The Great Martial Arts Fortune Starts from the Mud Tire of Martial Arts

The idea is good. One-third of each chapter is devoted to your game. Then you can add functions to your game. You can bind others to absorb experience and blood. You can also add points and talents. Then you can deduce and simulate. Finally, you can integrate it. If you have difficulty with one of the main ones, add functions. Another lottery will be enough. Draw a Pangu Ax.

Do you want to write about heroes or villains? I looked at the villain, and I thought he was growing up as the ultimate villain, The villain, the evil tiger, the madman, wanton and carefree I looked at it, and I saw a protagonist who was affectionate and righteous, wearing the nickname of villain, and doing chivalrous things Recent chapters The protagonist has been affected by After being inspired, I saw a sincere person jumping across a river in winter just to give life-saving medicine to a key figure in the country. He gave up his small family in exchange for life-saving medicine for others, and was killed without any trace of his body. The protagonist spoke of benevolence for the sake of morality. I think this paragraph is a bit like the previous martial arts novels. Although it's good, it doesn't fit the name of a bit of a villain. The idea is to pursue the feeling of benevolence, justice, etiquette, wisdom and trust in the Spring and Autumn Period, that kind of scoundrel in the market, but he emphasizes filial piety, benevolence and righteousness. I feel that the author is going against the trend If nothing else, it is very likely that you will not know how to write later. Your protagonist is almost interesting and not clear enough. Does he pursue the development of a quiet and peaceful way, the domineering and free-spirited way, or the righteous path of chivalry and awe-inspiringness? Logically speaking, the protagonist's golden finger should go out for a walk more often and get more luck. It is best to contact those with potential on the list and wait for the opportunity to bind a few more, instead of binding them after they are delivered to their door like Li Gan did. Li Gan was so kind when he came to deliver vests and exercises to his door. The gold finger hook has not been opened yet, and now there is an extra dragon girl bound to it. The dragon girl is just feeding the medicine dregs so badly, it is better to let the dragon girl return to the dragon palace to recuperate. The Dragon King may not be able to support his beloved daughter? When the Dragon King starts to train the Dragon Girl, why don't he ride a rocket to the sky? If the Dragon Girl is not allowed to go back, I feel like I want to ride a dragon in the future, or the author is suppressing the growth of the protagonist, writing too many supporting characters, and it is starting to become a bit uncontrollable. Wang Xing, Li Gan, and the Dragon Girl are only bound to ③ in total now. If you let it go and just write about the growth of the protagonist, it might be better. To seize opportunities from all over the world, rather than settling down in a corner to retire. The appearance of the Dragon Girl, I feel that the author wants to create a big world view. The Dragon Girl and dragons have appeared. I thought it was a low-level martial arts, but it is about to be upgraded to a high-level martial arts

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Real evil or fake evil There are many such as this kind of fart virgins dressed as evil men And they are so good at martial arts The imperial court, aristocratic families and powerful will not allow cows and horses to practice martial arts

In Chapter 7, he just said that it was his first time to kill someone, and he didn't feel much after killing someone. In Chapter 8, he said that the person was actually not dead, but his head was bleeding? And is it because he didn't kill him?

Why do I always write about villains? I write my name in one paragraph and my nickname in the next paragraph. It's so outrageous.

Isn't this book good to read? Why this score? Are you afraid of the deep alley despite the aroma of wine? I don't feel like I'm a master, but I'm still at the level of a fifth-level author. Is it a matter of subject matter?

He made his apprentice look more like a ghost than a human being, but he accidentally set loose on the protagonist and was killed by the protagonist indiscriminately.

It's a pity that the fighting is quite impressive, but the concept and plot coherence are a bit lacking.

The book is a good book, but if the three levels are incorrect, it will make you feel uncomfortable reading and you will have no choice but to abandon it.

To be honest, I think the previous plot is okay, but what about the nine subjugating demons in the back? Don't say anything about your design or anything, it's clearly bound, and then you get luck. Do you think what you wrote later has anything to do with your topic? Your main line is vague and the plot is scattered. Take another look and if it doesn't work, remove the bookshelf.

The rich and powerful still allow it. People practicing martial arts

Not bad. The background story is fine.

I caught up with the latest. Good. Come on.

It's very well written. I haven't finished reading it yet, so I'd like to give you some advice first. Don't switch chapters between the villain and the protagonist. Chapter 10 teaches boxing and the description of the protagonist fighting to the death is very interesting. Come on, author.