Concept Walker Walking in the Heavens

The protagonist is a dedicated and good man in the eyes of others Protagonist: I only love you in this world People from other worlds are not counted

There is Goldfinger, and the companion next to him is Tony, who died in Avengers 4. He has been criticizing Tony in the previous chapters. The protagonist has an inexplicable sense of superiority, as if his brain stem is missing.

The protagonist is like a supporting character who suppresses intelligence. He says that he is not capable of sharing information and conceals the key. If the team develops normally, the team will get into trouble because of the information. Do not work alone, trust or not, you know the opponent deeply, so there is nothing difficult to choose. Moreover, in modern society, serial crimes are committed, and people know how to add complications. This is how common supporting characters create ups and downs in the plot. Yes, but very annoying It is also lower than normal people's action logic, very unreal, It's uncomfortable to watch╯╰ The characters are uncomfortable, the plot is uncomfortable, I can't stand it just by looking at the ability development

After reading six chapters, I couldn't stand it anymore. What the hell. Looking at the front, I think it's quite creative. I got tired of looking at it later. I can't stand yo-yo anymore

Since you can gain proficiency and learn skills, why not learn some skills in the mission world? Are there any prerequisites?

See Chapter 128. The protagonist actually gave birth to a child. I'm really speechless. This is a world of infinite flow. You will probably not be able to return to the original world in the future, so you have to have a child. Tsk tsk tsk, I really have nothing to say.

This subject matter is good. Is there any similar one? This one is too bad.

The slaughter of bad books starts with me. The author of the curse collapses at the speed of light

Tony has become a father, so he doesn't care about that much.

I thought that the author could use these two skills to do some tricks, but it turned out that these two skills did not play any role in the plot. The author clearly came up with interesting ideas, but could not apply them to the novel. In this case, the author still has 20,000 years left before he wants to write an interesting novel.

Give me more energy There are bad people among the masses. After reading two chapters, I found that some readers are really good at taking quotes out of context, which makes people suspect that they are trolls. 1. About mocking Tony. It's clear that Tony is mocking the protagonist, and do you think Tony is a perfect person? That guy has a bad mouth, is arrogant, and has a lot of other problems. It is because of his personal heroism and consciousness that his flaws are revealed. Tony taunted the protagonist, "If I don't punch you, I'll give you the honor of a hero. Is it too much to rebound?" 2. Regarding not going to Guiwangda but going to the sports center. It's really weird to take it out of context. Of course the protagonist went to Gui Wangda to practice ancient martial arts, but Gui Wangda's bear-like appearance is not safe at all! So Tony wants to make the Extremis virus, and doesn't making the virus cost money? ! Going to the sports center is engaging in private equity and illegal fundraising. (Of course it is illegal to have no documents)

How can I say that the creativity is very good and the idea is very good but what the author wrote is just a mess. The characterization is even more impressive I can't stand it

I really didn't understand what it meant to steal a car at the beginning. I thought it would be better to rob a bank if the task was less difficult.

I don't know why the third world doesn't sprinkle sugar. Level 2 can directly pry several kilograms of items. Referring to the conceptual lock-picking of level 3, sugar-spreading level 3 will probably also have qualitative changes. According to the effect of level 2, it is not surprising that you can directly scatter electrons at level 3. So I'm afraid that if I give the protagonist invincible skills, it will be difficult to write the following, right?

This book won't be a hit, I'm telling you

The creativity is great, but you can't be so nonsensical just because the subject matter is nonsensical! And what you wrote was not a joke! It's the gods! The heavens that confuse people are not good heavens.

Tony's IQ of 999 was weakened to 9 by you, the author, and turned into a puppet, which is very uncomfortable. Can Pig's Feet just go to Ghost King Da to learn ancient Chinese boxing techniques? In the Global Sports Center, there is a hairy Chinese ancient boxing box directly in judo, kendo, taekwondo and western boxing.

The writing is poor, making it a bit difficult to read.

Rubbish books, talking about creativity, but the creativity is not good, there are no flowers that others want to play with in vain, it is also a concept book, you can squeeze out toothpaste and be creative. The plot arrangement is not outstanding, and the character creation is not good, and it also uses forced intelligence. Just let Shi Dake be the protagonist instead.

From the introduction, you can see the feeling of weakness of a novice writer. When I opened the book circle, I saw that it was full of curses. However, seeing that despite this, the author still insisted on updating more than 800,000 words, I can only say that the author is in a really good mood. Although I still don't plan to read it, I still want to cheer the author on here. I wish the author better and better results in the future!

Why do I feel that Teacher Tony is more like a pig's foot?

Where will the author go in the next world? Which one is better between Final Fantasy 7 and Godslayer and Blood Raid?

Author, your protagonist really looks like an orangutan.

The author is great. If I write a manga in my next book and give the protagonist abilities, I recommend the nen system in Hunter. This is the best power system I have ever seen. It is better and more scientific than the Haki of Pirates and the chakra in Naruto. It can develop a promising and interesting nen ability for the protagonist.

Is the author here? When will the new book be released?

The author, when will the new book be released? What subject matter do you write about?

It's November. Are you ready for your new book? When will it be released?

Great author, why did I stop updating after a few days of raising it? Where will it go to the next world?

It's the end of the month, why haven't you published a new book yet?

If you don't know how to write, get out of here. It's all this nonsense.