American Comics: Copying Superman's Powers from the Start

When did Lucifer become so weak? Not to mention you are not a superman. Even the golden super was defeated by Lucifer. It is not of the same magnitude. I don't understand how Lucifer, the number one person under DC God, can fight the protagonist back and forth. It stands to reason that you have to die eight hundred times if he blows a breath. And Dr. Manhattan, what qualifications does he have to intervene in Lucifer's battle? After only a few chapters, his combat power begins to collapse.

This comment really hit the nail on the head. Chapter 29 is difficult to evaluate. It's ridiculously awkward

I just came here to watch the plot of "Smallville", but the main character created by the author is tasked with teasing Superman and Batman. The main character behaves stupidly and preaches in various ways, which is extremely awkward. He insists on being an ideological teacher for others. He pretends to be stupid but doesn't pretend well. Without being polite, the biggest poisonous point is that the story is not pleasant. The world view should be based on Smallville, but the author pursues something dark, deep, and very funny. When describing the protagonist, he must mention his beautiful eyes. Is he a female author? Describe it this way. The image of the protagonist cannot be established, and the character image is empty. You just copied Superman's abilities in high school and defeated Lucifer in a one-on-one fight. This was too abrupt and his combat power collapsed. Why did Dr. Manhattan give him a mask? You also like to pull it off to look like a Rorschach mask. Do you think the mask is cool? Can Dr. Manhattan's abilities allow you to go to the world of "Transformers"? It would be difficult for God to do it, but if you say it's a system's ability, it's feasible. The author doesn't understand the DC worldview. He always emphasizes that you should buy DC comics to understand the plot. It's really funny. You can just follow the TV series and speculate on the plot. If you don't have the ability, don't write about other worldviews. I just came to watch the casual plot of "Smallville" to pass the time, not to read your chuunibyou fantasies.

I don't know how to put it, but the Kryptonian gene is always awakening, but there is no super brain, so I won't go into it. How can a super brain handle complicated super hearing without a super brain? If there is one, why not use it?

After copying Lucifer, it is almost in the top ten of DC's combat power. Basically, DC can go sideways, restart the universe, travel through the timeline, and modify the rules. It's all instinctive. How come it took so long to fight without destroying a city? People of this level can destroy the earth in the first second even with fists, and spread to the galaxy in the second. It doesn't take ten seconds to restart the universe.

The protagonist is a person with a defective IQ

The shortcomings are copied. . . . After more than ten years, even the heat vision has not been awakened, so there is probably no biological standpoint. . I was given a golden finger and a yoke. .

To be honest, I don't recommend that you add any "anti-Japanese drama". If you prefer realistic historical war themes, this will be a plus, but this is a fanfic. The "China" in Marvel created by a group of Americans with obvious prejudice really has no sympathy. The only thing that the American Xiao Ming has in common with the Chinese Xiao Ming is that they are both called Xiao Ming. Besides, you are infinite. If this world is messed up, the next world and the next world will have to come too. The modern Yasukuni God's toilet in Japan is also worshiping. Why is the Transformers world so merciful? Just thinking about it, you have left a lot of holes.

The writing is good. I just want to write about some people who appear as saints and have the status of angels. They are so powerful. Think about what to do next. You can't stay in a small town forever, or build up a force to fight the new gods, have trouble with the old gods, and have fun. Come on, the writing is good.

It's so boring. The protagonist wants to become stronger, but in the end he keeps writing useful but useless things. He keeps letting kryptonite mutate people and then come to trouble the protagonist.