The Liver Gives Birth to Immortality

The further you go, the more boring it becomes. The progress is too slow and the writing is not good. There are only so many enemies in the martial arts training stage, and then there will probably be enemies all over the world. Apprenticeship cannot solve the resource problem, sorry.

It's very similar to another book, and the society is cannibalistic, and the writing is too hot-blooded and middle-of-the-road. Where to rent a boat, follow us. Students can watch it, but older people can't watch it.

It was pretty good at the beginning, but later on it became less interesting after the conflict was emphasized.

I read the novel about cultivating immortals and put it on martial arts every day. I vomited after reading it. When I read about martial arts, I abandoned the book without thinking.

Corruption is not a problem of one person. One person's corruption affects nine tribes. Who dares to talk about it? What you wrote is a hammer. Wang is dead. There is also Wang Wu. If you want a peaceful and fair world, then you must be the one who makes the rules instead of the one who breaks the rules and is chased and bitten by them. It's really disgusting.

The more I read this beginning, the more familiar it becomes; I have already read two books with similar beginnings.

Has the author ever thought about letting the protagonist learn skills such as disguising himself and shrinking his body? In this way, the current conflict environment can be changed and become more stable.

The plot is a bit like "I Use Tao Seeds to Create Immortality". This golden finger is the entry of Liver Experience, and the other golden finger is the Tao Seeds of Liver Experience. The effect is similar. At the beginning, they were selected from local academies to enter the Taoist Academy. They both have a rich N-generation friend, and other friends of the friend look down on the protagonist... I haven't read it later.

Author, if you really want to write about world harmony, then find an opportunity for the protagonist to learn the Blood Sea Scripture of Ancestor Styx. Divide 480 million Blood God Sons. Each Blood God Son monitors more than 100 people. Whoever breaks the rules will die. It can guarantee the universal unity of more than 40 billion people. But the protagonist must be the strongest. Legislator, law enforcer, judge, the protagonists are all shoulder to shoulder. Only in this way can you achieve your goals as the author.

