The World of Pirates Begins with Taking in Robin

I can still read this book if I lose my mind, but the general loses so quickly. What should I write next?

It's normal for people to be naughty when it comes to others, but it's normal for them to be naughty when it comes to things. It makes my head hurt to look at it. You betrayed Robin, and then you didn't do anything to get people to trust you. Are your thoughts normal?

Author, your beginning is really hard to describe. You should introduce Goldfinger to trick Robin better, otherwise it will give people the feeling that the protagonist is both important and independent.

I don't know anything else, but I know that pirates are definitely evil.

It's a rubbish novel. If it weren't for the fact that the starting point couldn't be divided equally, I would give you a low score.

I suggest you revise the first chapter, as it affects reading a lot.

The Celestial Dragons have been overthrown, so don't lick Luffy and Blackbeard. It's boring to force them to live now. It's better to just let Luffy and Blackbeard die.

That's rubbish enough, betraying Robin directly without any guarantee or communication. 🤮🤮🤮🤮

Spreading skills to pirates before the war is a bad move. How many people can learn it? How many people can use it in battle? These guys were originally positioned as consumables, but now they have become "partners" who are preached. Will these pirates still use the protagonist's skills to shine and make the protagonist awesome? Could it be that the protagonist's mind is biased toward scum after hanging out with scum for a long time? Wouldn't it be better to just give them giant potions with stronger effects and side effects?

The title of the book should be changed to Pirates Starting from Killing Robin. This would be a better development than what you are writing now.

If there was no golden finger in time travel, then I would still hope to live under the rule of the navy or a world government member country. It must be because the life of gold in the sky is not good. It is better than being a pirate, or better than being a non-member country. The best life for civilians is under the rule of aunt , or it's just an empty island Although the navy is the lackey of the Draco, it also fights against pirates. It cannot be just because there is no bottom line to protect the evil Draco, or because the Ax King Monka, mice and other rubbish think that the navy deserves to die, the navy is generally on the side of justice.

From now on, this is a real world where everyone can die. Why can't we stop licking pig's feet? Among people who like fan fiction, one of the most speechless things is licking. You can't lie to those who can't be killed. Forget about the Holy Mother. I think the first chapter is very well written. It doesn't drag on. Do you think it's just a short time? How can you gain trust? Are you Luffy who has activated the wisdom halo?

What the hell is today's introduction? It's all about Naruto and Pirates. I don't want to read it once I read the introduction.

When it's over, hang up the book.

Let Zefa and the recruits beat up the Celestial Dragons and take photos of them and send them to the Celestial Dragons.

Why is it that except for Robin, who is Bai Zetsu's clone skill, the others have become characters?

This first chapter is so poisonous

After watching it for more than half an hour, I was still bored.

Why is this new book investment always 82?

"One Piece: Becoming the King of the World from the Age of Rocks" If you are short on books, you can read this book. It is a very interesting and novel pirate fanfic. This book stretches the timeline to before Rocks attacks the Valley of the Gods. The protagonist Li Yuan has his own domineering body-tempering secret "Sword God Body Tempering Art". Rise up in the Rocks Pirates, become a cadre, and plunder the property of the Celestial Dragons in the Valley of Gods. After the Battle of the Valley of the Gods, participate in the New World Hegemony and occupy Wano Country. Become the world's greatest swordsman and dominate the new world with Whitebeard and others. The protagonist has four children, Stephens-Gane, Wei Zhuang, Esdeath, and Chi Tong. They are all great swordsmen, competing with Hawkeye and Red Hair...

In the world of pirates, it is said that the navy is better than pirates. The first thing ordinary people hate is pirates. The master actually accepts pirates who do all kinds of evil and leads them to revolution. This book has not been published yet.

Robin seems to be about the same age as Smoker