Sea of Stars: Starting with a Digitized Fleet

I came in after reading the introduction, and the more I read, the more familiar I became. I clicked on the author's page, and sure enough I had read the previous book. This book, like the previous one, looked good at first, but gradually I didn't want to read it anymore. The reason is that it is a cycle of saving civilization. Short stories can work, but long stories cannot. It feels good all the time, too much. The world view is huge, and it's just one of the cool things. It doesn't describe the universe, dimensions, technology, and civilization.

They are all old viewers. Since this is a sequel, the author can hand over some details to the readers to make reasonable guesses. The author himself said that only the protagonist in the whole book can be digitized, and that should be before the Fourth Era. According to the first two books, the First Era should be the process of human beings rising to become a hegemonic civilization. The Second Era should not have broken through to the age-level civilization, but the four major superpowers are estimated to have the strength of the overlord-level civilization. It is not impossible for the entire Star Sea Human Alliance to forcefully reach the age-level civilization. The strength of the Third Era is completely unknown. It is basically not mentioned in the first two books. The superpowers of the Fourth Era must be years-level civilizations. The top powers already have the strength of overlord-level civilizations. In the Fifth Era, very few powerful countries have the strength of the years-level civilization. The superpowers can conquer the universe, and there must be more than just the years-level civilization. This book has a psionic commander, a strategic level system, a proper overlord-level civilization and above, but it is not as good as the digitized fleet that appeared after the fourth era. It is speculated to be in the second or third era. However, the author also said that only the protagonist in the book can be digitized. It is speculated that it is more likely to be in the second era, because it is obvious that the digitized fleet and star network after the fourth era are upgraded versions of the combination of psionic commanders, spiritual networks and digitization. If it is in the third era, it is impossible for the Star Sea Human Alliance not to study digitization and apply it. The author has learned from the experience of the first two books. After the world view is infinitely expanded, if the writing power cannot be controlled, there will only be meaningless numerical expansion. There is no need to write the protagonist as a top powerhouse or a peerless genius. The protagonist's cheats can completely allow the protagonist to participate in various important events through the alliance. The other thing is to stop writing about the youth competition, or try to write it as briefly as possible. To be honest, I think the first two books started to collapse after writing about the youth competition. After the competition, I wrote a lot about the protagonist to improve his strength, and the alliance played a finishing role. I have always read the previous book as two protagonists, one is the protagonist himself, and the other is the Star Sea Human Alliance. When the length of the protagonist is infinitely compressed and reduced to a supporting role, this book also leaves my daily must-read. Finally, the author should work hard and strive to exceed 10,000 monthly votes and one million words as soon as possible. The next great author is you!

It is recommended that you add numbers to the settlement chapter and write down the harvest in detail (the more important thing is the real number settlement each time, development rewards, etc.) This number still doesn't matter. Otherwise, it would be very annoying to not know what was settled every time a dungeon was released. It is recommended to read the settlement chapter of Samsara Paradise. Spend two or three chapters dedicated to harvesting and upgrading. Of course, a big chapter will do. I took a look and found that you don't write much about the data. You just write it spread out. If there is a little bit in each chapter, it will seem very impactful. Also, the exercises need to be decided as soon as possible, and don't hang your appetite. I mention it from time to time but never resolve it. I feel like it comes up one after another, and the viewing experience is not good. The next expansion of the legion must be well written, with different crystal universes, different enemies, and different compatriots. Hope it's wonderful. The subsequent weapon attacks or high-definition attacks should be described a little more and use your imagination. The current battleship bombardment feels a bit dry.

StarNet: Digitization? Bring it to you.

It'll be a month tomorrow. I'm really convinced. If you want to do it, just say it. Use the defense as an excuse to ask for leave and wait for a month.

Keep it in your mind, it's hard, okay? I am not responsible at all, and I have received money anyway. No matter what, I just say that the writing failed, I can't write, something is happening, etc. Personally, I don't care. Of course, some people will scold me, but at least there will be less scolding people. Don't you dare to face it? Many authors are like this, annoying! Or are you saying that you can't get away from anything in reality? Then can you please leave a separate chapter when you are done or settled?

Suddenly I found an old man from the bookshelf. He asked for leave for half a month and then cut the last one. He did not say "cut" before cutting but said "ask for leave". I don't know how many new book friends I have deceived into this. His character is really not good.

As expected, you are an old bastard. Your last book was unfinished. This one must not be unfinished.

It seems that I definitely failed the defense and I have to prepare for the second defense.

Doesn't the editor care about this situation?