The Yangtze River is not a simple name, but a great legend. 140 million years ago, the Qinghai-Tibet Plateau in southwest my country was still covered by the vast sea, and the Anneitang's Ceratopsaurus was playing on the beach as usual. What they didn't know was that a large-scale orogeny had quietly occurred. This was the Yanshan Movement. This ordeal is due to 70 million years of crustal movement that has caused the seawater to slowly retreat. The Tanggula Mountains in the north were the first to rise. Its main peak is called Geladandong. The glaciers at the base of the river at the foot of the mountain slowly melted, and the drops of snow water merged into a small stream called Naqinqu, which slowly flows northward. This is the original Yangtze River, just like it was when we were children. The fairy-tale world it flows through is called Hoh Xil, and it is now a protected area. When it reaches the vicinity of Hulu Lake, it suddenly turns to the east. At this moment, it is renamed Tuotuo River. Flowing eastward into the sea has become the wish of every drop of river water. From then on, the story of the Yangtze River gradually unfolded like its water surface, until it was thrilling and soul-stirring. The place where we can see the Tuotuo River is Tanggula Mountain Town on National Highway 109, which is both lively and desolate. The Yangtze River leaves Hoh Xil here and continues to run towards the east. After Yushu in Qinghai accepted the Dangqu and Chuma rivers, it was renamed Tongtian River. In that distant place, Princess Wencheng was crossing the river at a loss from Qidukou. At the age of 17, in the unknown distance, Zhu Bajie is weighing many. I don't want to get rich, because to the south is Uzang, where Gao Laozhuang has his beloved girl. Bid farewell to myths and approach history. This is the daughter country mentioned by the Jade Emperor's brother and Tang Seng in the Tang Dynasty drama. Thousands of years ago, Xiqiang girls in Subi Kingdom wearing snow-colored makeup held Tianshangma and rode black horses, galloping in this vast land that stretched from the Hengduan Mountains in the east to the jungle in the west. This is more likely to be the true location of the unique path, the mysterious ancient path from Sanxingdui to Harappa, so there are so many shells in the sacrificial pits of the ancient Shu Kingdom. Zhang Qian would find cloth and bamboo sticks from the ancient Shu Kingdom in Pakistan, thousands of miles away, but Emperor Wu of the Han Dynasty went south to find this ancient passage. Yelang and Gu Dianguo, who were killed for this reason, were really wronged and continued to move forward. The Bayankara Mountains block the eastward direction of the Yangtze River, and the Yellow River on the other side of the mountains has no choice but to flow to the north. There are only two great rivers in the world. Even though they run thousands of miles, they only exist in the land of one country. These are the Yellow River and the Yangtze River. The pride that others only dream of is rare and common to the Chinese. If Bayankara sounds a bit strange, it also has a great name, Weiwei Kunlun. This is the most important one in the Kunlun Mountains. It continues to extend to the east of the Qinling Mountains, forming the Chinese Dragon Vein across the earth, blocking the severe cold in the north and the heat and humidity in the south. Finally, it is connected to the sea by the Huaihe River. This is the dividing line between the north and the south of China. This is also the origin of the thick green onions and the gentle potatoes. The Yangtze River was very angry because it could not continue to the east. It rolled all the way south, carrying the soil of the plateau, and entered the Hengduan Mountains. This is why it is called the Jinsha River. In the Hengduan Mountains to the east, there is the seemingly insurmountable barrier of the Shaluli Mountains, composed of Queer Mountain, Genei Mountain and Jade Dragon Snow Mountain. After Batang, the place where the love song prince Chen He returned to the west, the Jinsha River entered the mysterious Sichuan, Yunnan and Tibet triangle, which is the Great Shangri-La surrounded by Miri, Daocheng and Lijiang. In a small space, three major Asian rivers, Nujiang, Lancang River and Jinsha River, are gathered. For hundreds of millions of years, the three rivers have flowed side by side, each cutting through the Hengduan Mountains, flowing southward out of the country, and joining the sea in Indochina. Both the Nujiang River and the Lancang River have accepted this fate. Only the Jinsha River has never given up its dream of heading east. It is waiting quietly. He is not fighting alone. Billions of years ago, there was a large lake to the east of the Hengduan Mountains. Like the Yangtze River, it has always been his dream to enter the sea eastward. Behind the calm appearance is a turbulent situation. Finally, one day 30 million years ago, the shallow lake basin could no longer carry the high mountains and long waters. The lake continuously cut through Kuimen, Wushan and Xiling Mountains and rushed to the east. This is the origin of the Three Gorges of the Yangtze River. As soon as the lake water comes out, the lake basin emerges from the ground. This is the Sichuan Basin. The surrounding rivers converge into Shenjiang River and flow eastward happily. This is the affectionate and righteous Sichuan River. While flowing into the sea from the east, we never forget to dig into the corners of the Hengduan Mountains to the west and cast a secret glance at the Jinsha River. Opportunities are reserved for those who are prepared. With the rise of the Himalayan orogeny, the Jianchuan Valley, through which the Jinsha River flows, gradually rose. I don't know if Chuanjiang has been planning for a long time, or if Jinshajiang has grasped the opportunity. Finally, one day thousands of years ago, in Shigu Town, Lijiang, he suddenly made a 180-degree turn, abandoned his two friends and turned north. Between Haba Snow Mountain and Jade Dragon Snow Mountain, he broke through the supposed natural barrier of the Hengduan Mountains and rushed down. This is the Tiger Leaping Gorge. The beautiful Daliang Mountains also failed to keep it. After the Jinsha River receives the Yalong River in Panzhihua, it goes down