Reincarnating Through the Heavens: Starting in Naruto, I Choose the Otsutsuki

I couldn't hold back my laughter after reading this description. These reincarnators can choose their own parents at birth? What if one person chooses Jiraiya and Tsunade, another chooses Orochimaru and Tsunade, and yet another chooses Hiruzen Sarutobi and Tsunade? What will happen to Tsunade after they reincarnate? Will she be forced to become a prostitute to give birth to these reincarnators?

Furthermore, your character descriptions are a bit too naive. The various inexplicable conflicts between the reincarnators, and the ninja world, are portrayed like children playing house. Dude, think about how many years they've been fighting? Konan, an orphan of the ninja world, talks to you so peacefully, and the Amegakure ninjas approach you rashly because you're an unknown ninja.

After reading the synopsis and reaching Chapter 5, this setting is utter garbage. If everyone could freely choose their birth parents and create their own, the original characters would have died long ago if they had children. The key point is that this isn't even a parallel universe; there are countless reincarnators. How many children could one original character have?

This is a rather abstract concept. A thousand years? First, let's not even talk about changing the ninja world, it wouldn't even have the slightest impact on the reincarnators in the secular world. It's not that all of humanity is useless, but if you choose commoners and nobles, they're definitely useless. Second, there's the population issue.

After reading the first chapter, I want to say that a renowned author once said that authors should avoid writing their own quirky humor into their novels, as being overly clever can offend readers, unless you're writing a parody.

Five million seven hundred thousand words and you're only at level three? Don't you think about why?

The first three chapters are full of my own complaints and subjective opinions. I'm not a newbie, so how come my writing is so bad?

I ordered two chapters just to vent. Once you read Chapter 5, you'll know what the ingredients are. In order to make fun of the plot, Xia Ji Ba's setting is chaotic, the world is in disarray, and there is no logic to it.

This description is quite abstract. Being able to freely choose one's ancestors, with the father lineage being the village kage and the mother lineage being the daimyo lineage of various countries, the ninja world is about to be unified. This mini wish-granting machine is so ridiculous that I can't help but comment.

The first three chapters are all arguments; is that really necessary? You could have continued writing the synopsis from the first chapter, inserting a story or something to introduce your character's premise. There's no need for such arguing and dialogue at the beginning; it's unengaging. People clicked on the page because of the synopsis, and now the first few chapters are just filled with arguments.