point is, not to mention changing the ninja world, it doesn't even have the slightest impact on the reincarnations in the secular world. Not to mention that all human beings are waste, the civilians and nobles you choose must be waste. The second point is the population issue. I believe this reincarnation space was only opened in the past ten years.

After reading the first chapter, I want to say that a great author once said that it is best for authors not to write their own bad taste into novels. Being clever will offend readers, unless what you write is a spoof. . .

5.7 Million words is only level 3. Don't you think about why?

The first three golden chapters are filled with a bunch of my own complaints and personal opinions. You're not a newbie, so how can you write it so poorly?

I ordered two chapters to complain about. When you read Chapter 5, you will know what the ingredients are. In order to make fun of it, Xia Jiba set it up, the world is in chaos, and there is no logic.

This introduction is quite abstract. You can freely choose your ancestors. The paternal line is the kage of each village, and the maternal line is the famous name of each country. The ninja world will be unified here. This small wishing machine makes me unhappy.

The three golden chapters are all about quarreling. Is it necessary? You can continue writing the introduction from the first chapter, and insert a story or something in the middle to throw out your setting. There is no need to have such a quarrel and dialogue at the beginning. It is unattractive. The only clicks to come in are from your introduction. It turns out that the first few chapters are all about quarreling and so on.