along the northeastern edge of the Yunnan-Guizhou Plateau and enters the Sichuan Basin. At the moment when Yibin embraced the Chuanjiang River, the Yangtze River finally connected and formed. This is a two-way love affair. The river has since flown eastward, so Yibin is known as the first city along the Yangtze River. No matter how soul-stirring the moment we met, no matter how beautiful the love story is, it can't be compared to the time that passes slowly. When history turned into legends, legends turned into myths. Later, the Classic of Mountains and Seas said that the rivers in the Min Mountains emitted smoke, thinking that the Min River was the true source of the Yangtze River. This mistake lasted for thousands of years. Li Zhiyi of the Northern Song Dynasty said that he lived at the head of the Yangtze River, but in fact he mostly lived in Dujiangyan. It was not until the appearance of Xu Xiake that things began to be rectified. On the Yangtze River after Yibin, the smoke and fire in the world gradually became thicker. When Lin Huiyin was in Lizhuang, he might occasionally try Wuliangye. When Du Fu was in Luzhou, he began to thank his master after three glasses of wine. There are a few remaining lanterns on the river, passing through the Moore Gorge in Zhongliang Mountain, the Yangtze River enters Bashan from the Shu River, and the Jialing River and the Yangtze River meet in Chongqing. The awe is clear, and it looks like a mandarin duck hot pot. But Chongqing people, who regard mildly spicy food as their bottom line, never agree. The place where the Wujiang River merges is called Fulin. The mustard here is as famous as the tea eggs. The Yangtze River went to the Three Gorges, Sister Feng Liu Bei escaped from her loneliness, Zhang Fei of Yunyang fell, and Zigui walked out of Qu Yuan and Wang Zhaojun. For thousands of years, too many stories have been staged here. Some people want to drink Meng Po soup on Naihe Bridge in Fengdu. Some people say that except for Wushan, it is not cloud. Whether you forget it or remember it, we are mortals and it is inevitable to be trapped by love. The Yangtze River is used to seeing things, and it goes out of the Three Gorges to Yichang. Millions of years ago, this place was a vast ocean, where sediment from the Qinghai-Tibet Plateau continued to accumulate and turned into Yunmengze, which in turn turned into countless lakes. The river water carries the sediment eastward and continues to deposit on the north and south banks, forming the middle and lower reaches of the Yangtze River plains from the mountains to the sea. To the south of the plain are the Jiangnan hills covered with mountains, such as Xuefeng Mountain, Wulin Garden, Wugong Mountain, Lushan Mountain, Huangshan Mountain, Jiuhua Mountain and Wuyi Mountain. The entire Jiangnan is a magnificent picture of mountains and rivers. Starting from Yichang, the Yangtze River enters the plains, and history settles slowly like the water flow. The river it crosses is called the Jinjiang, and the Jiuqu Jinjiang reaches the Yueyang Tower by the Dongting Lake. It has been repaired and destroyed, and destroyed and new. The projects that have survived for thousands of years in China have never been pavilions and pavilions, but canals, the Great Wall, the Qin Straight Road that runs from east to west, north to south, and Dujiangyan. The skin is still chosen after 2000, and the descendants and ancestors have given their souls to the Yueyang Towers. Even though it is no longer what it used to be, as long as it is called Yueyang Tower, we can say that we are worried about the world's worries. The Xiangjiang River flows into the floating rock caves in Daoxian County on the upper reaches of the Yangtze River at Dongting Lake. 100,000 Years ago, modern people in the Yangtze River Basin were already fighting against wind and rain. Tens of thousands of years later, Westerners along the Nile River also began to leave Africa. The Yangtze River does not stop. After passing through Red Cliff, it meets the sweat, the largest tributary, in Wuhan. This section of the river is also called Hanyang Jiang Boya, a place where the sounds of flowing water and honey come from high mountains. The mountains are gone, the flowing water is still gone, the Yellow Crane Tower is gone, and the white clouds have been empty for thousands of years. The Yangtze River enters Jiangxi at Jiujiang. In ancient times, it was called the Xunyang Ganjiang River. It passes through Poyang Lake and merges into the Yangtze River here. Bai Juyi, a low-key and restrained man from Jiangxi, said while cruising in the river, his face half covered by his oily pipa. In fact, Jiangxi is the real origin of the eight words "Wu Hua Tian Bao" and "Ling Ling Ren Jing". Here are Wang Anshi, Zeng Gong and Ouyang Xiu among the Eight Great Masters, and their hearts have been autumn for several years. The river continued to flow eastward, passing through Jiangxi and reaching Anqing on the north bank of Anhui, the enlightenment city of China's modern industry, completing his mission. The fragrant pen and ink and the four literary treasures of Nan'an record the millennium inheritance of Chinese civilization. Li Bai interrupted the opening of the Chu River at the Tiantian Gate in Wuhu, and the clear water flowed eastward to this point. One word makes a perfect match. Decades later, a generation died not far away by the colorful stone chicken. Out of Anhui and Shanxi, the section now called Yangzijiang in Nanjing, Jiangsu City was not fully formed 7,000 years ago. The mouth of the Yangtze River was still on the line between Zhenjiang and Yangzhou, so Zhenjiang was formerly called Zhenhai. The rich silt brought by the Yangtze River from the Qinghai-Tibet Plateau has caused the coastline to continuously move eastward. Yangzhou, Jinjiang, Jiangyin, Nantong and Shanghai have emerged from the water for thousands of years. The golden bed built by the Tang Dynasty in Songjiang District, Shanghai, has witnessed the vicissitudes of life here. The Yangtze River finally merges into the sea via Chongming Island in Shanghai. The magical city on the coast of the East China Sea has finally lived up to the thousands of miles of the Yangtze River. This is a drop of water on the snowy mountains of China, but it can also be magnificent.

I gave up after about 50 chapters. I think many readers are like this. The beginning of this novel was okay, and the character of the protagonist is also very good. He lives a low-key life, does things in a low-key manner and quietly works hard to improve his strength. Sometimes he is very passionate, and sometimes he is very middle-class. I can't understand this character. Then I made it look like the aristocratic family and the common people are the enemies of the world. Inexplicably, it makes the protagonist's family become the enemy of the aristocratic family in the world because of poverty. Are you the author tired? Everyone who is watching is tired, and there will be all kinds of troubles to come to the protagonist later. He can obviously get by slowly, but he has no strength to say some unnecessary words. The whole article seems to be copied from other places. There are many incoherent and incoherent plots, from beginning to end, east and west. It was okay at the beginning, and the frame structure seemed okay. From 1956 to 1977, it seemed a little baffling. I weakly asked the author, since the aristocratic family doesn't want to be good to the common people, is the aristocratic family a noble family from the beginning? Wouldn't it be better to go from a commoner to a noble family? Why do you come to the protagonist and hold on to him?

The improvement of the male protagonist is too slow and unreasonable. It's so stupid to describe a wealthy family as why they didn't send out the strongest to eliminate all threats.

The pace is slow and the details are cumbersome and useless, but at least there is no plot where the characters lose their wits.

If you understand at a young age that elders and younger people are superior to each other, they are not like things in the pond. What the hell are you writing?

I quit after reading a few words 😅

The writing is very confusing, adding points is not like adding points, and proficiency is not like proficiency.

I don't feel like there's much to see at the moment. Nothing cool

It's a bit like me using Tao seeds to cast immortality. I cut that one off. I hope you can do well.

It can only be said to be rubbish It took me a long time to write but I didn't even come up with the protagonist's character I can't even shape the character.

Dumb, the aristocratic family has no morals. I, the time traveler, want to carry forward the red spirit and liberate the world. However, the protagonist was thinking about the society before he traveled.

I would like to ask everyone if my writing pace has been a bit slow recently! Please reply!